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Young Love: Chapter Four
“Yeah—I guess I had that coming.” She smiled weakly.
“You didn’t deserve that. She can be such a bitch.”
“I thought you were her friend.”
“Uh no—she was only my friend because she was dating you.” Bette smiled.
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“Do you think your friends are going to like me?” Carmen looked at Shane.
“Of course they will, you already met Alice, and she likes you.” Carmen nodded.
“Yeah you’re right.” Shane pulled up in front of Alice’s house and parked the car. They both got out of Shane’s black Mercedes convertible and walked to the door. Shane rang the doorbell, and Alice opened the door.
“Hey—,” Shane nodded, and Alice looked at Carmen. “Glad to see you could make it. Come in.” Alice moved out of the way and let them walk in.
“Where’s mom?” Alice sighed and rolled her eyes.
“She’s around here somewhere drinking herself in a stupor.” Carmen walked behind the two ladies as they made their way into the den where Dana, Bette, Mark and Gomey were talking amongst each other and the instruments sat up in the room behind them. Shane looked around and looked at Bette.
“Where’s the wife?” She took a seat on the love seat, and Bette shook her head.
“The wife and I are no longer together.”
“Get out of here—is this true?” Shane smiled.
“It’s true. I was there to see it all happen, and then Tina threw water in her face.” Alice nodded.
“Ouch,” Shane shook her head.
“It was time to tell her that I didn’t want to be with her anymore and that was what I get.” Bette sighed. Carmen looked at Shane and cleared her throat.
Shane looked up at her. “Oh, sorry where are my manners.” She stood up next to her. “Everyone meet Carmen. Carmen, that’s Dana—the star tennis player of the school.” Dana smiled and waved. “That is Bette—the brainiac of the group.” Bette waved. “That is Mark—he’s the only guy who hangs around in our group. He’s like a brother to me.” Mark nodded. “And that’s his friend Gomey—he’s our band mate.” He smiled and nodded. “You’ve already met Alice.”
“Hello again,” Alice smiled.
“The only person were missing is Miss Helena Peabody. Where is she by the way?”
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I can’t believe Tina threw water in Bette’s face! I mean, she was being nice in breaking up with her, she wasn’t being really mean or anything, just telling her the truth…love the dana and Alice bits…nice…pps
Alice and Dana :D But Tina as a bitch? :( Was that really necessary? Just kidding, love the story.
breaking up is hard to do as dana and alice…way 2 go…
cool Alice and Dana getting together and Bette breaking up with tina thats even better.Thanks for the post please post more soon
Highschool it sometimes seems like it was yesterday. I must say I’m enjoying reading the development of each character. Excellent update! Now you have me craving some cheese fries.
how cute! PPS!
Ah Dana and Al kiss, Iloved them when they were a couple….and well Bette finally broke it up thanks with some help from Marina. Bt didnt see the way Tna wouldreact, but yeah Idid see that too,,LOL. Now I see the Carmen is happy seems she is part of the gang. And I want to see how both Bette and Helena will interact when Helena finds out that Bette is now single? Great chapter aki
Very cute!!! Thanks PPS