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Young Love: Chapter Thirteen
“Me? Why did he invite me?”
“Well he invited my boyfriend.” Carmen did the air quotations and smiled. “He doesn’t know that I’m gay Shane. I didn’t tell him that I was dating you.”
“All right,” Shane nodded. “I’ll go.” She smirked.
“Really? You want to go.”
“Mmmhmm.” She nodded again and stubbed out her cigarette.
“Well he’s supposed to come and get us from here after the game.”
“Okay, then we’ll wait for him.”
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Dana had got out of the shower after her first win. She smiled as she walked to her locker and began to get dressed.
“Dana,” she looked up and covered herself up.
“Al—what are you doing in here? I’m trying to get dressed.” Alice smirked as Dana tried to hide her mild embarrassment.
“You don’t have to hide herself—I’ve already seen your,” she looked Dana from her smooth, tanned legs up to her chest. “Goodies,” she sauntered her way over to her girlfriend. Dana smiled softly and leaned up against the locker. “But seriously, I came in here for a reason once again.”
“What will that reason be?” Alice stood next to Dana and grabbed her hand. She dropped her head and sighed. “What’s wrong babe?”
Alice smiled and looked up at her. “I love you Dana.” Dana felt her heart fluttered in her chest. “I love you.” Dana leaned forward and kissed Alice softly. She caressed her cheek and raked her fingers through her hair. She pulled away and smiled brightly.
“I love you too,” Alice grinned, and Dana pulled her into another kiss.
“Dana! Dana darling where are you?” Dana pulled away from Alice.
“Shit! It’s my mom! You have to go—hide somewhere.”
“Where can I go?” Alice began to look around.
“Go behind the lockers,” Alice ran around the corner as Sharon approached Dana.
“You’re not ready yet?”
Dana smiled faintly. “No—but I’m finishing up.”
“You were wonderful out there.” Sharon rested her hand on Dana’s shoulder. “You made me and your father very, very proud.”
“Thanks mom,” Sharon smiled softly.
“I’ll let you finish up, and we’ll take you out tonight for dinner.”
“Okay,” Dana nodded, and Sharon walked away. She slipped into her jeans. “Alice,” she called out for her girlfriend’s name. “Al?” She walked around the lockers, and Alice was gone. She sighed and continued to get dress.
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Aki didnt expect a chapter today, and I liked it. Poor Al having to hide when Sharon comes and leaves before saying bye to Dana. Shane is really into Carmen and you see a softer side to Shane, she is cool, and loyal to her friends and family but she finally sound somehting worth while and its Carmem. And I always love to leave my fav couple for the last…I see that Bette and Helena are realing falling for one another. Cause it was so sweet,loving and tender when all Helena wanted to do was just lay on the bed hugging and feeling Bettes skin on her’s nothing more, that was sweet. GReat chapter aki.
“She rubbed her nose against hers, and Carmen giggled softly.” Okay, that’s gotta be one of the cutest lines I’ve ever read. Digging the story.
I loved it, didn’t expect a post today, but I’m glad. Love Shane’s softer side, and Helena and Bette are cute. Poor Al, but if she loves her she has to be patient.
I loved it, didn’t expect a post today, but I’m glad. Love Shane’s softer side, and Helena and Bette are cute. Poor Al, but if she loves her she has to be patient.
great update! love reading your stuff!
Akira, nice move of how you got rid of Drew. Shane’s little love confession made sense. I wonder if it is too soon for B to move in with H. Though, it was great to see everyone helping H move. What a nice group of friends! A stood out again with all her complaints and I loved it. Any Danish interruptions were fine with me. It would just make the final connection so much better. You are right those two were so cute. I can never read enough about Danish love. Thank you Akira.
great chapter, loved it as usual:)
love this story!!!!! i feel a little sorry for alice though i cant help feel shes gunna get hurt is she?!!? lol hope not neways ur story rocks!!
shane’s confession is sweet, then they are getting closer to the bedroom? no, i mean it’s time for carmen to confess, it’d be super sweet too :)PPS!!