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Young Love: Chapter Thirty-Two
“All right—I’ll do it, but you’ll owe me big time.” Dana shrieked and wrapped her arms around him and gave him a kiss on the cheek. “Oh gross—girly germs!”
“Oh shut up,” Dana chuckled.
“Carmen?” Carmen looked up and saw Kandi.
“Hi,” she pushed a strand of hair behind her ear. “What are you doing here?”
“I’m come here for time to time, and I get in free cause my cousin works here on the weekends.”
Dana cleared her throat. “Are you going to introduce us to your new friend?”
“Kandi—these are my friends Bette, Helena, Dana and Harrison. Ladies—this is Kandi. I met her the other night at work.”
“Nice to meet you ladies and gentleman.”
“I’m a lady,” Harrison latched his tongue around his straw and took a drink of his soda. Kandi smiled softly.
“So can I join you guys?”
“Sure,” Kandi pulled out a chair and took a seat next to Carmen.
Shane was hooking up her guitar as the crowd waiting for their performance. Alice came walking towards with Camille in tow.
“Hey you guys,” everybody looked up. “I want you to meet someone. Shane, Mark, Gomey this is Camille. She’s trying out for a spot in the band.”
“What? Why?” Gomey spoke up.
“She approached me at a record store and told me how much she loves us. She wants a spot in this band, and I told her that she could. Does anybody else have a problem with that?”
“I don’t have a problem with it,” Shane shrugged.
“Go for it, good luck Camille.” Mark nodded.
“Thanks.” She smiled. Alice patted her shoulder and smiled. Camille walked over to the keyboard set up and stood behind it. Alice walked over to her guitar and grabbed it. She placed the strap on her shoulder as Shane turned the amp on.
“What’s up with you?” She looked over at her.
“Nothing,” she sighed.
“Something is bothering you I know.” She began to strum at her guitar a little. “You want to talk about it.”
“Not really,” Shane stood up. “Maybe later.” Alice nodded. “I got a song,” Alice looked up.
“You got a song? Really?”
Shane nodded. “Yeah,” she smiled softly. “And I want to sing it.”
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Hey Aki, I loved this chapter and the song was awesome and better that Shane had sang to too with so much feeling. But I see a forshadow named Kandi,,LOL. And I am kinda skeptical about this Cammi, could she be a new love interest for Jenny? Oh and as for Dana she will be in so much trouble with Al IMO,,,this was a great chapter and loved it!!
Great chap,but damn your killing me with Shane/Carmen! :)
Whoa, D better watch out. Karma, dude! Hope it would not bite her back. Harrison was a true good friend to D. Camille joined the band. Yeh! Shane singing was priceless. The group was certainly growing. I can’t wait to read more how things would unfold. Great update. Thanks AKcb.
Wow am I really first??? This was a great one again Akcb, I guess we’re in for some more drama between Shane & Carmen huh? Keep those chapters coming dearie!!
yay, i’ve missed this story. i like how b and h are the sage advice givers. sweeeet. sharmen/cane indeedy! i’m going to call them cane, and say bring it on! pps
So excited to see another chapter on this story, Akcb! I am a bit concerned about Camille and how she is going to fit in with the group. I’m curious to see how Dana explains things to Alice. I do love Harrison. It’s always fun to see him pop up in stories. Thanks for the new chapter!
Dana better get her butt in gear and tell Al before someone else does. I hope harrison sticks to his side of the deal and helps out. Shane needs to chill her pants. Carmen is a good girllove the story Akira Keep it up
i love your story…i guess shane is going to give carmen a little bit of her own medicine with the bitter pill of jealousy…but i guess that means that shane actually cares