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Young Love: Chapter Two
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Tina got up from the table and to go find Bette. She pushed her way back through the crowd and walked over to the counter.
DEAD!
The crowd cheered and whistled as the song ended. Helena and Dana screamed and cheered their friends as they stood in the front.
“Thank you!” Alice screamed into the microphone. She, Shane and Gomey took off their guitars and walked off the stage with Mark behind them. Dana and Helena walked over to their friends and gave them hugs.
“You guys were amazing.” Helena hugged Alice and pulled away.
“You guys were great; you looked really good up there Al.” Dana grinned and nodded.
“Thanks Dana,” Alice smiled.
“Hey we’re going to get drinks.” Mark and Gomey walked off.
“Hey,” the girls looked up, and Shane noticed the caramel skin girl was standing in front of them.
“Hey.” Shane smiled.
“You were really great up there. I like watching you play.” She smiled softly.
“Thanks,” Helena grabbed Alice’s hand, and Alice grabbed Dana’s. The three girls walked away as Shane talked to the new girl.
“So you’re from the OC huh?”
Shane nodded. “Yeah, are you from East LA?”
She nodded. “Yeah, but I’m moving to Laguna Beach with my rich aunt and her husband—my mom put me off on her because she says East LA isn’t where I need to be.” She laughed softly, and Shane smiled. “I’m Carmen.”
“Shane,” she shook Carmen’s hand.
“So—I was wondering since I was moving to Laguna Beach soon, maybe you can show me a round a little bit.”
“Really? You want me to show you around. We just met.”
Carmen nodded. “I know, but I seem like I can trust you.”
“Sure, I would love–.”
“You were awesome tonight Shane,” a girl came over to Shane and wrapped her arms around her neck. She gave her a kiss on the cheek, and Shane smiled faintly.
“Thank you Shelly.” The girl smiled and looked at Carmen. She looked her up and down and rolled her eyes. “Carmen—this is Shelly Taylor. We go to school together.”
“Oh,” Carmen nodded. “It’s nice to meet you Shelly.”
“Likewise,” she smiled mockingly. “Are we going to dance?” She looked at Shane.
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Gee what crawled up Tina’s ass.I like this story too.Don’t neglect your other story cause that’s good too.
This is such a BeLena fic.. Which means Tina is going to be conveyed as the uber-bitch. *sigh* well at least I’m prepared and at least the writing is good :)
ACB, I am liking this take of the youth of the gang. There is a real whacked out humor here. THe attraction between Bette and Helena is interesting and evident as Tina can testify. Tina needs to sort her shit with Bette out now. Loved the rest of the gang and the whole band scenario. More please. Thank you for this new story. Your Loyal Fan.
Aki I could so see Shane and AL up on stage rocking. And I see that Bette and Tina are about to call it quits,(YES),LOL. Dana well what can I say she is Dana and loved how Helena called her on liking Al, cool. Then again I like Helena.
oh shits going down hill for Bette and Tina,Shane and CArmen i like thank you, and Alice and Dana their coming together :), and Helena i hope her and bette get together cause i like helena over Tina ,but thats just my thouhghts thanks again please post soon
I was just in the middle or reading your other older stories. I can picture Alice and Shane on stage being cool and having a blast. Did you use this song because of Dana? So far so good. Love seeing them getting into trouble and getting out of it. pps.