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Completely Incomplete – (Chapter: 17)
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When I awoke the next morning, I wasn’t surprised to find the bed otherwise empty. But I was surprised to find that over the course of the past 8 hours, my throat had begun to kill. Groaning, I sat up and rubbed my eyes, adjusting to the light. I heard noise outside my room, though, and figured she must have actually stayed. I got up despite what I could feel would, by the end of the day, be a pounding headache, and walked out. Ashley was in the kitchen, beginning to cook something.
“Hey,” I said. She looked up and smiled at me.
“Hey,” she replied. “Pancakes okay?” I nodded in response. “Benny’s been taken out.”
“Thank you.”
“No problem.” I filled up a pot with water and placed it on the stove to boil it. “What are you doing?”
“Making tea?”
“Let me do it.”
“No, Ash, really, I can handle it. It’s just boiling water,” I insisted.
“Are you sick?”
“Not really.”
“What’s wrong?”
“Sore throat, headache… probably just getting a cold,” I told her.
“Why don’t you go lie down? I’ll bring it to you when it’s done.”
“Oh, no, it’s okay-“
“Let me rephrase that. Lie down,” she said, smiling.
“Fine,” I conceded, although I really wasn’t complaining. I was feeling pretty crappy. I got back into bed, though, and sure enough, Ashley walked in a few minutes later with a plate of pancakes and a mug of tea.
“Breakfast is served,” she grinned.
“You’re the best.” She handed me the plate and placed the mug on my nightstand. She then sat down at the edge of my bed. “You’re not eating?”
“Nah, I’m not that hungry.”
“Come on, have a little. I’m not gonna eat all of these.”
“Maybe later,” she replied. I shrugged and took a few bites; she’d done it again.
“So good,” I told her, through mouthfuls of pancake. She smiled and continued to watch me eat.
“So, um… I was thinking…” she began.
“Mmhm?”
“Well, last night… um… maybe- maybe we went a little too far, you know? Maybe we, um… shouldn’t have… done that.” I stopped eating and looked at her, but she was staring down.
“Okay…” was all I could say.
“I think we kind of, like, crossed the boundaries of… friendship. And right now, I mean, we both know that friendship is really all we can expect.” Suddenly, I lost my appetite. She was right. She was totally right. But that didn’t stop it from hurting.
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pssssssssssssssssst…..continue *whispers* please?
Omg. You are amazing. Please, PLEASE make Ashley jealous some more. I just love that. I don’t know why but it so freaking amazing. And I too was half expecting a call from Michelle. There should be one next post, maybe. Youu’re the author so you decide. Just update soon and often. I love this story so much. and the discussion thing…if I had to guess I’d say they did it to be ironic…or maybe when there is really bad traffic you might as well be parked on the parkway. I have no idea as you can see by my pathetic attempt to actually have some sort of discussion. It didn’t work.I should stick to what I’m good at. Reading your updates. PMS. (make ash jealous and make michelle call) those are my only requests. It doesn’t all have to happen in the next post but the sooner the better, in my opinion.
P.S.- I LOVE THIS STORY! UPDATE ASAP. YOU’RE SO AMAZING!!!!!!!
um, Hi, my name’s Clark Kent. A uh, friend of mine pointed me in your general direction. He said I’d like what i found. and dear he was right. Slight jealous tension. I understand that completely. See there’s this lady that works with me. I’d rather not say her name. When ever other men go near her, i get so jealous. Even if there is no real reason. I do my best to hide it. I just push my glasses up my nose and straighten my time. As for parkways and driveways I have no idea. I dont need a car. Well, I have to go to the Daily Planet now. Hope to read your lovely literature soon.
awe. I love Ashley. And Spencer. … And Benny. And Michelle, because she hooked Ash and Spencer back up, so I’m just full with love. And, i definitely, love you the most. Very very much, for this awesome post.love
Okay, so, I usually comment on the other page and I’ll continue to do so, but I couldn’t help but share the love here. LOVE THIS FIC! :)
urghh i dun think ash has the right to be jealous when she clearly state that a relationship with spence is not going to work now. shessh. and poor spence who wanted so much but got so little. she’s been living just half a empty life too long. too bad carrie is taken if not i would like to see just how cool she and spence would be. just to get ash jealous and see the freaking light!!! update soon!! plssss.
Oh my lord, I got a shout out in your authors notes. That’s like… unbelievable. Cos you’re like famous. No kidding. There’s a whole thread on the discussion forum entitled “Have you read KozmicBlues fics?” and then a whole load of people going “Yeah… wow.” Anyway, back to your story… Master of Sexual Tension we bow to you. Ashley like Spencer, Spencer like Ashley. Carrie not actually involved, yet, Ashley jealous, Spencer not noticing… grr. I blame Benny. Ok, not really, but you know, at some point Ash and Spence have to face up to the fact they wanna have rampaging animal sex and then cuddle for the rest of eternity. Because without each other, they’re completely incomplete. We park on a driveway because if we drove on it, we’d knock the garage down. We drive on a parkway because if we parked on it, no one could get to where they’re going. Spencer and Ashley do kiss, but rarely, because the Republicans all have poles up their asses and head somewhere in outerspace. Not the most studious of answers, but you know, I have a headache today. OOh, I like these questions, can we have another one?
awesome post…yes ill admit i have been a lurker type thing for quite a while now..im innocent tho.its like this site is blocked from my comp..therefore i sneak on my cuzins comp when she is at work..lol..update soon
Well I’m not usually much good at random musings, but I think that technically, you still could drive in a driveway and park in a parkway. But as clomle said, neither of those would work so well. But aren’t parkways usually lined with trees and other greenery kind of stuff? I wouldn’t really know; they don’t have parkways where I live. So whenever someone asks me about this, I can only reply with “What the hell’s a parkway??” Anyways, you’ve done it again. That was an awesome post!
pssssssssssssssssst…..continue *whispers* please?
Omg. You are amazing. Please, PLEASE make Ashley jealous some more. I just love that. I don’t know why but it so freaking amazing. And I too was half expecting a call from Michelle. There should be one next post, maybe. Youu’re the author so you decide. Just update soon and often. I love this story so much. and the discussion thing…if I had to guess I’d say they did it to be ironic…or maybe when there is really bad traffic you might as well be parked on the parkway. I have no idea as you can see by my pathetic attempt to actually have some sort of discussion. It didn’t work.I should stick to what I’m good at. Reading your updates. PMS. (make ash jealous and make michelle call) those are my only requests. It doesn’t all have to happen in the next post but the sooner the better, in my opinion.
P.S.- I LOVE THIS STORY! UPDATE ASAP. YOU’RE SO AMAZING!!!!!!!
um, Hi, my name’s Clark Kent. A uh, friend of mine pointed me in your general direction. He said I’d like what i found. and dear he was right. Slight jealous tension. I understand that completely. See there’s this lady that works with me. I’d rather not say her name. When ever other men go near her, i get so jealous. Even if there is no real reason. I do my best to hide it. I just push my glasses up my nose and straighten my time. As for parkways and driveways I have no idea. I dont need a car. Well, I have to go to the Daily Planet now. Hope to read your lovely literature soon.
awe. I love Ashley. And Spencer. … And Benny. And Michelle, because she hooked Ash and Spencer back up, so I’m just full with love. And, i definitely, love you the most. Very very much, for this awesome post.love
Okay, so, I usually comment on the other page and I’ll continue to do so, but I couldn’t help but share the love here. LOVE THIS FIC! :)
urghh i dun think ash has the right to be jealous when she clearly state that a relationship with spence is not going to work now. shessh. and poor spence who wanted so much but got so little. she’s been living just half a empty life too long. too bad carrie is taken if not i would like to see just how cool she and spence would be. just to get ash jealous and see the freaking light!!! update soon!! plssss.
Oh my lord, I got a shout out in your authors notes. That’s like… unbelievable. Cos you’re like famous. No kidding. There’s a whole thread on the discussion forum entitled “Have you read KozmicBlues fics?” and then a whole load of people going “Yeah… wow.” Anyway, back to your story… Master of Sexual Tension we bow to you. Ashley like Spencer, Spencer like Ashley. Carrie not actually involved, yet, Ashley jealous, Spencer not noticing… grr. I blame Benny. Ok, not really, but you know, at some point Ash and Spence have to face up to the fact they wanna have rampaging animal sex and then cuddle for the rest of eternity. Because without each other, they’re completely incomplete. We park on a driveway because if we drove on it, we’d knock the garage down. We drive on a parkway because if we parked on it, no one could get to where they’re going. Spencer and Ashley do kiss, but rarely, because the Republicans all have poles up their asses and head somewhere in outerspace. Not the most studious of answers, but you know, I have a headache today. OOh, I like these questions, can we have another one?
awesome post…yes ill admit i have been a lurker type thing for quite a while now..im innocent tho.its like this site is blocked from my comp..therefore i sneak on my cuzins comp when she is at work..lol..update soon
Well I’m not usually much good at random musings, but I think that technically, you still could drive in a driveway and park in a parkway. But as clomle said, neither of those would work so well. But aren’t parkways usually lined with trees and other greenery kind of stuff? I wouldn’t really know; they don’t have parkways where I live. So whenever someone asks me about this, I can only reply with “What the hell’s a parkway??” Anyways, you’ve done it again. That was an awesome post!
Great chapter! I hope ash and spence figure that they’re just meant to be soon hehe! update soon!
Great chapter! I hope ash and spence figure that they’re just meant to be soon hehe! update soon!
I dont want them to be just friends. I want them to get there freak on and keep it on.I love your story. PMS
I dont want them to be just friends. I want them to get there freak on and keep it on.I love your story. PMS