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Completely Incomplete – (Chapter: 17)
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“Yeah, I know,” I replied despondently.
“It’s just… like, we can’t really be anything more than friends when we’re so far away from each other. It wouldn’t be fair… to either of us.”
“I know,” I said again.
“I wish things could be different, though, you know? I mean, I really do care about you, Spence.”
“I care about you, too.” She smiled again and actually blushed. The vulnerable side of Ashley was the one speaking, and while I usually loved to hear it, I wasn’t so sure this time.
“So… can we be friends?”
“I hope so.”
“Yeah… me too,” she replied. “But can we at least give it a try?”
“Yup.”
“Cool,” she said. I lifted up a piece of pancake with my fork, but realized I wasn’t hungry anymore and set it back down. “Want me to take that for you?”
“Thanks.” I handed it over and took a sip of the tea; it was still a little bit too hot to drink.
“I’m gonna head back to the hotel for a little… you know, to shower and change and everything.”
“Alright,” I replied. I wondered whether this was it… whether last night had pushed us too far to the point where she didn’t even want to stay around me anymore.
“Want me to get you anything on my way back?” Apparently, it hadn’t.
“No thanks.”
“Are you sure? Cold medicine, maybe?”
“No, I should be fine… but thank you.”
“Okay. Do you think I could borrow a sweatshirt or something, just to walk back in? I don’t feel like putting on my clothes from yesterday again.”
“Yeah, sure. There should be a few on the top shelf in my closet,” I told her. She walked into it and emerged with one of my Yale sweatshirts. I was happy she had chosen that, and not a Vanderbilt one. I don’t think I would have been able to handle the irony in that situation.
“Thanks. I’ll be back in a little. Get some rest, okay?”
“Alright. Bye Ash.”
I waited until I heard the sound of my front door close before I allowed the tears in my eyes to spill over. And I didn’t even know why I was crying. I mean, I knew. I just realized that I shouldn’t be crying. Why had I let myself expect so much? Ashley was right. Anything remotely resembling a relationship was completely unrealistic. So why was I so upset?
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pssssssssssssssssst…..continue *whispers* please?
Omg. You are amazing. Please, PLEASE make Ashley jealous some more. I just love that. I don’t know why but it so freaking amazing. And I too was half expecting a call from Michelle. There should be one next post, maybe. Youu’re the author so you decide. Just update soon and often. I love this story so much. and the discussion thing…if I had to guess I’d say they did it to be ironic…or maybe when there is really bad traffic you might as well be parked on the parkway. I have no idea as you can see by my pathetic attempt to actually have some sort of discussion. It didn’t work.I should stick to what I’m good at. Reading your updates. PMS. (make ash jealous and make michelle call) those are my only requests. It doesn’t all have to happen in the next post but the sooner the better, in my opinion.
P.S.- I LOVE THIS STORY! UPDATE ASAP. YOU’RE SO AMAZING!!!!!!!
um, Hi, my name’s Clark Kent. A uh, friend of mine pointed me in your general direction. He said I’d like what i found. and dear he was right. Slight jealous tension. I understand that completely. See there’s this lady that works with me. I’d rather not say her name. When ever other men go near her, i get so jealous. Even if there is no real reason. I do my best to hide it. I just push my glasses up my nose and straighten my time. As for parkways and driveways I have no idea. I dont need a car. Well, I have to go to the Daily Planet now. Hope to read your lovely literature soon.
awe. I love Ashley. And Spencer. … And Benny. And Michelle, because she hooked Ash and Spencer back up, so I’m just full with love. And, i definitely, love you the most. Very very much, for this awesome post.love
Okay, so, I usually comment on the other page and I’ll continue to do so, but I couldn’t help but share the love here. LOVE THIS FIC! :)
urghh i dun think ash has the right to be jealous when she clearly state that a relationship with spence is not going to work now. shessh. and poor spence who wanted so much but got so little. she’s been living just half a empty life too long. too bad carrie is taken if not i would like to see just how cool she and spence would be. just to get ash jealous and see the freaking light!!! update soon!! plssss.
Oh my lord, I got a shout out in your authors notes. That’s like… unbelievable. Cos you’re like famous. No kidding. There’s a whole thread on the discussion forum entitled “Have you read KozmicBlues fics?” and then a whole load of people going “Yeah… wow.” Anyway, back to your story… Master of Sexual Tension we bow to you. Ashley like Spencer, Spencer like Ashley. Carrie not actually involved, yet, Ashley jealous, Spencer not noticing… grr. I blame Benny. Ok, not really, but you know, at some point Ash and Spence have to face up to the fact they wanna have rampaging animal sex and then cuddle for the rest of eternity. Because without each other, they’re completely incomplete. We park on a driveway because if we drove on it, we’d knock the garage down. We drive on a parkway because if we parked on it, no one could get to where they’re going. Spencer and Ashley do kiss, but rarely, because the Republicans all have poles up their asses and head somewhere in outerspace. Not the most studious of answers, but you know, I have a headache today. OOh, I like these questions, can we have another one?
awesome post…yes ill admit i have been a lurker type thing for quite a while now..im innocent tho.its like this site is blocked from my comp..therefore i sneak on my cuzins comp when she is at work..lol..update soon
Well I’m not usually much good at random musings, but I think that technically, you still could drive in a driveway and park in a parkway. But as clomle said, neither of those would work so well. But aren’t parkways usually lined with trees and other greenery kind of stuff? I wouldn’t really know; they don’t have parkways where I live. So whenever someone asks me about this, I can only reply with “What the hell’s a parkway??” Anyways, you’ve done it again. That was an awesome post!
pssssssssssssssssst…..continue *whispers* please?
Omg. You are amazing. Please, PLEASE make Ashley jealous some more. I just love that. I don’t know why but it so freaking amazing. And I too was half expecting a call from Michelle. There should be one next post, maybe. Youu’re the author so you decide. Just update soon and often. I love this story so much. and the discussion thing…if I had to guess I’d say they did it to be ironic…or maybe when there is really bad traffic you might as well be parked on the parkway. I have no idea as you can see by my pathetic attempt to actually have some sort of discussion. It didn’t work.I should stick to what I’m good at. Reading your updates. PMS. (make ash jealous and make michelle call) those are my only requests. It doesn’t all have to happen in the next post but the sooner the better, in my opinion.
P.S.- I LOVE THIS STORY! UPDATE ASAP. YOU’RE SO AMAZING!!!!!!!
um, Hi, my name’s Clark Kent. A uh, friend of mine pointed me in your general direction. He said I’d like what i found. and dear he was right. Slight jealous tension. I understand that completely. See there’s this lady that works with me. I’d rather not say her name. When ever other men go near her, i get so jealous. Even if there is no real reason. I do my best to hide it. I just push my glasses up my nose and straighten my time. As for parkways and driveways I have no idea. I dont need a car. Well, I have to go to the Daily Planet now. Hope to read your lovely literature soon.
awe. I love Ashley. And Spencer. … And Benny. And Michelle, because she hooked Ash and Spencer back up, so I’m just full with love. And, i definitely, love you the most. Very very much, for this awesome post.love
Okay, so, I usually comment on the other page and I’ll continue to do so, but I couldn’t help but share the love here. LOVE THIS FIC! :)
urghh i dun think ash has the right to be jealous when she clearly state that a relationship with spence is not going to work now. shessh. and poor spence who wanted so much but got so little. she’s been living just half a empty life too long. too bad carrie is taken if not i would like to see just how cool she and spence would be. just to get ash jealous and see the freaking light!!! update soon!! plssss.
Oh my lord, I got a shout out in your authors notes. That’s like… unbelievable. Cos you’re like famous. No kidding. There’s a whole thread on the discussion forum entitled “Have you read KozmicBlues fics?” and then a whole load of people going “Yeah… wow.” Anyway, back to your story… Master of Sexual Tension we bow to you. Ashley like Spencer, Spencer like Ashley. Carrie not actually involved, yet, Ashley jealous, Spencer not noticing… grr. I blame Benny. Ok, not really, but you know, at some point Ash and Spence have to face up to the fact they wanna have rampaging animal sex and then cuddle for the rest of eternity. Because without each other, they’re completely incomplete. We park on a driveway because if we drove on it, we’d knock the garage down. We drive on a parkway because if we parked on it, no one could get to where they’re going. Spencer and Ashley do kiss, but rarely, because the Republicans all have poles up their asses and head somewhere in outerspace. Not the most studious of answers, but you know, I have a headache today. OOh, I like these questions, can we have another one?
awesome post…yes ill admit i have been a lurker type thing for quite a while now..im innocent tho.its like this site is blocked from my comp..therefore i sneak on my cuzins comp when she is at work..lol..update soon
Well I’m not usually much good at random musings, but I think that technically, you still could drive in a driveway and park in a parkway. But as clomle said, neither of those would work so well. But aren’t parkways usually lined with trees and other greenery kind of stuff? I wouldn’t really know; they don’t have parkways where I live. So whenever someone asks me about this, I can only reply with “What the hell’s a parkway??” Anyways, you’ve done it again. That was an awesome post!
Great chapter! I hope ash and spence figure that they’re just meant to be soon hehe! update soon!
Great chapter! I hope ash and spence figure that they’re just meant to be soon hehe! update soon!
I dont want them to be just friends. I want them to get there freak on and keep it on.I love your story. PMS
I dont want them to be just friends. I want them to get there freak on and keep it on.I love your story. PMS