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Completely Incomplete – (Chapter: 17)
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I decided to shower, which turned out to be the best decision I’d made so far. When I emerged, I felt refreshed and surprisingly energized. I half-expected Michelle to call, but it didn’t happen. Instead, I did what I always did when I was confused (or had nothing better to do). I put in a Sex and the City disc and started watching. Halfway into the second episode, though, I heard a knock at the door. I thought it was going to be Ashley, but when I opened it, I realized I was wrong.
“Hey Carrie!” I was kind of confused, since we’d never really progressed to actually seeing/being in each other’s apartments.
“Hi! I heard the t.v. on… thought I’d drop over to see what you’re doing.”
“Was it that loud?”
“A little, yeah,” she laughed.
“Jeez, I’m sorry. I kind of have a cold… I guess my ears are a little clogged up.”
“No worries. What are you watching?”
“Sex and the City.”
“Good choice!” she remarked. “Mind if I join?”
“Not at all,” I assured her. She smiled and we both sat down on the couch. I started on a new episode and we were off. At one point towards the end, Benny jumped up on the couch and sat in between us. He nuzzled his head into my lap, which tickled like crazy. I shrieked and got up as Carrie watched on, laughing hysterically. Benny thought it was a game and proceeded to basically chase me around. That was until someone knocked on the door, distracting him from me. I regained my composure, walked over and opened it… this time it was Ashley.
“Hey Ash.”
“Hey… what’s going on over here? I heard shrieks,” she laughed.
“Oh, um… Benny was just chasing me.”
“Chasing you?”
“Yeah.” She stepped in, her expression immediately changing when she saw Carrie sitting on my couch. “You remember Carrie, right?”
“Hi,” Carrie said, waving.
“Hey,” Ashley replied. She then turned her attention back to me. “So… you’re feeling better, I guess?”
“Yeah… my shower helped.”
“Oh,” she nodded. “So… what are the two of you up to?”
“Just watching some Sex and the City,” I told her. A cell phone started ringing, and Carrie fished into her pocket, pulling out the culprit.
“Hey hun… yeah, I was just at a friends’… oh, cool… yeah, definitely… love you, too.” She hung up and turned back to us. “Sorry to break up the party, but I gotta split. Tomorrow, right Spencer?”
“Yup.”
“Cool… nice to see you again Ashley.”
“Likewise,” Ashley replied politely. Maybe I was hallucinating, but I could have sworn I heard a hint of jealousy in her voice. The door closed behind Carrie and I went to turn off my DVD player. “So… Carrie, huh?”
“That would be her name.”
“I didn’t know you had plans today.”
“I didn’t. She heard the t.v. and stopped by,” I explained. “Why does it matter?”
“It doesn’t. I was just curious.”
“You’re so weird,” I told her as I shook my head. She smirked and stuck her hands into her pockets. I plopped back onto the couch and she followed suit.
“So… wanna do something?”
“Sure. Like what?”
“I don’t know. I kind of want to go to Central Park. I’ve never been there before… sober, at least.”
“We could do that.”
“Sweet… you sure you’re feeling okay, though?” she asked, her face genuinely concerned.
“Yup, thanks.”
“Then let’s go!” She smiled and opened the door for me, and we both proceeded to head outside.
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pssssssssssssssssst…..continue *whispers* please?
Omg. You are amazing. Please, PLEASE make Ashley jealous some more. I just love that. I don’t know why but it so freaking amazing. And I too was half expecting a call from Michelle. There should be one next post, maybe. Youu’re the author so you decide. Just update soon and often. I love this story so much. and the discussion thing…if I had to guess I’d say they did it to be ironic…or maybe when there is really bad traffic you might as well be parked on the parkway. I have no idea as you can see by my pathetic attempt to actually have some sort of discussion. It didn’t work.I should stick to what I’m good at. Reading your updates. PMS. (make ash jealous and make michelle call) those are my only requests. It doesn’t all have to happen in the next post but the sooner the better, in my opinion.
P.S.- I LOVE THIS STORY! UPDATE ASAP. YOU’RE SO AMAZING!!!!!!!
um, Hi, my name’s Clark Kent. A uh, friend of mine pointed me in your general direction. He said I’d like what i found. and dear he was right. Slight jealous tension. I understand that completely. See there’s this lady that works with me. I’d rather not say her name. When ever other men go near her, i get so jealous. Even if there is no real reason. I do my best to hide it. I just push my glasses up my nose and straighten my time. As for parkways and driveways I have no idea. I dont need a car. Well, I have to go to the Daily Planet now. Hope to read your lovely literature soon.
awe. I love Ashley. And Spencer. … And Benny. And Michelle, because she hooked Ash and Spencer back up, so I’m just full with love. And, i definitely, love you the most. Very very much, for this awesome post.love
Okay, so, I usually comment on the other page and I’ll continue to do so, but I couldn’t help but share the love here. LOVE THIS FIC! :)
urghh i dun think ash has the right to be jealous when she clearly state that a relationship with spence is not going to work now. shessh. and poor spence who wanted so much but got so little. she’s been living just half a empty life too long. too bad carrie is taken if not i would like to see just how cool she and spence would be. just to get ash jealous and see the freaking light!!! update soon!! plssss.
Oh my lord, I got a shout out in your authors notes. That’s like… unbelievable. Cos you’re like famous. No kidding. There’s a whole thread on the discussion forum entitled “Have you read KozmicBlues fics?” and then a whole load of people going “Yeah… wow.” Anyway, back to your story… Master of Sexual Tension we bow to you. Ashley like Spencer, Spencer like Ashley. Carrie not actually involved, yet, Ashley jealous, Spencer not noticing… grr. I blame Benny. Ok, not really, but you know, at some point Ash and Spence have to face up to the fact they wanna have rampaging animal sex and then cuddle for the rest of eternity. Because without each other, they’re completely incomplete. We park on a driveway because if we drove on it, we’d knock the garage down. We drive on a parkway because if we parked on it, no one could get to where they’re going. Spencer and Ashley do kiss, but rarely, because the Republicans all have poles up their asses and head somewhere in outerspace. Not the most studious of answers, but you know, I have a headache today. OOh, I like these questions, can we have another one?
awesome post…yes ill admit i have been a lurker type thing for quite a while now..im innocent tho.its like this site is blocked from my comp..therefore i sneak on my cuzins comp when she is at work..lol..update soon
Well I’m not usually much good at random musings, but I think that technically, you still could drive in a driveway and park in a parkway. But as clomle said, neither of those would work so well. But aren’t parkways usually lined with trees and other greenery kind of stuff? I wouldn’t really know; they don’t have parkways where I live. So whenever someone asks me about this, I can only reply with “What the hell’s a parkway??” Anyways, you’ve done it again. That was an awesome post!
pssssssssssssssssst…..continue *whispers* please?
Omg. You are amazing. Please, PLEASE make Ashley jealous some more. I just love that. I don’t know why but it so freaking amazing. And I too was half expecting a call from Michelle. There should be one next post, maybe. Youu’re the author so you decide. Just update soon and often. I love this story so much. and the discussion thing…if I had to guess I’d say they did it to be ironic…or maybe when there is really bad traffic you might as well be parked on the parkway. I have no idea as you can see by my pathetic attempt to actually have some sort of discussion. It didn’t work.I should stick to what I’m good at. Reading your updates. PMS. (make ash jealous and make michelle call) those are my only requests. It doesn’t all have to happen in the next post but the sooner the better, in my opinion.
P.S.- I LOVE THIS STORY! UPDATE ASAP. YOU’RE SO AMAZING!!!!!!!
um, Hi, my name’s Clark Kent. A uh, friend of mine pointed me in your general direction. He said I’d like what i found. and dear he was right. Slight jealous tension. I understand that completely. See there’s this lady that works with me. I’d rather not say her name. When ever other men go near her, i get so jealous. Even if there is no real reason. I do my best to hide it. I just push my glasses up my nose and straighten my time. As for parkways and driveways I have no idea. I dont need a car. Well, I have to go to the Daily Planet now. Hope to read your lovely literature soon.
awe. I love Ashley. And Spencer. … And Benny. And Michelle, because she hooked Ash and Spencer back up, so I’m just full with love. And, i definitely, love you the most. Very very much, for this awesome post.love
Okay, so, I usually comment on the other page and I’ll continue to do so, but I couldn’t help but share the love here. LOVE THIS FIC! :)
urghh i dun think ash has the right to be jealous when she clearly state that a relationship with spence is not going to work now. shessh. and poor spence who wanted so much but got so little. she’s been living just half a empty life too long. too bad carrie is taken if not i would like to see just how cool she and spence would be. just to get ash jealous and see the freaking light!!! update soon!! plssss.
Oh my lord, I got a shout out in your authors notes. That’s like… unbelievable. Cos you’re like famous. No kidding. There’s a whole thread on the discussion forum entitled “Have you read KozmicBlues fics?” and then a whole load of people going “Yeah… wow.” Anyway, back to your story… Master of Sexual Tension we bow to you. Ashley like Spencer, Spencer like Ashley. Carrie not actually involved, yet, Ashley jealous, Spencer not noticing… grr. I blame Benny. Ok, not really, but you know, at some point Ash and Spence have to face up to the fact they wanna have rampaging animal sex and then cuddle for the rest of eternity. Because without each other, they’re completely incomplete. We park on a driveway because if we drove on it, we’d knock the garage down. We drive on a parkway because if we parked on it, no one could get to where they’re going. Spencer and Ashley do kiss, but rarely, because the Republicans all have poles up their asses and head somewhere in outerspace. Not the most studious of answers, but you know, I have a headache today. OOh, I like these questions, can we have another one?
awesome post…yes ill admit i have been a lurker type thing for quite a while now..im innocent tho.its like this site is blocked from my comp..therefore i sneak on my cuzins comp when she is at work..lol..update soon
Well I’m not usually much good at random musings, but I think that technically, you still could drive in a driveway and park in a parkway. But as clomle said, neither of those would work so well. But aren’t parkways usually lined with trees and other greenery kind of stuff? I wouldn’t really know; they don’t have parkways where I live. So whenever someone asks me about this, I can only reply with “What the hell’s a parkway??” Anyways, you’ve done it again. That was an awesome post!
Great chapter! I hope ash and spence figure that they’re just meant to be soon hehe! update soon!
Great chapter! I hope ash and spence figure that they’re just meant to be soon hehe! update soon!
I dont want them to be just friends. I want them to get there freak on and keep it on.I love your story. PMS
I dont want them to be just friends. I want them to get there freak on and keep it on.I love your story. PMS