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One Look – (Chapter: Is All it Took)
As I stared into her eyes in that single moment, I knew; I knew she was the one I wanted to spend the rest of my life with. It could have been something about the way her smile seemed to light up the entire room. Or maybe it was the way her head tilted to one side as she listened intently to the conversation she was having with her friend. I’m not sure I could say with certainty what exactly it was, but when her eyes strayed from the conversation they locked immediately with mine. In those precious seconds our eyes told each other everything we needed to know; that I would be her’s and she would be mine.
“You should go talk to her.” I was pulled from the moment by a voice to my right.
“I think I need a drink first.” This was not a ‘thought’, this was a fact. I needed a drink. I had only laid eyes on this girl half a minute ago and I was already thinking white picket fences and a porch swing with two dogs running around in the yard.
“Wow…are you okay? You look really pale.”
“Yeah I’m alright,” I turned to the bartender, “Let me have a shot of Cuervo.”
“Comin’ up.” The bartender smiled as he flipped the heavy glass onto the bar before skillfully pouring the tequila to the rim without spilling a drop. I savor the burn of the long gulp of golden liquid and closed my eyes in a pitiful attempt to compose myself.
“What’s with you? I’ve never seen you act like this before.”
“It’s nothing.” There was no way I was about to tell him what was wrong with me. There was no way I would ever confess to him that I had fallen head over heels in love at first sight. “It must have just gotten really hot in here or something.” I signaled to the bartender to pour me another shot.
“Whatever. Listen I’m gonna to go talk to Spencer, you should come join us whenever you’re done having your love affair with the tequila bottle.”
“Which one is Spencer?” I was trying to clarify his vague point at a group of girls nearby.
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Sweet_confusion says
ok its officially offical, as long as you keep updating i will get no where with my own update. but it is definetly a welcomed and worthy distraction. keep it coming, i love it. and boooooo aiden, but all will end well. haha good job i didnt see that coming at all :]
babaluna says
Woah….I definitely didn’t see that coming! Aiden? Wow… I hope you’ll be posing more soon…
SoNLuverYo says
Holy shit you so had me going! I thought for sure that it was Ashley but it was Aidne grr boo hisss! Spashley no! haha please continue soonn!
Noodlesmls says
FINALLY someone mentioned the D-Y-T(uh, Dayton) in one of these damn fics. Represent! Kidding. It’s like a neverending stream of SON stories huh? I love it, and you have me from the beginning as well, I just can’t imagine Ashley calling her Lettuce Face. Glad to see another story.
tay0720 says
AIDEN!? boooo! it was supposed to be ashley damn it! ASHLEY! lol. WE WANT SPASHLEY! NOT SPAIDEN! but nonetheless, great start. as usual.
goober says
Wow. Threw me for a loop, I tell ya. But I could totally seeing Ashley calling someone lettuce face in high school. Not Spencer, maybe, but someone she didn’t like. Damn. Where is THIS fic gonna go?! Do you have a plan or are you just winging it?
SON_Crazy says
hahaha i was woundering why ashley was friends with glenn lmao lmao and i hav fallowed ur writing from bak to wen u were writing memories! i love your writing and am soo happy u are writing another fic PMS please
NotTwinny says
Ok, I’m ready to admit that you are one hell of a writer and that given the choice of starving to death or reading your writing, I’d pick your stuff any day but I can’t believe it was AIDEN! I absolutely hate SPAIDEN. But I love your work. Just because I hate spencer + Aiden doesn’t mean I won’t read your work but it does mean I will be silently cheering for AIDEN (the butt munch) to die. Update soon and make it Spashely please. You’re awesome and I’m hoping you make the right decision. :) Love…
country girl says
You so totally ROCK!!! Yep, you do! I’m doing the happy dance because you decided to start another story. Yay!! Loved the twist at the end. I was completely convinced it was Ashley. Guess we will just have to wait for Spencer to get to Cali for that meeting. Did I mention you rock? ;)
nothing says
OMG!!! NO SPAIDEN WE WANT SPASHLEY!!and i definitly didnt see that one coming
Jordan says
oh, crap on aiden! but im just glad your back! we want ashley back too though!
clomle44 says
Oh i SO didn’t see that coming. Well done. Well done indeed. That was awesome. I should have known, I couldn’t figure why Ashley and Glen were friends. I mean, I was trying to get that into my head and it wouldn’t gel. I guess that’s why. Well done you. Of course, given that you’re the EMPRESS of fan fic on this forum, it was probably to be expected. If I’m queen (pfft as if), then you so outrank me! I’m glad you’re posting a new story, gives me something to weep over :D As for the cookie factory, the mafia building crew is already fixing it up. I made them promise to use only 2% buscuit in the construction so it should be fairly solid. They owed me a few favours. *Cracks Knuckles*. Anything else you need done? Concrete shoes you need applied? Strange people who need to reaquaint themselves with aquatic life?
oby says
Queen of cliffhangers, goddess of fanfiction, messer of minds. She’s back and she’s GREAT! Never saw it coming, though I was wondering why Ash was hanging with Glen. BTW…nice use of past tense in the beginning, but you slipped into your old ways in the middle! :-P
insertcleveranswer says
Once again, you don’t fail to disappoint. SO was not expecting Aiden. I guess I’m with everyone else wondering if this is going to turn into a Spashley story. Please say yes! Update soon.
Sweet_confusion says
ok its officially offical, as long as you keep updating i will get no where with my own update. but it is definetly a welcomed and worthy distraction. keep it coming, i love it. and boooooo aiden, but all will end well. haha good job i didnt see that coming at all :]
babaluna says
Woah….I definitely didn’t see that coming! Aiden? Wow… I hope you’ll be posing more soon…
SoNLuverYo says
Holy shit you so had me going! I thought for sure that it was Ashley but it was Aidne grr boo hisss! Spashley no! haha please continue soonn!
Noodlesmls says
FINALLY someone mentioned the D-Y-T(uh, Dayton) in one of these damn fics. Represent! Kidding. It’s like a neverending stream of SON stories huh? I love it, and you have me from the beginning as well, I just can’t imagine Ashley calling her Lettuce Face. Glad to see another story.
tay0720 says
AIDEN!? boooo! it was supposed to be ashley damn it! ASHLEY! lol. WE WANT SPASHLEY! NOT SPAIDEN! but nonetheless, great start. as usual.
goober says
Wow. Threw me for a loop, I tell ya. But I could totally seeing Ashley calling someone lettuce face in high school. Not Spencer, maybe, but someone she didn’t like. Damn. Where is THIS fic gonna go?! Do you have a plan or are you just winging it?
SON_Crazy says
hahaha i was woundering why ashley was friends with glenn lmao lmao and i hav fallowed ur writing from bak to wen u were writing memories! i love your writing and am soo happy u are writing another fic PMS please
NotTwinny says
Ok, I’m ready to admit that you are one hell of a writer and that given the choice of starving to death or reading your writing, I’d pick your stuff any day but I can’t believe it was AIDEN! I absolutely hate SPAIDEN. But I love your work. Just because I hate spencer + Aiden doesn’t mean I won’t read your work but it does mean I will be silently cheering for AIDEN (the butt munch) to die. Update soon and make it Spashely please. You’re awesome and I’m hoping you make the right decision. :) Love…
country girl says
You so totally ROCK!!! Yep, you do! I’m doing the happy dance because you decided to start another story. Yay!! Loved the twist at the end. I was completely convinced it was Ashley. Guess we will just have to wait for Spencer to get to Cali for that meeting. Did I mention you rock? ;)
nothing says
OMG!!! NO SPAIDEN WE WANT SPASHLEY!!and i definitly didnt see that one coming
Jordan says
oh, crap on aiden! but im just glad your back! we want ashley back too though!
clomle44 says
Oh i SO didn’t see that coming. Well done. Well done indeed. That was awesome. I should have known, I couldn’t figure why Ashley and Glen were friends. I mean, I was trying to get that into my head and it wouldn’t gel. I guess that’s why. Well done you. Of course, given that you’re the EMPRESS of fan fic on this forum, it was probably to be expected. If I’m queen (pfft as if), then you so outrank me! I’m glad you’re posting a new story, gives me something to weep over :D As for the cookie factory, the mafia building crew is already fixing it up. I made them promise to use only 2% buscuit in the construction so it should be fairly solid. They owed me a few favours. *Cracks Knuckles*. Anything else you need done? Concrete shoes you need applied? Strange people who need to reaquaint themselves with aquatic life?
oby says
Queen of cliffhangers, goddess of fanfiction, messer of minds. She’s back and she’s GREAT! Never saw it coming, though I was wondering why Ash was hanging with Glen. BTW…nice use of past tense in the beginning, but you slipped into your old ways in the middle! :-P
insertcleveranswer says
Once again, you don’t fail to disappoint. SO was not expecting Aiden. I guess I’m with everyone else wondering if this is going to turn into a Spashley story. Please say yes! Update soon.
mm says
Definitely a great start! At first, when I read that last part, I was like, “Huh?” And then, as I finally got it, “What?! NOO!!” That definitely threw me for a loop. Sneaky one, you are…. Look forward to reading more and
mm says
Definitely a great start! At first, when I read that last part, I was like, “Huh?” And then, as I finally got it, “What?! NOO!!” That definitely threw me for a loop. Sneaky one, you are…. Look forward to reading more and
slayerfan101 says
whoa!!! i was like wat the heck is that? aiden??? totally unexpected!!! cant wait to read more. :)
slayerfan101 says
whoa!!! i was like wat the heck is that? aiden??? totally unexpected!!! cant wait to read more. :)