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Completely Incomplete – (Chapter: 30)
I yawned as the stress of the day’s events caught up to me and decided to head on upstairs as well. Remembering I had my bag with me, I pulled out a file and started to do some work. I’m not quite sure how much time went by, but I’d fallen asleep at some point. One of my parents must have come in, because I was covered in a blanket and my light was off.
“Hey.” I shot up in bed at the sound of someone else’s voice and immediately turned on my lamp. My heart was pounding, thinking the worst, until the light came on. It was Ashley, sitting on the edge of my bed. Holding a bouquet of flowers.
“Um… hi,” I said, hesitantly. I looked over at my clock… it was only 10:30? Wow, I felt like a loser.
“Look… I… I know you probably don’t want to talk to me. I just… I wanted to tell you I’m sorry. I was a total bitch today, and you didn’t deserve that.”
“Yeah, I didn’t.” She broke our eye contact and looked down, fidgeting with her hands. “I get that we shouldn’t have done what we did last night. But-“
“No,” she interrupted. “Last night… I don’t regret it. Any of it.”
“I don’t get it.” She sighed and took a breath before speaking again.
“Yesterday, when we were looking at the pictures and everything, I just realized how much I miss that kind of stuff, you know? I mean, we were so happy back then, Spence. I wanted… I want to get that back. But then this morning, I just… I don’t know. I freaked. I was just, like, worried and scared or something.”
“About what?”
“That I would screw this up and hurt you, or that I would get hurt or whatever. The whole day, though, I was just thinking about how stupid I was being. I mean, I have a second chance with you. And I want that again… because I’m happy when I’m with you.” As much as I wanted to, I couldn’t hide the smile that formed on my face.
“Thank you,” I replied. Those words felt kind of meek compared to what she’d just told me. “I understand today, I guess. I mean, I’m scared too, Ash. You weren’t the only one who got hurt when we broke up.” She looked down at her hands again and nodded. “And leaving the money like that… the night after we slept together. How do you think that made me feel?”
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PLESS UPDATE!!! whats ashleys present?????????
OMG what is ashley’s present
YEAH KOZ!!!!! I am soo excited that you posted a chapter today. I really enjoyed it and I can’t wait to see what Spencer got Ashley for her birthday!!!!! PMS and take care!!!!!
Hey! It’s MY birthday today! And I think as a present, the story should be updated tomorrow. wittthhh Ashley’s present revealed.Okay, so I lied. It’s not my birthday, but I still would reeaallyy love an update…
I`m glad they have made up. So what is ashley gift? Cant wait to see what happens next. PMS
” She smiled at me, her eyes lighting up; I would forgive her a thousand times if only to see that again. At that moment, the alarm on my phone went off, indicating it was now midnight. “Happy birthday, Ashley.” “Perfect end to a perfect update. Really lovely.
The present! OMG, the present. I’m so psyched for this! Wooot. Bring on the present. :] PMS please. I love it. This is my fave story in this whole site! Love
I love this fic. You are truly great! I could not stop laughing at this… “I promise I’ll be there. Even if I have a case of explosive diarrhea, I will not move from my position.” So FUNNY! I laughed like she said it to me and I was in the room or something. I love when stories make me feel like that… Great work! PMS!
hmmm what could ashleys present be?? could it beee…SPENCER MOVING BACK TO L.A.!? OMG! that’d be like..the GREATEST present EVER! hehe. amazing as always.
You have no idea how happy you made me when I saw your update. I am so glad they made up. Now if only I knew what Ashley’s present was… Oh well, PMS! Great update!
cute but what is the present
well i read this on the other site earlier, but i reread it becuz i loved it that much. great job. *claps*
*swoosh* how so very true that is. I reconnected to day with an old. uh. friend. it was very much like that. You’re the greatest Koz. *swoosh*
oh man. i want to know what her present is…please update it soon! you rock!
PLESS UPDATE!!! whats ashleys present?????????
OMG what is ashley’s present
YEAH KOZ!!!!! I am soo excited that you posted a chapter today. I really enjoyed it and I can’t wait to see what Spencer got Ashley for her birthday!!!!! PMS and take care!!!!!
Hey! It’s MY birthday today! And I think as a present, the story should be updated tomorrow. wittthhh Ashley’s present revealed.Okay, so I lied. It’s not my birthday, but I still would reeaallyy love an update…
I`m glad they have made up. So what is ashley gift? Cant wait to see what happens next. PMS
” She smiled at me, her eyes lighting up; I would forgive her a thousand times if only to see that again. At that moment, the alarm on my phone went off, indicating it was now midnight. “Happy birthday, Ashley.” “Perfect end to a perfect update. Really lovely.
The present! OMG, the present. I’m so psyched for this! Wooot. Bring on the present. :] PMS please. I love it. This is my fave story in this whole site! Love
I love this fic. You are truly great! I could not stop laughing at this… “I promise I’ll be there. Even if I have a case of explosive diarrhea, I will not move from my position.” So FUNNY! I laughed like she said it to me and I was in the room or something. I love when stories make me feel like that… Great work! PMS!
hmmm what could ashleys present be?? could it beee…SPENCER MOVING BACK TO L.A.!? OMG! that’d be like..the GREATEST present EVER! hehe. amazing as always.
You have no idea how happy you made me when I saw your update. I am so glad they made up. Now if only I knew what Ashley’s present was… Oh well, PMS! Great update!
cute but what is the present
well i read this on the other site earlier, but i reread it becuz i loved it that much. great job. *claps*
*swoosh* how so very true that is. I reconnected to day with an old. uh. friend. it was very much like that. You’re the greatest Koz. *swoosh*
oh man. i want to know what her present is…please update it soon! you rock!
Thanks for the update…….I wonder what Spencer got Ashley for her birthday. please pms:)
Thanks for the update…….I wonder what Spencer got Ashley for her birthday. please pms:)
Yay they’re back to being all happy, that’s what we like =] Ooo i wanna know what ashley’s gift is?? Update soon!
Yay they’re back to being all happy, that’s what we like =] Ooo i wanna know what ashley’s gift is?? Update soon!
ahh glad they made up so quickly. this fic totally makes me happy. so where do they go from here? update soon k.
ahh glad they made up so quickly. this fic totally makes me happy. so where do they go from here? update soon k.