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Completely Incomplete – (Chapter: 29)
“Ash?” I asked, squeezing the hand that was once again wrapped around me. After we had both fulfilled a lot of wishes, we’d quickly thrown on pajamas and tiredly got back into bed.
“Hmm?” she replied, her warm breath tickling the back of my neck.
“Does this… does this change things?” I held my breath, unsure of what the answer would be, unsure of what I wanted the answer to be.
“Yeah,” she finally replied. “And no. It does and it doesn’t.” And for some reason, I understood. “You know, we’re doing this totally backwards.”
“What do you mean?”
“First sex and then everything else… that’s not usually how it works,” she laughed.
“Yeah,” I replied. “Well… that’s how we started, right? That first night… and then we were together.”
“True,” she said.
“… I mean, not that we’re together now, or anything. Or… I don’t know…” I didn’t really know what to call us. “What are we?”
“Happy,” she answered finally. I smiled at her, believing that was the best answer she could possibly give me.
“Yeah.”
“We were back then, too.” I grinned again as she pulled the covers up and scooted a bit closer. I gave her a kiss before turning onto my side.
“Goodnight, Ash.”
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I awoke the next morning, expecting to feel the warmth and protection of Ashley’s body lying against mine with her arm lazily draped across me. I was wrong. I felt around behind me with my right hand, trying to see if perhaps she’d rolled over during the course of the night and just happened to move to the other side. She hadn’t. Confused, I got out of bed and briefly took into account the fact that I was wearing Ashley’s clothes. Last night had indeed happened; I wasn’t dreaming. I walked into the kitchen, half-expecting her to be in there firing up some breakfast. Nope, not there either.
“Ash?” I called out, earning no response. I looked around the kitchen to see if she’d maybe left a note; perhaps she’d gone out to pick up a few things for breakfast… a cup of coffee, some fresh bagels, a gun, so I could shoot myself in the head for being such a naïve idiot. Okay, maybe I wasn’t really thinking that last one… except for the naïve idiot part. She wasn’t here. She had left me.
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dddisfunctional says
yes! first comment. I think, unless someone nabbed it right before me. I better type quick! Anyway, I loved this chapter, even though it was somewhat sad. Ashley needs to get it together, Spencer’s hot shit! and stop doing that to her.
mymusic_mylife says
i love this story i can’t wait until the next update
NotTwinny says
For some reason I now think that Ashley is screwed in the head. You know what we need? We need her to have a little talk with Michelle, and then Michelle can talk with Spencer and then we ALL can be filled in on the situation. I’m basically lost out here, wondering what happened to make Ashley to that to Spencer. I hope they get through this and that Ashley gets a swift kick in the rear from reality. She is either totally mental or just utterly confused. (and remember what I said about a little call from Michelle, you shouldn’t be keeping your loyal fans in the dark here.) Love this story (and you) as always. :] Post more soon please, if you would. I’d enjoy that very much. I’d also enjoy Ashley apologizing on her knees to Spencer. Doesn’t she know she made a huge mistake?
AugustLove says
I was sitting here posting my story and flash there you were. Great update! I hoped that after all these years Ashley would be able to handle feelings better, but neither of them are. LOL. I hope that things are okay between them. They seemed so happy last night. Also, loved how insightful Arthur was and is! Loved it! PMS!
cheeralstar13 says
Ahhh!!!! YAY!!! You updated!!! That definitely makes my day beings I religiously read this story!!! PLEASE POST MORE SOON!!!!
hdgallant says
Wonderful chapter. What is up with ashley. Cant wait to see what happens next. PMS
goober says
Okay, so smuts coming. That’s why I’m not FREAKING OUT. Ashley? This is Goober. You hurt Spencer more and I’ll kill ya! Dead! She’d be much better with me anyway. :) We could have Spoobers together. Yeah, that sounds perfect. Why don’t you start working that into the plot? …What? Why are you laughing? I’m totally serious!
tay0720 says
ok all i can really say is. WHAT THE FUCK ASHLEY?! what? does she have another girl? or…is she just psycho. god. just friggin be with the girl damn it! we all know you want to!
schminda says
what the hell is up with ashley – seriously – she needs to get herself together and just stay with spencer. grrr ashley…grrr. can’t wait to read more – please post it soon!!!
slayerfan101 says
grr ashley!! get your acts together or i’ll start slapping some sense into you!!!! post quickly i need to know what the hell is ashley’s thinking now treating spencer like that!!!
clomle44 says
Hi, my names Clomle/Sarah, and I’m a pervy reader. I commented elsewhere, something about goober and impersonations, but I thought i’d drop you a note of uberlove here and say. TA MUCHLY!
ngasi_lei says
*ZOOOM* You’re a champion. and i’m almost over jetlag. can super people be jetlaged? i guess so. cause i am. I love Art. And Ashley must have had kryptonite in her Red Bull (vomit) At any rate. I hope Spencer doesnt get her heart broken. *Swooshes cape*
cravingsoflove says
wow. aren’t you popular. look at all those comments! haha. i love your story and your writing. your the best please PMS i know it’s a lot of writing but it makes my day. PMS!!!
dddisfunctional says
yes! first comment. I think, unless someone nabbed it right before me. I better type quick! Anyway, I loved this chapter, even though it was somewhat sad. Ashley needs to get it together, Spencer’s hot shit! and stop doing that to her.
mymusic_mylife says
i love this story i can’t wait until the next update
NotTwinny says
For some reason I now think that Ashley is screwed in the head. You know what we need? We need her to have a little talk with Michelle, and then Michelle can talk with Spencer and then we ALL can be filled in on the situation. I’m basically lost out here, wondering what happened to make Ashley to that to Spencer. I hope they get through this and that Ashley gets a swift kick in the rear from reality. She is either totally mental or just utterly confused. (and remember what I said about a little call from Michelle, you shouldn’t be keeping your loyal fans in the dark here.) Love this story (and you) as always. :] Post more soon please, if you would. I’d enjoy that very much. I’d also enjoy Ashley apologizing on her knees to Spencer. Doesn’t she know she made a huge mistake?
AugustLove says
I was sitting here posting my story and flash there you were. Great update! I hoped that after all these years Ashley would be able to handle feelings better, but neither of them are. LOL. I hope that things are okay between them. They seemed so happy last night. Also, loved how insightful Arthur was and is! Loved it! PMS!
cheeralstar13 says
Ahhh!!!! YAY!!! You updated!!! That definitely makes my day beings I religiously read this story!!! PLEASE POST MORE SOON!!!!
hdgallant says
Wonderful chapter. What is up with ashley. Cant wait to see what happens next. PMS
goober says
Okay, so smuts coming. That’s why I’m not FREAKING OUT. Ashley? This is Goober. You hurt Spencer more and I’ll kill ya! Dead! She’d be much better with me anyway. :) We could have Spoobers together. Yeah, that sounds perfect. Why don’t you start working that into the plot? …What? Why are you laughing? I’m totally serious!
tay0720 says
ok all i can really say is. WHAT THE FUCK ASHLEY?! what? does she have another girl? or…is she just psycho. god. just friggin be with the girl damn it! we all know you want to!
schminda says
what the hell is up with ashley – seriously – she needs to get herself together and just stay with spencer. grrr ashley…grrr. can’t wait to read more – please post it soon!!!
slayerfan101 says
grr ashley!! get your acts together or i’ll start slapping some sense into you!!!! post quickly i need to know what the hell is ashley’s thinking now treating spencer like that!!!
clomle44 says
Hi, my names Clomle/Sarah, and I’m a pervy reader. I commented elsewhere, something about goober and impersonations, but I thought i’d drop you a note of uberlove here and say. TA MUCHLY!
ngasi_lei says
*ZOOOM* You’re a champion. and i’m almost over jetlag. can super people be jetlaged? i guess so. cause i am. I love Art. And Ashley must have had kryptonite in her Red Bull (vomit) At any rate. I hope Spencer doesnt get her heart broken. *Swooshes cape*
cravingsoflove says
wow. aren’t you popular. look at all those comments! haha. i love your story and your writing. your the best please PMS i know it’s a lot of writing but it makes my day. PMS!!!
Change says
What in the hell is wrong with Ashley?! LoL…she’s gone bonkers I think…PMS=D
Change says
What in the hell is wrong with Ashley?! LoL…she’s gone bonkers I think…PMS=D
carlymarie82 says
Oh yeah, pms please.
carlymarie82 says
Oh yeah, pms please.
carlymarie82 says
I know Ashley is scared right now but, she’s wrong for leaving Spencer and treating her that way. I think Spencer is waiting for her to call or come to her parents to get her and explain. That’s probably why she hasn’t jumped on a plane and left. She should! Just so Ash can waste money and pay for a ticket. Spencer deserves more than an apology from Ash. I’m glad she tore up the $50 bill, although a bitch like me woulda kept it;) Ashley has too many issue’s and I’m confused. Even if she says she’s sorry and scared, that’s still no excuse. They should be beyond this “point” in their relationship.
carlymarie82 says
I know Ashley is scared right now but, she’s wrong for leaving Spencer and treating her that way. I think Spencer is waiting for her to call or come to her parents to get her and explain. That’s probably why she hasn’t jumped on a plane and left. She should! Just so Ash can waste money and pay for a ticket. Spencer deserves more than an apology from Ash. I’m glad she tore up the $50 bill, although a bitch like me woulda kept it;) Ashley has too many issue’s and I’m confused. Even if she says she’s sorry and scared, that’s still no excuse. They should be beyond this “point” in their relationship.
Noodlesmls says
I’m agreeing with what people said above me…michelle to the rescue. She needs to kick Ashley’s ass, she needs to make her call Spencer, she just needs to do something. Ya know? I’m glad I read some of the comments, I’m not throughly pissed. Although, what do we expect from Ashley sometimes, she’s a scared hurt little girl always, just hiding in a grownup body. I effin heart your story, so much it hurts (kinda). I would say PMS, but I know you will, so thanks in advance.
Noodlesmls says
I’m agreeing with what people said above me…michelle to the rescue. She needs to kick Ashley’s ass, she needs to make her call Spencer, she just needs to do something. Ya know? I’m glad I read some of the comments, I’m not throughly pissed. Although, what do we expect from Ashley sometimes, she’s a scared hurt little girl always, just hiding in a grownup body. I effin heart your story, so much it hurts (kinda). I would say PMS, but I know you will, so thanks in advance.
_barely_breathing_ says
Great chapter, Everyone’s right, Michelle needs to come to the rescue! Update soon!
_barely_breathing_ says
Great chapter, Everyone’s right, Michelle needs to come to the rescue! Update soon!
insertcleveranswer says
Michelle totally needs to talk some sense into Ashley. Great update but please don’t keep us hanging very long the cliffhanger. All these cliffhangers on this site are starting to wear on my poor heart. Plus the cliffhanger from the season finale. Please PMS!
insertcleveranswer says
Michelle totally needs to talk some sense into Ashley. Great update but please don’t keep us hanging very long the cliffhanger. All these cliffhangers on this site are starting to wear on my poor heart. Plus the cliffhanger from the season finale. Please PMS!
virginmama says
I am so glad that you posted chapter and I finally got to read it because I finally have a day off from work. I just hope that Ashley doesn’t screw it up with Spencer. I hope that she will call her soon. PMS and I LOVE YOUR STORY!!!!!
virginmama says
I am so glad that you posted chapter and I finally got to read it because I finally have a day off from work. I just hope that Ashley doesn’t screw it up with Spencer. I hope that she will call her soon. PMS and I LOVE YOUR STORY!!!!!
stainsonmyskirt says
yay this story is going really good.pms :D
stainsonmyskirt says
yay this story is going really good.pms :D