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Completely Incomplete – (Chapter: 38)
The flight was scheduled to get in at around 1pm, California time, and I hoped to God that Ashley wouldn’t have already left for work by the time I got there.
I was seated next to a guy who looked around my age. He had shaggy, blonde hair, and looked to be the typical California surfer type. If I was straight, I’d probably be swooning. Aw, shucks.
Regardless, I tried to get to sleep, but it became clear that it wasn’t going to work. I couldn’t even keep my eyes closed, I was so anxious. The aforementioned guy seemed to take notice.
“Pillow?” he asked, holding out one of those tiny, flimsy airplane pillows.
“No thanks. It’s going to take a lot more than a pillow to get me to sleep,” I joked.
“Yeah, I know what you mean. It’s hard to fall asleep when you’re about 3 inches away from 8 different people.”
“Yup,” I nodded.
“So are you from L.A.?”
“What?” I wasn’t quite sure why this guy was still talking to me, but I hadn’t completely turned into a bitchy New Yorker yet.
“Are you from L.A.?”
“Sort of, yeah. I went to high school there. But I live in New York now,” I explained. “What about you?”
“California, born and bred. I’ve lived in Santa Monica my whole life.”
“Cool.”
“Yeah. So, uh, what brings you back?” he asked.
“Oh, you know… just visiting some friends and family,” I told him. “What brought you out to New York?”
“Same as you. My brother lives on the Jersey Shore,” he said. “What high school did you go to?”
“King.”
“King… didn’t you guys have a shooting there once?”
“Probably more than once,” I laughed. “I didn’t move there until halfway through, and there were at least 2 kids who went psycho and came to school with guns, just in 2 years.”
“That’s crazy. I went to Oceanside. We didn’t really have kids with guns, but that’s because most of us were ditching to surf or smoke pot. Or both,” he laughed.
“Well that’s… safer, I guess?”
“Totally. Us surfers and stoners are a peaceful group.” I laughed and adjusted my seat to make it lean back a little. I always felt bad doing that, though. Because it sucked to be that guy sitting behind the person who leaned her seat back all the way. “I’m Logan, by the way.”
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Seriously? You are seriously just going to leave it there???? Kozmic, you’re killing me where. You can not kill Spencer, I won’t allow it, even if it is your story. Just as Spencer was coming to the realization that she needed to be in L.A. because there was absolutely nothing keeping her in New York you have to go and send her on a plane with engine problems. Nice going. You have to post more soon. I’m talking maybe the next couple of hours or tomorrow night at the latest. Please don’t leave me hanging. I would tell you this was a great update but I’m kind of mad at you right now. PMS!
OH MAH GOD!!! **jaw hits the floor**
DIDO!!!!! Why would you leave us like this KOZ?????? I mean, I hope this isn’t the way you are going to end this story or end it at all. PLEASE!!!!! let Spencer be safe and Ashley be there when she wakes up!!!!! PMS !!!!!
Now see this is the main reason I don’t like to fly! OMG! I can’t believe it. Hopefully Spencer is going to survive and realize that life is short and move to LA and be with Ashley. Hopefully that is what will happen. This is such a great twist. Excellent writing and great story, of course you know this right? LOL!
are you FUCKING KIDDING ME?! please tell me this is just some fucked up dream she had. or its like..some final destination thing you thought up. because honestly…SPENCER CANT FUCKING DIE! not after ALL this! HELL NO! i’ll rewrite it if i effing have to because this is just ridiculous! you cant go…what? 38? 39 chatpers and then kill spencer. no. i’m not allowing this. shes gonna get back together with ashley. i refuse any outcome besides that. YOU HEAR ME?! lol. I’M BEING SERIOUS KOZ! its just a dream damn it. it’s just a dream. she fell asleep on the plane, and when she wakes up she’ll have arrived safely in L.A. thats what’s gonna happen.
NO FUCKING WAY!!!!!! i can’t handle this….why? why would you do this to my heart? it is broken right now…why….please update a new one…as in right now! this instant! i need to know what happens!!!!
Oh my you cant stop there. I need to know what happen. Great update. But please write more soon.
you cant leave us with cliff hangers like that whatever you do I really really really really hope you update soon I dont even care if its like 20 words as long as Spencer is ok and there will be a Spashley once again
Here’s the deal. I’ve stayed quiet long enough. I can’t even remember the last time that I’ve left a comment for anyone, not even my favorite author, which is you, of course my dearest kozmic. But REALLY, this is just ridiculous. And unacceptable, to say the very least. Spencer needs to be okay. My very existence depends on it. She needs to make it to LA and proclaim her undying love for her amazingly hot girl. Then tell her that she’ll do anything for her, even move across the country. Then there will be a beautifully written NC-17 chapter, because all will be right in the world, as our two favorite ladies will end up happily ever after. The end.
Oh and btw, you’re an exquisite talent and I can only dream of having your level of imagination one day.
oh my good god. im supposed to get on a plane tomorrow!!
first of all WHAT THE FRAK! lord, knows your a hell of a good writer but this was fantastic. BUT WHY WHY WHY LEAVE US THERE!…i was so excited to read your story but then i thought back ‘spencer, on a plane.’ i got the vibe that something was going to happen. when i read the word shake i exactly knew what was going to happend. dying? injuries? emotional confessions to hot loved ones? you name it!
Awwwwww oh my god in the last chapter i posted “if she gets there” i was kidding lol i take it back, i take it back :( lmao God i hate airplanes… i really really hope you don’t end it here, i think everyone else would agree lol but i guess we got to leave it up to you, your the amazing writer :) lol …Can’t Wait..hopefully… lol
if you kill Spencer, I’ll kill you. Okay maybe not… But in my mind, oh bot.
okay that was boy*. totally ruined my physcotic moment.
Well well, I think the sheer number of people who have left distraught comments is a testament to your writing prowess. Loved this chapter, unpleasant twist and all.
Hi. My name is Emmi Jesten, and i can’t wait for the next chapteri left a feedback on the spashley forum but i dont think that is enough to show all my support. here. i love this fic. i love spashley. i love your writing. i love you. so please dont kill spencer. ok?
you’re killing me. i had to read this about 6 times just to make sure I didnt miss anything, and the result of that is my death. thanks. please write more though, i love your style.
Uhm. I only have one little thing to say. “OH MY GOD!!!!!” What the hell? She cant’ die. She needs to be with Ashley. OMG *sobs* WHy?
PLEEEEEEEASSSSSSSSEEEEE don’t kill Spencer!!!! Update Now Pretty Please. I’m dieing to find out what is going to happen.
Seriously? You are seriously just going to leave it there???? Kozmic, you’re killing me where. You can not kill Spencer, I won’t allow it, even if it is your story. Just as Spencer was coming to the realization that she needed to be in L.A. because there was absolutely nothing keeping her in New York you have to go and send her on a plane with engine problems. Nice going. You have to post more soon. I’m talking maybe the next couple of hours or tomorrow night at the latest. Please don’t leave me hanging. I would tell you this was a great update but I’m kind of mad at you right now. PMS!
OH MAH GOD!!! **jaw hits the floor**
DIDO!!!!! Why would you leave us like this KOZ?????? I mean, I hope this isn’t the way you are going to end this story or end it at all. PLEASE!!!!! let Spencer be safe and Ashley be there when she wakes up!!!!! PMS !!!!!
Now see this is the main reason I don’t like to fly! OMG! I can’t believe it. Hopefully Spencer is going to survive and realize that life is short and move to LA and be with Ashley. Hopefully that is what will happen. This is such a great twist. Excellent writing and great story, of course you know this right? LOL!
are you FUCKING KIDDING ME?! please tell me this is just some fucked up dream she had. or its like..some final destination thing you thought up. because honestly…SPENCER CANT FUCKING DIE! not after ALL this! HELL NO! i’ll rewrite it if i effing have to because this is just ridiculous! you cant go…what? 38? 39 chatpers and then kill spencer. no. i’m not allowing this. shes gonna get back together with ashley. i refuse any outcome besides that. YOU HEAR ME?! lol. I’M BEING SERIOUS KOZ! its just a dream damn it. it’s just a dream. she fell asleep on the plane, and when she wakes up she’ll have arrived safely in L.A. thats what’s gonna happen.
NO FUCKING WAY!!!!!! i can’t handle this….why? why would you do this to my heart? it is broken right now…why….please update a new one…as in right now! this instant! i need to know what happens!!!!
Oh my you cant stop there. I need to know what happen. Great update. But please write more soon.
you cant leave us with cliff hangers like that whatever you do I really really really really hope you update soon I dont even care if its like 20 words as long as Spencer is ok and there will be a Spashley once again
Here’s the deal. I’ve stayed quiet long enough. I can’t even remember the last time that I’ve left a comment for anyone, not even my favorite author, which is you, of course my dearest kozmic. But REALLY, this is just ridiculous. And unacceptable, to say the very least. Spencer needs to be okay. My very existence depends on it. She needs to make it to LA and proclaim her undying love for her amazingly hot girl. Then tell her that she’ll do anything for her, even move across the country. Then there will be a beautifully written NC-17 chapter, because all will be right in the world, as our two favorite ladies will end up happily ever after. The end.
Oh and btw, you’re an exquisite talent and I can only dream of having your level of imagination one day.
oh my good god. im supposed to get on a plane tomorrow!!
first of all WHAT THE FRAK! lord, knows your a hell of a good writer but this was fantastic. BUT WHY WHY WHY LEAVE US THERE!…i was so excited to read your story but then i thought back ‘spencer, on a plane.’ i got the vibe that something was going to happen. when i read the word shake i exactly knew what was going to happend. dying? injuries? emotional confessions to hot loved ones? you name it!
Awwwwww oh my god in the last chapter i posted “if she gets there” i was kidding lol i take it back, i take it back :( lmao God i hate airplanes… i really really hope you don’t end it here, i think everyone else would agree lol but i guess we got to leave it up to you, your the amazing writer :) lol …Can’t Wait..hopefully… lol
if you kill Spencer, I’ll kill you. Okay maybe not… But in my mind, oh bot.
okay that was boy*. totally ruined my physcotic moment.
Well well, I think the sheer number of people who have left distraught comments is a testament to your writing prowess. Loved this chapter, unpleasant twist and all.
Hi. My name is Emmi Jesten, and i can’t wait for the next chapteri left a feedback on the spashley forum but i dont think that is enough to show all my support. here. i love this fic. i love spashley. i love your writing. i love you. so please dont kill spencer. ok?
you’re killing me. i had to read this about 6 times just to make sure I didnt miss anything, and the result of that is my death. thanks. please write more though, i love your style.
Uhm. I only have one little thing to say. “OH MY GOD!!!!!” What the hell? She cant’ die. She needs to be with Ashley. OMG *sobs* WHy?
PLEEEEEEEASSSSSSSSEEEEE don’t kill Spencer!!!! Update Now Pretty Please. I’m dieing to find out what is going to happen.
aside from that…another fabulous chapter! Love this story!
aside from that…another fabulous chapter! Love this story!
FUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUCK!!WTF? WTF? WTF? You can’t let her die. NO NO NO NO NO NO.please PMS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
FUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUCK!!WTF? WTF? WTF? You can’t let her die. NO NO NO NO NO NO.please PMS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I usually lurk around and never comment…but REALLY..not Spencer…not now.I really love your stories, so update more soon.
I usually lurk around and never comment…but REALLY..not Spencer…not now.I really love your stories, so update more soon.
Wow great chapter, cliffhanger much? lol please update soon i’m dieing to know what’s gonna happen!
Wow great chapter, cliffhanger much? lol please update soon i’m dieing to know what’s gonna happen!
HOLY FUCKING SHIT!!!!!!!!!That’s all I can get out.
HOLY FUCKING SHIT!!!!!!!!!That’s all I can get out.
dang dude… ur gonna be the death of me endin stories like that.. pms plz
dang dude… ur gonna be the death of me endin stories like that.. pms plz
*points up* i think everyone has said what needs to be said. i just like to add that i cant wait for the next chapter cos spencer would survive the air crash without a scratched and goes on to LA nad live happily with ashley. right!!!!!!
*points up* i think everyone has said what needs to be said. i just like to add that i cant wait for the next chapter cos spencer would survive the air crash without a scratched and goes on to LA nad live happily with ashley. right!!!!!!