Fan Fiction
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Story written on June 21, 2004 by Shakennotstirred.
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Olives, you RULE!
I like this story, traveling through Europe is exactly like that…lol..can´t wait to see what´s with Mari´s apartment…seems like an intersting twist…please go on
This was well worth the wait. Thanks again for another tremendous installment.
Beautiful! As alway’s. Just wonderful!
You deliver in a BIG way! Thanks for this installment. It was worth the wait. Yeah to Tina for waking the heck up and noticing what is bigger than hurt in her relationship with Bette. Looking forward to the next post.
Yeah this story kicks ass!!! This has been such a great rollercoaster ride through the trials and tirbulations of recovering their relationship and I know you have much more in store for us…please continue
OUTSTANDING!!!
ANother Great story. I love all your stories. ANother chapter please.
Thank so very very much!! I love this chapter (and the fic, of course!)!
WOW!!!WOW!!!…soooo great…please more
certainly enjoying this one. Please continue on.
Lovely, just lovely…Now it’s make-up time okay? Let’s get rid of that rollaway cot. Can’t wait till the next chapter!
Another excellent chapter. The wait in between just kills me, but I understand a busy schedule. Looking forward to more!!
I have loved this story from the very first chapter. I feel like I am reading a book. Thank you for the time and energy you are putting into this.
wow girl you have done such a great job with this piece…please continue as soon as you can; I can’t wait to see what else you’ve got in store for us…really great work!
You have a knack of writing short stories… Seahurst was right, it is like reading a book. It’s great. You played the drama just right and never overplayed it, which is great. I love it… thanks. I have enjoyed every story that you wrote.
I agree with everyone else! This is a great story!
You have a real gift for storytelling…I really enjoyed that. Please continue…
Really great story, and I like the character of Mari…you’ve managed to write an original character that’s not irritatingly one dimensional. I look forward to more.