Fan Fiction
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Story written on July 7, 2004 by Shakennotstirred.
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(37 votes, average: 3.38 out of 5)
So touching! My heart melted with the giving and taking of the ring! Excellent as always.
Thank you Olives for the sweet moments of B&T.You’ve made my day.
so touching and heartfelt…great work. please continue.
so touching and heartfelt…great work. please continue.
Thank you for this beautiful chapter.
As always – fantastic!
I welled up with tears as they dealt with the ring issue.
Very touching, SNS!
What a journey! So beautifully written and told by you…SNS, you are something…when you get a moment, how about a continuation of this great story…bravo!
It was worth the wait. Bravo.
Gorgeous…
awww…that was a great story.
I love it. Great job this story is wonderful, Bette and Tina are really trying to connect now, I’m glad Tina turned down her walls for her *wife*.
Like luvtoys, I too was a bit teary eyed with the ring and the vow. Very nice job!
sweeeeeeet…
love this story, it is just so goooooood.
another great chapter
awsome chapter!! good job!
I”m glad to see that you had Tina remain truthful with her vows. I also commend you for another excellent chapter. Waiting for the next one.
Olives, who knew you were a big sap?! Loved the part with the vows, but especially liked the food parts. Bravo, yet again!
You always paint the heartfelt picture. I am always there…right there. Thanks for another great chapter.
I like that this story takes us to places, geographically and emotionally, that we never expect to go. That and your skillful writing are what makes your stories so compelling and original. Thank you.
i love their vows…
Those two finally eat something! LOL. I’m so glad to see that they’re laughing with each other again. Beautiful story..Please continue…