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    HEREAFTER. Chapter 23. Family Gathering

    Story written on October 21, 2004 by Tee.
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    HEREAFTER. Chapter 23. Family Gathering.

    Alice its been more then a week, she has called, but she hasnt ask to see me, I dont think she will

    Tina, why havent you? Lets not pretend you have some pride with this one, because I know you would take any bone she throw in your way

    Yeah Alice I feel so much better, thats exactly what I needed to hear, I will call immediately, no wait why to call is too subtle, Ill send her some flowers with my panties in it and … I dunno do you think I should shove a hotel key also!!!!!

    Hey, dont get snippy on me, I havent sleep on the last 72 hours, am just about to look on the contract for some -return- policy or something

    Oh Alice, am sorry, How is Dana doing?

    She is fine, but am telling you Tina over my dead body we will have a girly girl, I still dont know how she convince me to paint all the room pink

    Tina laughed, You know you love it Alice, give it lots of kisses to the Carrie, we still on for Saturday, right?

    Absolutely and let me handle the Bette thing, I know the way

    Should I be scare?

    No you should be thankful and offering to baby sit

    Bye Alice Tina said hanging up.

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    Bette Porter, who is this?

    A very worn out newbie Mom here

    Oh Alice sorry I didnt notice the number, You mean to tell me you have the baby already, Tina told me there were some delays

    Yep there were but we have her since Monday

    Congratulations, how is all?

    Is madness and I want out

    Bette smiled You loving it right?

    if you repeat that to another human been, itll be the last you say

    Copy that Bette relented

    okay I want you here, without excuse this Saturday, we having a little welcome party to Carrie

    You name her Carrie? Should I dare to ask about the last name.. Bette said avoiding the real issue

    No you shouldnt nor you should think theres a way out of this one, Ill see you here, Ask Tina for the address she said hanging up

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    14. You capture the interior emotions of the characters very well. Your pacing is good, the story moves smoothly along from one scenario to the next.
      Thanks!
      Si, como no?

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