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    Freaky Surprises for everyone!!!!

    She had just finished a long day of training and she was on her way to see her girlfriend. Dana Fairbanks was going to surprise Alice Pieszeck. They had only been going out for about 2 weeks; they had dancing around their mutual feelings for months before that. Dana had nearly made one of the biggest mistakes of her life, refusing to believe her fiance could possibly murder her *****-furry man, Mr. Piddles. Tanya, the *****, wanted to be a ***** trophy wife and it took Alice to open her eyes to the truth.

    Alice was at Danas old condo (amazed at how well, Danas luck worked in her favor, after dumping that cat-killer, fake *****-Dana was able to get her old place back) preparing dinner. She had it all planned out a nice romantic dinner with candle lit ambiance to illuminate the mood and to set the tone for the rest of the night. This would be the first time they made love as an official couple, and Alice wanted to make it very special for her love. So, earlier she had arrived, allowed herself entrance, and began to prepare her elaborate surprise.

    Pulling up in her Silver/Cream colored Subaru SUV, Dana walked up the path to the apartment. She was planning on surprising Alice with her own brand of newfound lovin. She used her key that Al had giving her when they became an official couple. She quietly opened the door and slid into the darkness of the hallway. Even though it was only 8 pm on that particular Friday night; Dana still did not want to alert her girlfriends attention.

    Alice sat and waited with the candles burning brightly and the dinner sitting and waiting to be served. Her stomach grumbled alerting her to her ever growing hunger. She looked at her watch, it was now 8 pm and her love should be home any minute now. She just had to exercise a little more patience.

    After allowing her eyes to adjust to the darkness, she peered into the bedroom, she noticed the feminine figure lying on its side facing away from her. Taking the bull by the horns, she slipped out of her clothes and slide underneath the covers. The darkness concealing the face of her lover; wrapping her arm over the slumbering body, she pressed her entire front side up into the backside of her girlfriend. She began to trace over the supple neck and suckle on the softest earlobes she ever had the experience of having her lips dance around with her tongue flicking the flavor of sweetness from. She heard the low murmur of the woman in her arms announce her awakening, and ever increasing awareness of a heat that would explode between them.

    It was now 8:30 pm, Alice knew it did not take long for Dana to drive here from the country club. Only 12 minutes from exiting the locker room to walking into the front door and that is if all the lights were against you and you stuck in some midday traffic. Okay, Alice, our little reporter, did her homework and did the research a little too thoroughly. She had timed it earlier today and she even double-checked it. Well she was sitting there ravenous, so Alice decided to eat something. However, her hunger got the better of her and she dished up an entire plate full of dinner.

    Clothes were cluttering up the bedroom floor and the bed was squeaking with a furry as it banged against the wall, wakening the neighbors and seriously irritating them to no end-as they banged their fist against the wall, their pleas falling on deaf ears as the passion ensued. Loud moans and groans were cascading throughout the air. The street lamp illuminated the sweat drenched forms as they eagerly worked on each other for hours on end, however it did nothing to reveal the partners faces-not that it mattered as they were barely able to focus on anything but the sensations that were shooting through their bodies, as they brought each other over the edge over and over again-in different positions, taking turns on each other. The passion the filled the air fueled the animalistic desires.

    At about 11:45 pm, finally giving up and driving herself home feeling a tremendous amount of disappointment; Alice walked through her front door. She heard two female voices screaming out in guttural *****. She walked into her room, flipped on the light switch, and her eyes shoot wide as her jaw hit the floor in utter surprise. Two all so familiar forms collapsed onto the bed, with their eyes closed, and breathing with labored need for air. She remained stalk still and unable to verbalize her presence. Pain and anger filled her soul; Alice was completely and utterly heartbroken.

    Minutes later, after regaining some sense of who and where they were. The two lovers opened their eyes, turned to each other, and AHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!! echoed their shock and disbelieve. Lenore and Dana stared at each other, until they felt the presence of another in the room. They turned to witness Alice making a quick escape, however they both did notice the tear stains that streaked down her cheeks, as she espeediently locked herself into the bathroom with a slam of the door.

    The End

    Comments

    1. OH NO! Get back here, Gargy, and clean up this mess you made. You cannot leave Dana in the clutches of Lenore and Alice can’t spend forever in the bathroom.

      This was so good.

    2. GARGY?! Man what a mess you made here…I hope that you’re on your way back to clean it up…didn’t see that one coming…but it was so, so wrong.

      And come on Gargy….you’re not gonna give up on guesswho now are you…remember no one has yet to figure out the mystery…and the challenge issued still stands…hope you come out and play…:D

    3. Now that’s just creepy. Gargy you are never boring. Love Amanda’s line Dana “should have FELT the difference.” Can’t stop giggling, this was way funny.

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