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HEREAFTER. Chapter 34. Conundrum
HEREAFTER. Chapter 34. Conundrum
As in the eye of the hurricane silence dominated the house, only a prelude for what was to come.
Bette had stormed out to the back yard, wanting to be out of the way for when Tina leave, because she would leave that was for sure. She took another bottle from the bar with her, but didnt dare to sip it, she knew alcohol wouldnt bring any consolation, she still was reeling on what she had said, couldnt believe the way she had been, she was going straight to ***** that much she was sure, and ***** would be here on earth. The blue water of the pool, was a bit calming, calming her enough to finally let the tears fall, she slowly let herself fall on the lounge chair under the shade of the gazebo, the same one Candance had built with her own hands, they had made love many times in this place, it was candys favorite, memories flooded her mind, Bette didnt know anymore why she was crying.
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Hours later Tina ventured out the room in search of Bette, finding her in the back yard.
Her hoarse voice resounded in the quiet and did nothing to mask her emotions Here you are…. clearing her throat she continue Is beautiful out here
I thought you gone Bette said, the harshness out of her voice but the statement it self conveyed enough
Yeah you almost made me, how you feeling? Tina asked
Me? werent you the one I out lash against
Am not the victim nor you the victimary, but I heard what you said beyond the words and I … guess that …. if you dont want me… I … cant force you to, but I need some answers to close this never-ending episode in my life or at least to end this day she added letting a cynic sneer, her calm wasnt really real, her hurt was.
Bette closed her eyes, the restless sleep she got only left her more unsettle, she was exhausted, not at all prepare for the draining conversation this was set to be
Can we talk about it some other time? she said attempting to stand up to walk away
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(65 votes, average: 3.28 out of 5)
Beautiful & touching Tee!
Great story Tee, but please write a sequal.
Wow that was so good. Thanks
i could not believe when i finished this story and it said THE END. talk about a mood killer. i have looked forward to your writing everyday. i do hope that you decide to write more. i will miss this story though.
lovely now where is 35 don’t you stop there.
this can’t be the end. please do a follow-up story.
Oh…wow…Incrediable…more pleaseee
“THE END!?!” what the freak does that mean!?! omg, tee what are you doing to me!?! this can’t be the end, please please please write more. i really enjoy this story. now i’m pouting. do i have to give you the lip and eye treatment?? i will, it has worked before and i’m not afraid to use it. this was a great chapter, but that last part *the end* has got to go. please write soon even a sequel. please! thanks for writing too. :)
This story is so beautiful. You have explained so well why Bette struggled so much to recommit to Tina. I had hoped they would get back together. Please consider writing a follow up where Bette finds the courage to go after Tina
Awsome ending! Loved it. You did pulled good twists along the way. Fabulous job!
“I feel guilty Tina, Because you were her greatest fear, because she knew this would happen, because I swear to her that it wouldn’t, and here I am dying to be in your arms,
Is the second love ever as powerful as the first, or is it an attempt, however earnest, at replacing what’s been lost in one’s soul?
I’m feeling every emotion they are going through.
What the fuck! THE END hahahahahahahahahahahahah you’ve got to be joking right? Please tell me you’re joking? TELL ME YOU’RE JOKING!!!!!!
No way!! This is not the end…The end of this chapter maybe, but not the end of this story!!!!!!!
No, THE END? No, impossible. No, you have to be kidding!!! No nos puedes hacer esto!!!!!!!!
~pleading, almost crying~
Love their revelations to each other…please give us more.
OMG. I love your storys they are soo good.
So much emotion!!! So Wonderful.
Absolutely wonderful. You said have a little faith and I will so I am expecting more of this story.
I know you didn’t mean The End as in Over and done with! Please – you’ve taken us on such a wonderfully torturous journey you can’t leave us here. We deserve more – PLEASE
Sorry,I’m back went back to the top of the page,you had CONUNdrum. That means riddle are you playing with our mindsare testing us to see if we really pay attention.
You can’t really mean The End. We have read 34 chapter grown to love the girls,worried about Bette and her knee,worried about Tina and her love for Bette,Hope you have another one in your mind. Loved your story and always looked for you. thanks so much
You don’t really mean the end of the story,do you? Please don’t leave us like this.