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Chapter 17
The next morning Tina woke up on Shanes couch feeling nauseas and heavy headed; the after effects of a late night out drinking with Steph.
Tina rose from the couch; her head thumping, her mind not really remembering how she had found her way back there only a few hours earlier.
She was in desperate need of the toilet and slowly, unsteadily got off the couch to go to the bathroom.
As she made her way across the room she tripped and fell on a womans body that was unexpectedly passed out on the floor. Tinas petite frame fell right on top of the woman as she hastily awoke.
Tina: God. Steph Im sorry, I didnt even know you were here? focusing her blurred vision on her friend below her.
Steph: (disorientated) How??How did we get back here? looking around, Umwhere exactly is here? scratching her head in confusion.
Tina quickly got off Steph and helped her to her feet, This is my friend Shanes place. Im temporarily staying here until I find my own!
Steph smiled, OkGood Morning Tinawhat time is it?
Tina had to go to the bathroom, she desperately had to pee, so she took off running (yelling) I have no idea?
Tina came back a few minutes later to find Steph checking her stomach and arms for bruises. Tina: (sympathetically) sorry Steph, I.. I didnt expect you to be thereon the floor.. I didnt hurt you did I?
Steph looked at Tina and laughed, (playfully) Of course not I believe Ill live!!
Tina: (hesitantly) UmSteph, Do you remember anything about how we got back here? The last thing I remember is that it was like, 1 am and the drinks were still flowing?
Steph: Mmm. me too? Its a bit of a mystery hey?
Tina and Steph sat on the couch, trying to determine if they could form any memory of the previous nights events, when Shane and Toni saunter out of the bedroom, arm in arm.
Shane: (cheerily) Good morning you two. Well werent you the little party animals last night. A huge grin plastered on her face, as Shane and her woman walked into the kitchen.
Tina and Steph looked at each other, then immediately got up off the couch and practically fell over each other in their attempts to hastily get to the kitchen.
Shane and Toni were sitting at the counter, waiting for the coffee machine to heat, talking quietly, closely, smiling at each other.
Tina and Steph came racing through the entrance to the kitchen, stopping dead in their tracks, and stared at the two of them.
Tina: (taking a deep breath) Shane, Toni. This is my friend Steph!!!..Now what the *****-happened last night? Howd we manage to get back here?
Shane: (looking over at Tinas friend and then back at Tina) Um. We already met Stephlast night, remember? the grin now permanently plastered on Shanes face.
I can have some fun with this Shane cheekily thought to herself, realizing by Tinas expression, that she lacked memory of the previous night.
Tina: (looking at Steph uncertainly) Um. Sure we remember.(blurting out) No OK!! Its currently a bit of a blur!!. Cant you just tell us!?
Shane: Thatd be no fun looking at her watch, smirking to herself.
Shane quietly whispered something into Tonis ear, then looked back at Tina and Steph, who were still standing, staring intently at her, So sorry guys, well have to discuss this laterI got to get to work!!
Tina: What?Oh no you dontWhy wont you tell us? God what did we do?? looking over at Steph, a hint of redness flushing Tinas cheeks.
Shane loved this, the fact that the two women only got a bit too drunk, got thrown out of the club and tried to pick up two men dressed as women, before Shane and Toni had to carry their intoxicated asses home, didnt matter; she was going to play this for all it was worth.
Tina needed a little fun, after all her heartbreak of late, Shane thought. Ill tell you all about it later ok? getting off the stool along with Toni; both making their way to the front door, leaving.
Tina and Steph just stood and stared at each other for a few minutes before they burst out laughing.
Tina: Oh well, well just find out later I guess!!
Steph: I guess we will. Can you take me to my hotel Tina, I really need to shower and change!
Tina: Sure doc.
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Tina and Stephanie had hoped to meet and converse with Bette and Kristie that day, but scheduling wouldnt allow. They arranged to meet them instead at The Cup, at 9am the following morningSaturday morning. the start of the weekend!!
Tina spent the day with the doc., reacquainting herself with her homewith L.A. and West Hollywood!
Later that night, Shane informed the duo of their activities of the previous night. The two women were too embarrassed to enter out, so they grabbed some take out and spent the night watching old movies and talking. Tina finally dropped Steph back at her hotel at about 2am.
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Sat morning hastily rolled around. Tina picked Steph up at 8:30am, and they arrived at The Cup, walking through the doors at 9 am sharp to meet up with Bette and Kristie, respectively. Bette was aware that Kristie was meeting a doctor friend of hers from Med. School, but had no idea it was in fact a woman who Tina knew.
Alice, Dana and Lara were also there obtaining their morning fix of caffeine before beginning their weekend. Tina saw them all sitting conversing with each other, at a table down back, and taking Stephs hand, (as a friendly gesture) the two women wandered over to the table to greet Tinas friends.
Bette immediately noticed Tina and the woman she was. WHAT?. holding hands with, when they walked through the door. Bette felt the stirrings of jealousy in the pit of her stomach as she saw Tina and the beautiful brunette approach the table hand in hand.
Bette thought to herself, Why?..Why do I feel this wayTinas not mine anymoreI have Kristie now. Tina is free to see who ever she wants! Godthat woman is gorgeous though!who the ***** is she?
Tina and Steph arrived at the table. Kristie looked up noticing the two women and was the first one to speak, (excitedly) Dr Stephanie Hunter I havent seen you inalmost 4 years. Kristie got up out of her seat and went over giving Steph a warm hug, much to Bettes chagrin.
Steph: (letting go of Tinas hand, hugging her old friend back, smiling) Has it really been that longGod now I feel old, Kris.
Bette stood up at looked directly into Stephanies eyes, directing her question at Kristie, (as calmly as she could muster) Baby, whos this? Stephanie looked at Bette and could feel the heat in her stare, almost like a hole was being burned right through her.
Kristie was totally oblivious to Bettes obvious discomfort; taking Bettes hand, BabyBette Porter, this is Dr Stephanie Hunter.one of my oldest and dearest friendsthe woman I went to Med. School with honey.
Bette was seething; her teeth were practically grinding together. First this woman was holding Tinas hand, now she was hugging Kristie, and a doctor too, to boot.
But was Bettes jealousy stemming from Tina or Kristie?that was the million dollar question?
Bette composed herself, she realized that she needed to remain cool, calm and collected; she took a deep breath, extending her hand, (pleasantly) Hello Dr Hunter, pleased to meet you.
Stephanie: (smiling graciously, fully aware of Bettes obvious dislike) Pleased to meet you too Bette, and its Steph, please! Bette smiled politely.
Tina introduced Stephanie to the rest of the gang and after all the formalities; Bette and Tina decided to sit down for a quick coffee with their friends before they all headed their separate ways.
Stephanie looked at Kristie: This is a good a place as anydo you mind if we stay here and chat?
Kristie: Not at alllets go grab another table!
The two doctors grabbed a table and began catching up. (turns out, just within earshot, of Bette and Tina.)
Tina looked at Bette, sitting next to her; they hadnt said anything to each other since Tina had arrived and Tina was beginning to feel uncomfortable, (hesitantly) Um.Hi Bette, How is Jack? Hes not coming with us today? the disappointment evident in her eyes.
Bette looked at Tina and weakly smiled, No, I figured we could use no interruptions today Tina. We have a lot to talk about. Shane and Toni are taking him to the Water Park He just loves the waterslides. Bettes face lit up, just like it always did when she spoke about her little boy.
Tina and Bette sipped their coffees and engaged in light conversation with Alice, Lara and Dana.
The gang had all witness the interaction between their two friends; they saw the way Tina looked longingly at Bette when she arrived, and the obvious jealousy in Bettes stare, meeting Dr Stephanie
They saw it all
They saw the little twinkle in Dr Stephanies eye too. Alices gaydar was working overtime on the good doctor! Was she or wasnt she? Alice wasnt sure yet?
Whilst in the midst of conversing with their friends Bette and Tina felt so comfortable, they lost themselves in the moment in the atmosphere, and without even realizing they had instinctively grabbed on to each others hand, holding hands under the table. Tina had her hand in Bettes on her thigh.
Bette body immediately responded to the touch revelling in the familiarity for a second before breaking the contact.
Tina realized what she had done and immediately pulled away too; a bit embarrassedShe too felt the familiarity in their touchthe two women gazed at each other.
Tina: Sorry BetteI didnt mean..
Bette interrupted, (smiling cautiously) Me either
Kristie and Stephanie were at the their table, thankfully immersed in their own conversation. Bette was intently trying to listen in, barely able to hear what they were saying.
Kristie: SoHow is your Husband Steph, and that little boy of yours?
Bettes ears pricked up, and a weak smile graced her lips, at the mention of a husband, Shes straight? Bette thought to herself. Thank God
Steph: (sadly) UmI lost Shaun, KrisHe died 3 years ago and little Jason, hes. hes not well! (quickly changing the subject) Thats when I changed to specialise in neurology. How about you Kris. hows things?
Kristie: (looking lovingly at Bette) Things are indeed great! My life is great..So how long have you been friendly with Tina Kennard?..You do know her and Bette had a thing dont you?
Bette didnt like Kristie classing what Tina and her had as a thing.
Stephanie knew Bette might be anxiously listening to her answer; she wasnt going to lie but Well We met just after Tina woke up and it kind of went from there, pretending to play dumb.
Kristie: So you too StephI mean are you a ***** too now?
Stephanie: (laying it on the line) Honestly, Im confused. Fancy a 35-year-old mother being confused about her sexuality hey?.. I just after I lost Shaun, I just feel I could never be with another man…I was with a beautiful woman in college actually, but after I met Shaun, I fell in love and the rest is kinda history.but now, its like I dont find men attractive anymore and I guess Im not adverse to new ideas..Ms Kennard is definitely one hot looking woman, beautiful on the inside and out!! looking over at Tina winking
Bettes jaw hit the floor. The doctor did really like Tina, she was ***** after all??
Tina didnt realize what Steph was doing; catching the wink out of the corner of her eye, innocently winking back..
Bette heard and saw the whole exchange. Her eyes were on fire.Her heart was thumping in her chest.
Bete decided she had had enough, Ok TeeUm.I mean Tina (looking apologetically at Tina) lets go ok..Lets get out of here?
Tina: (simply) Ok! sculling the remainder of her latte.
Tina and Bette had decided to go to the waterfront and talkit was quiet and peaceful there.
They both went over and told Kristie and Stephanie of their intentions to leave.
Kristie pulled Bette to one side, looking at Stephanie, Excuse me just one minute Steph?
Steph: Sure! Steph went over to Tina.
Kristie: Look babe, try and sort this out today please. I want you to talk to me okwhen youre doneyou can call me anytime.
Bette: (reassuringly) Sure babyIll call you when were done ok! Dont worry!!
Bette was half listening to Kristie, half looking over at the interaction between Stephanie and Tina.
Stephanie was playing up to it a bit. She gave an extremely nervous Tina a hug and a kiss on the cheek, (loudly) Ok babe, Ill see you later.. Call me when youre finished. whispering in Tinas ear, go get er girl!!
Tina was equally interested in the interaction with Bette and Kristie.
Watching in vain as Kristie conversed with Bette, then gave her a passionate kiss before Bette turned around and they made a move to leave.
Bette: Ok, lets go Tinaand talk.
Tina: (nervously) Ok Bette, lets go!! Tina knew todays conversation could contain the defining moment that would determine how she lived out the rest of her life………….and she was ready!!!!
Tbc.
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mates….i don’t often leave comments but after what i read at the start of this chapter from ‘?’ i felt that i needed to. I have enjoyed all the fanfic you have writted..this as well as flames…..and i too like a lot of others look out for your name and smile when i see it cos i know it is going to be fun…..and that is what it is all about……hope you are still enjoying the open! xx
Gosh, this is the one of the most heartbreaking stories I ever read. I love it! Don’t give up on it, just like we know Tina and Bette would never give up on each other, no matter how hard things get.
Mate…I really like ur story very much…now in the middle of exam period…shit..but still spending most of my time look for ur updates… keep up ur good work.. cheers!!
You gave got our hackel up.Youdidnt tell Jack that Tina was her other mom .Just a friend. Bette told Kristie that Tina was Jack other mommy, The destructive creticism is from someone that is not a good reader,,reads but doesn’t see. The premise to your story is on the right tracks. love it look for it each day. The stupid hacker that is lowering the rating. I still say is Jealouse of you as a writer,because they can’t . Keep on writing we all love it As a parent we know that you take things slow with children. and with love. IFTHEY DONT LIKE YOUR STORY DON’T READ IT,I chose to do so and I enjoy it very much. Thanks about 30 or more comments to keep on how can you not. 5 big stars.
i know you’ve got sh*t loads of comments here but another wont hurt. Ive been away and yours is the first story Ive caught up with. Everyone is free to say what they want so maybe look on the bright side… 1 person left a crap comment and it encouraged ALL these other people to tell you how great you are at writing. Im glad you’re having fun doing this, i wish i had such an imaginative mind as yours… x
Oh gosh.. this is just … welll… hillarious! I know for those who’re living it ain’t hillarious but it sure is for me. I love the premise of it, the fact that you’re not makin’ it easy for the. C’est la vie my friend.
Hey Mates4eva, Okay I have been with you since you started this amazing story so I will say what I have been saying all along: a: extremely creative concept b: awesome writing skills c: beautiful pace d: realistic relationship issues and emotions e: your humor is lol f: your passion and romance is tasteful and always has a point, which I find sooo refreshing. I could go on and on babe. I am a new writer too, and it does hurt to have your rating suddenly drop. My last 5 chapters all of a sudden got worse. But know by all these comments, (which I figure that for every comment at least 3 other people read it) that you story simply rocks. Thank you for all the time and effort you put into all your work.
No PREMISE??????? WTF!!!! YOU are doing an awesome job, I love your storyline, as for the stars, YOU get tons!!!!
5 stars as usual!!!!
Your story is original and I’m hooked. Just ignore anyone who tells you any different. Roll on the next chapter!!
This is a great story. I look forward to it. Looks like someone may be giving low scores to several of the stories. That is their problem, not yours. Please keep writing.
Me Too this is one of those stories I love! – The rating system sucks – I know I’ve tried voting & it makes no difference – but stars are worthless compared to personal comments – you must believe that we take the time to comment personally because we really do want you to know how a story affected us & want you to know we read & enjoy – I do – we do, I can’t write – hell I can’t imagine the stories you posters do – but I love to read them. Please keep doing what you do so well.
First of all mates…i’ve never seen this many comments, which should tell you something…second, why would you even give them the satisfaction of ending something you love to do? and third do what I do it got me through 4 years of college…say “STEP BEHIND ME HATER!” keep shaking off the haters and you’ll be fine…sometimes you gotta DO YOU!
hmmmm….over 40 comments, all totally in love with this story~my guess, we want MORE!!!!!
One of my favorites and consistently good writing. Don’t worry about one or two people who might not like it – takes all kinds. Thanks for writing.
Everything that I could say has already been stated and then some. I love this story and immediately found the premise intriguing and quite engaging. Please don’t stop because of the few who disagree with your story idea. They don’t have to read it, if they don’t like it. :)
I am adding my 2 cents too.. this story rocks and i look forward to it every day.. you just ignore those fools who don’t know a good story when they read one ( if they can even read) post soon.. 5 stars baby!
Mates….well, you know about asses and opinions…everybody has one. It would be hard NOT to get the premise of this story. Your story is well written and flows nicely. Just keep enjoying what you do and we will keep reading. You do have an audience. Frankly, I don’t remember any stories from ? or ???. Kudos to you.
OK I haven’t even read this chapter yet but I read your comments and I just want to tell you YOUR’s is the story I look for everyday. I love this premise and I believe there are a few immature readers (I’m being nice) who rate the stories as a 1 if they don’t get the required amount of sex or something else (God only knows) out of your the installment. I really love the idea you have here and I like how you are developing it with real emotion and pain and realism that rings true. Please regroup and continue as I love this story and thank you for telling it.
hey I have the answer for the million dollar question… and I’m not hoping anything in return… the correct answer is TINA! and as soon as possible…
While I enjoy many stories here on this forum, there are 2 I look for on a daily basis. This is one of them. Please continue with it. You’re an excellent writer.
Mates, Just went back and read Author’s Notes: Please, please do not give up writing yours stories, i and lots and lots of others would miss them, please don’t stop!!!!!!!!!! posting.
I agree with btfan… there are 2 stories i realy look forward to read and this is one of them. keep it up… Definitely 5 stars
This is an excellent story so I don’t know who is trying to trash it nut please continue…You have me on the egde of my seat and I am a die hard Bette & Tina fan so you how I hope this turns out…Post soon pleae.
This is awesome! I can’t wait for more! Come on Tina, looks like Bette can’t handle herself very welll with the presence of one Dr. Hunter. The games begin!
Hi mates, thanks for the update more than 5 stars, brilliant as always.
mates another great chapter, and i am definately loving your story, so please continue, make it a happy ending for everyone :)
hey I have the answer for the million dollar question… and I’m not hoping anything in return… the correct answer is TINA! and as soon as possible…
I will second btfan’s comment. I instantly look for an update of this story every day. You are a writing a fabulous story that is as emotionally complex as it is compelling. Keep writing!
I am with btfan i love this story so please continue.
The chance that you might not continue this story requires me to leave a comment. I am really enjoying this story so please don’t stop. You are doing a great job and I look forward to new chapters every day so please continue.
Please don’t let the “destructive” criticism of one person make you think this story has no premise…it has had one and still does since chap 1…I agree with the other ladies here…one of my faves and I look for it DAILY…please keep giving us whatever you’ve got…this chapter was much more that just a filler…it is the preverbial “fork in the road!” Rock on…10 stars!
Look I don’t comment anymore but yours is one of the few stories I been reading and your’re doing great. Also don’t worry about the ratings It’s most likely a bug in the system.
Time for Tina to make her intentions clear to Bette. And don’t stop writing.
this story does have a premise and I’m so excited everytime I see that you have posted a new one. Screw whoever doesn’t like the story cus there are so many out there that do. Keep it up!! Can’t wait until the next post!
You never stop surprising me with great chapters. I love this story. :)
Just wanted to add my 2 cents and say that I am really into this story, you’re doing a great job.
i look forward to this story because of the sheer agony. just please give me a little notice if tina and bette are not meant to reconcile at some point. i’m all agnst-out at the moment.
I Like!! This story is awesome. I check for a new update like everday…Great job! Please keep going…
I want to be fair – Kristie is a totally innocent party in all this. But Bette and Tina belong together.
If Bette and Tina aren’t going to get back together, I feel they should cut all ties – never let Jack know about Tina as his mother – and let Kristie assume that role. After all, it’s been 3 1/2 years. It would be disruptive for him to have 2 extra mothers in his life, IMHO. Hurtful? Yes, but Tina should go on and start anew if she and Bette cannot work it out.
Thanks.
Mates, I love this story. Coming home from work and seeing your update completely made my awful day! Please continue! I’m anxiously waiting!
Mate, c’mon now, you know there will always be those that will try and pull down something good. Look, if IC gave up, whenever someone commented less then positive, we would’nt have this wonderful couple (Bette and Tina) to laugh, cry, cheer on, and get all frustrated with. You keep up the good work, it’s a great story that you’re portraying. 5 STARS, all the way. You see, now whoever it is can’t do anything about our comments. So, try as they may, we’ll be here anxiously awaiting your talented imagination, and writing skills to entice us each day. Thanks for sharing, Aussie!
Great story. I really enjoy this story. It has such a different twist than the others. You seem to leave room for the hope of Tina and Bette reuniting and I really like that. I’m also glad that you have given Bette a reason for being jealous.
so for the person who i suspect wouldn’t dare to admit that thinks that this story doesn’t have a premise, why don’t you write one that you think has a premise? satisfied? y’know for someone that says that your story doesn’t have a premise, you have an awful lot of comments.
Oh boy this was great.. it’s getting really juicy! hurry back!
Don´t worry about ratings – you are doing great. This is one of my favorit storys as well. I look forward to the next chapter. Please let it been soon. Can wait.
This series is amazing and is one of my favorites. Don’t even consider not moving forward with it…your loyal and devoted fans would miss this and your writing too much. Ignore the immature and unenlighted, focus on the fans that hit refresh numerous times daily, willing a new post from you to show up. As you can see, there are a ton of us out here. Your talent is larger than the size of your country…which is pretty darn large lol. Keep writing…screw the few naysayers and please the masses. All of this and I haven’t even read this chapter yet, I know it is good…because you wrote it. Bette and Tina forever, can we give Kristi a love interest…I have grown to like her.
This story is great and I look forward to reading…please don’t pay attention to the low ratings this story has all of the elements that make you emotional. Please continue…5 stars all the way!!!
Mates honey don;t even worry or get worked up over the dickhead who is bad mouthing your story, cause all that ,matters is the people who love it. And from all of these comments here their are alot of people out there who have fallen hard for this story just like me. So please don’t even think about stopping cause you have too many fans. Great chapter please post soon.
i think your story is a interesting take on the whole situation, making it all new again. great job!!!don’t let the ignorant few speak for the masses!!!!!!
Love it!! You’re amazing! Please Post soon!!
You know you are a great writer and you don’t have to worry about anything and the rate. I really love your story and always do. You are awesome and please post soon, can’t wait for the next one! 5 stars for you girl!