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Longings Ch7
Tina walked into the restaurant and noticed Bette right away. She walked over to Bette, took a deep breath,
Tina: Hi Bette, I am not sure how you convinced me to come out to meet you in the middle of the night.
Bette: Tina, look, I feel that we needed to sort some things out, the first being you must know that I am attracted to you by now. I am not sure what you have done to me, I am usually the one is pursued, I must admit, I like the pursuer role. Since the moment I met you, I have done nothing but think of you. I think you are an incredibly beautiful woman. You have done something to me. I know the probability of anything happening between us is slim at that, but I want you to know, that I am intrigued by you.
Tina: Bette, you are so sweet, and I too want to get to know you, but, well, I do feel attracted to you, but that scares me to death, I always thought I was straight. Then there is Eric. I am just not sure what to do Bette, when I am near you, I do want to get close to you, so you ask what I have done to you, but I guess I have the same question to you, what have you done to me? I am so afraid to stay but even more afraid to leave. You overwhelm me, Bette. Do you understand that?
Bette: I overwhelm YOU? Oh my God, T, you leave me speechless, breathless, I really want to just be with you, spend time with you, kissing you drives me insane. You have no idea just how beautiful you really are.
Tina: You are a smooth operator arent you?
Bette: No, not with you, with you, I am losing my mind. I can barely keep my thoughts in my head. You are all I think of, all I long for, all I care to be with. Honestly, I have not gone out on a date since I met you at the Gallery. That is huge for me. You have somehow crept into my blood. I feel chemistry with you, and then I realize you are already involve, you are not *****. I try hard to forget that.
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Love this so much. Your pace for the story is perfect.
Tina seems to want Bette. Help her to figure that out and then let them get to know each other.
You have a very creative writing style and an excellent dialogue flow. Please post again soon!
If I had been Tina she would be in my car and I would have myway with Bette. Awestruck. darn girl that is a very mild word for it. MORE< MORE MORE Thanks 5 Stars for you.
I totally agree with Just Once… the pace is perfect. Keep them coming as you can because we are longing for your stories every night… I love it!!
I am enjoying your story and looking forward to where you go with it.
I am not multi-talented…because I write the fanfic too, I have a hard time keeping up with stories….however, this is the only one that I have been following and I SIMPLY LOVE IT! Thanks for another one tonight before bed….5 + STARS
This is perfect the admission and the apprehension is so real. You’ve captured each of them perfectly. I adore this story.
ah.. excellent way to leave the reader. The art of hanging the readers till the next chapter. Don’t worry, i’m used to it by now… but come back …
I totally agree with Just Once…Absolutely perfect pace….Love the story and the way you tell it…..Thanks:)
I love this story so much, keep going. please.xx
Wow beautiful chapter, they are is very lovely for each other. And please let see next chapter. Thank you!