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Longings Ch7
Tina: Bette, (reaching her hand across the table and covering Bettes hand with hers) you know what scares me the most? Is that fact that you have brought out feelings buried deep inside me. I am attracted to you, I did enjoy kissing you, and having your hands roam over my body, and it drove me crazy. What does that mean?
Bette: tell me about Eric. I mean are you two serious, is it a fling, when he kisses you do you melt??
Tina: I care very much for Eric, but no he does not make me feel the way do when we kiss. IBetteI just dont know what to doI dont know, Bette.
Bette takes Tinas hand in hers and brings it up to her lips, she looked deep into her eyes, just take time and think about giving US a chance. I would like very much to spend more time with you. I know you have things to take care of, and a lot of thinking to do, but think of me, go out with me. Be my friend, and lets get to know one another.
Tina: You know as well as I do, that friendship is the farthest thing from your mind. As well as from mind. I would like that, but I fear you will get impatient waiting on me, you know to sort out my life. Before we even go forward, I have to talk Eric, and there is no guarantee that this would work out for us, I really dont know if I am into women
Bette: I dont want you to be into women, just into me, Tina. Besides, I know you are well worth all my patience and understanding. I feel something for you, I have no idea what, but I am not going to stop pursuing it. So, what would you like to do?
Tina: Bette, why me? You can have any woman you want, why me?
Bette: you really have no idea HOW beautiful you really are do you? If you give me a chance, I will NEVER let you forget. You are an amazing girl. Simply amazing. Now, would it be okay if I walked you to your car?
Tina: are you going to behave yourself?
Bette: do you want me too?
Tina: honestly, NO, but I think it would be good if you did, remember baby steps.
Bette: okay, but, T, you are going to drive me insane.
Tina smiled as she walked out of the restaurant with Bette. They walked to Tinas car, and Tina leaned up against it. Bette stood in front of her, and put her arms on either side of her, stepping in close to Tina.
Bette: tell you dont want me to kiss you right now. If you tell me, then I will walk away, but I need to hear you say you dont want me to kiss you.
Tina: (her heart racing) IIBetteI want you to kiss me!
Bette leaned into Tina and kissed her softly, Tina put her arms around Bettes neck and responded.
Bette suddenly pulled away, she smiled at Tina, and took her hand, T, there is more of that when ever you are ready, you let me know, she walked away from Tina and let Tinas hand fall from hers, and headed to her car. Leaving Tina breathless and awestruck.
TBC
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Love this so much. Your pace for the story is perfect.
Tina seems to want Bette. Help her to figure that out and then let them get to know each other.
You have a very creative writing style and an excellent dialogue flow. Please post again soon!
If I had been Tina she would be in my car and I would have myway with Bette. Awestruck. darn girl that is a very mild word for it. MORE< MORE MORE Thanks 5 Stars for you.
I totally agree with Just Once… the pace is perfect. Keep them coming as you can because we are longing for your stories every night… I love it!!
I am enjoying your story and looking forward to where you go with it.
I am not multi-talented…because I write the fanfic too, I have a hard time keeping up with stories….however, this is the only one that I have been following and I SIMPLY LOVE IT! Thanks for another one tonight before bed….5 + STARS
This is perfect the admission and the apprehension is so real. You’ve captured each of them perfectly. I adore this story.
ah.. excellent way to leave the reader. The art of hanging the readers till the next chapter. Don’t worry, i’m used to it by now… but come back …
I totally agree with Just Once…Absolutely perfect pace….Love the story and the way you tell it…..Thanks:)
I love this story so much, keep going. please.xx
Wow beautiful chapter, they are is very lovely for each other. And please let see next chapter. Thank you!