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The Promise
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Janet M – oh you know theres always more for you luv!
Ange – GOD you HAVE TO REMIND ME! Im sorry I learned this summer in europe people cant stand talking to Americans cause theres so much slang…thats all our language really is anyway when you compare it to the brits…Im from Jersey, SO a wife-beater is the little white (or in some cases gray or black or blue) A-shirt tanks tops that fruit of the loom or Hanes makes…we call them wife beaters cause on tv the guys with beer bellies walk around in them and look like the type to beat there wives….Ok that sounds really harsh now that Ive said it out it out loud…I dont know if its a tri-state (Phill, nyc and jersey really) thing. In the future dont be afraid to ask.
Maybeyes – Im sorry luv, dont mean to play with your emotions..the tea was to calm you for chapter 30.5′s music challenge, and for 31….you might want to take a long bath or something…let me go grab the lavender beads..aye?
Kabby – I like your style, I absolutely hate paying bills.
Ange …song challenges are open to anyone…let me see if my kazaa is working today and Ill get on it.
Chapter 30
~One Sweet Day~
Darling, I never told you
assumed youd always be there
I took your presence for granted
but I always cared
and I miss the love we shared
Lara, Jenny, Dash and Shane sat in the living room. Each had a report folder of a different color in their hand or lap.
Bette: Now, as you can see from the itineraries that James has prepared for you, each of your schedules, supplies and destinations have been laid out for you….so nothing will be compromised.
Bette shot a glance at Jenny who starred off into space.
James: Now if we look at the chart, all of the events are listed in order and are color coded for the corresponding individual who will carry them out. I have put this in the back of your packet so that you know where everyone else is at all times.
Dash: Okay, I know you need our help, but I dont know what the ***** a *****-ak-e mushroom is…and how am I going to buy a bottle of Chi…Chi-an-ti …what is it anyway?
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whoa 2 in one day, great chapters. I really cant wait for the next one. U like it right? I mean when you’re leaving us hanging? ~grins~ excellent
DRAMA…DRAMA…too much drama…(I love it) keep up the good work woman..
nooooo you can’t leave us hanging! I need to know what happened to Tina!
Just read both of your updated and they’re great as usual…. although I must confess I didn’t spot the Shakespeare which I’m usually good at! :( ha ha Thanx again and please post another one soon? :)
NO You can’t stop here !!! I want to know what Tina has seen in this envelope… Steven Jaffe ? I’m afraid !!!
Maybe a bath will be good for me like you say…
What was in the envelope? You just have to post another tonight. Please, don’t make me beg.
what the …? keep it coming. i was checking all weekend and finally you hit us with 2, thanks!
Nice twist! So, it was Steven who hired the man to follow Shane around, not Cheri, and now Tina has proof of the suspected affair between Bette and Shane… Am I close?
Sorry for not commenting on the other chapters, but I finally have internet connection (surprisingly since I’m on a cruise with the fam) and am now able to catch up on stories. I’ve liked everything you’ve written since MIP III. :)
Also, since I’m on a cruise, I’m missing the season premier of the L Word, darn it!
Shane is scared. Can Steve Jaffe really do that much harm? What is wrong with Tina? You write and We will read.
Ok now Shane got the phone call and she scare, what happen to Tina when she read the envelope, what is it in the envelope. Please post soon, thank you!