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The Promise
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Tina sat in her office reading over the latest script. It was ***** as Folk meets Joan of Arcadia meets Dark Angel….and the main character was paraplegic….the tag line was Fighting crime one Lick at a Time She groaned and tossed the script across the room.
Tina: The plane crashes on an island of long lost Amazon women? Give me a break!
Tina stood up and paced in front of her desk. Something caught her eye in her inbox. She grabbed the thick manila envelope and opened it. She pulled out what was inside but couldnt stop what hit her next. This time everything hit her before she could realize what was happening. Fade to Black.
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Alice: Tina…*****! …Tina, youre scarring the ***** out of me.
Tina opened her eyes to see Alice crying over her.
Alice: Thank God….just sit up slow…take it easy.
Tina sat up to see she was next to her own pool of vomit. She rubbed her temples to push away the pounding behind her eyes.
Tina: Al…I
Alice: Tina we need to get you to a hospital…
Tina: No …I need to…
Alice: Tina what the ***** happened?
Tina sat thinking of what she did before Alice woke her up. She turned and reached for the envelope that was under her desk and handed it to Alice. Alice opened it and gasped. Tears streamed from her eyes and the muffled sounds of Tinas sobbing were drowned out by the screaming voice in her head.
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Everyone turned to look at Shane, whos phone was ringing.
Shane: I dont put my phone on ring?
She looked at the phone that said No ID and answered it..
Dash: Actually they make it now so the person who is calling can pick their ring.
Bette went back to talking and when she stopped mid sentence to stare at Shane, everyone else turned their attention to her. Shane sat trembling with a ghostly pale face holding the cell phone in front of her.
Bette: Hun what is it?
Shane: Steven Jaffe just called…he said that Ive ruined enough marriages ….My life as I know it is over …and that the truth would come out one way or another…
Song to Download for Chapter 30.5 is Fool of Me By mShell indege unchello
(That was a ridiculous attempt at her name but give me a break… its from the love and basketball soundtrack)
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whoa 2 in one day, great chapters. I really cant wait for the next one. U like it right? I mean when you’re leaving us hanging? ~grins~ excellent
DRAMA…DRAMA…too much drama…(I love it) keep up the good work woman..
nooooo you can’t leave us hanging! I need to know what happened to Tina!
Just read both of your updated and they’re great as usual…. although I must confess I didn’t spot the Shakespeare which I’m usually good at! :( ha ha Thanx again and please post another one soon? :)
NO You can’t stop here !!! I want to know what Tina has seen in this envelope… Steven Jaffe ? I’m afraid !!!
Maybe a bath will be good for me like you say…
What was in the envelope? You just have to post another tonight. Please, don’t make me beg.
what the …? keep it coming. i was checking all weekend and finally you hit us with 2, thanks!
Nice twist! So, it was Steven who hired the man to follow Shane around, not Cheri, and now Tina has proof of the suspected affair between Bette and Shane… Am I close?
Sorry for not commenting on the other chapters, but I finally have internet connection (surprisingly since I’m on a cruise with the fam) and am now able to catch up on stories. I’ve liked everything you’ve written since MIP III. :)
Also, since I’m on a cruise, I’m missing the season premier of the L Word, darn it!
Shane is scared. Can Steve Jaffe really do that much harm? What is wrong with Tina? You write and We will read.
Ok now Shane got the phone call and she scare, what happen to Tina when she read the envelope, what is it in the envelope. Please post soon, thank you!