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The Roommates: Chapter One
Bette
As her fathers car approached the campus of UCLA, Bette Porters dark brown eyes scanned the skyline of
Her fathers deep voice bounced off the fine leather interior of his luxury automobile, but Bette hadnt the slightest clue as to what he was talking about. Melvins words continued to resonate around her as Bette gazed out at the southern
Stop thinking about her, Bette. Shes not thinking about you. She hasnt even called in 3 years. Dont let her take the joy out of this day. This is the happiest day of your life. Youre getting paroled from the Porter compound. Concentrate on whats to come. Dont think about her. Enjoy this day., she thought to herself.
At long last, the car pulled to a stop and Melvin turned off the engine. With a wide smile, he turned to his daughter and said, Well, were here.
Bette smiled in return. Yes, we are. Thanks for driving, Daddy.
No thanks needed. Lets get you settled, sweetheart., said Melvin.
Tina
Tina Kennard sat on the edge of her twin bed and looked around at the half-empty dorm room. She sighed deeply and picked up a picture of her boyfriend, Eric, tracing the lines of his face with her index finger. She had just moved into the dorm and already she missed him. How on earth are we going to keep up our relationship when hes so far away?, she thought. Eric had gotten a scholarship to
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(83 votes, average: 3.53 out of 5)
this is different and i definately like it….continue soon…your writing style is very good…..
this is different and i definately like it….continue soon…your writing style is very good…..
in the process of rereading this masterpiece….
Interesting, I bet. If Bette has her way, Tina won’t know what hit her come winter break. Nice setup, now let’s have another chapter, please.
Wow this is interesting and excited story and I really like it. Please post soon the next one, can’t wait to see what happen next. Thank you!
Like your idea. Please keep going.
Great beginning! You can go in many different directions with the way you’ve set it up! Please post soon!
cant believe this is your first,its so good, go where you want to!!
Excellent start!
Wonderful start, love the college idea. Great pace too. Keep going for sure.
As a girl who has spent much time in the dorms, your description was spot on. Love the chemistry. Keep going!
i more than five years late. But I like it. I have lots of reading ahead of me.
This looks interesting.