I know it was long, but I have the tendency to keep on writing, until I feel like I said all I have to say. Beside, I don’t leave comments on every stories that I had read, so I think that should balance and even everything out. Instead of five short comments, I’ll write a page of comments, so I think that’s fair. (*NOTE* I only write a novel worth of comments only if, that’s if, I read the Author’s note, and see that they’re asking a question. So, if I see that they are asking a question, I feel obligated to answer it because it would be incredibly rude of me not to give at least a quick answer, when you took your time to write us stories)…(*sighing and thinking*…Am I going of the track here? Damn, I do write a lot.)
Anyway, quick questions to you BTADDICT…
Have you found you’re ‘funny shoes’ yet? If not, what will it take for you to find it, because I know a lot of jokes that I can tell you, so you could find that ‘funny’ in you again….
(*thinking, and now worrying*…I hope BTADDICT found it already, because I really do not know any jokes. Damn, why do I have to lie, so she could post the next chapters to ‘CAPTIVATING’ and ‘LOVE’S CALLING’?)
… Now, this is only a suggestion if you still haven’t found your ‘funny’ yet, and do not take me up on my offer about the jokes. Okay, I know you that you’ve lost or misplaced your ‘funny’. So, like my mama always told me when I lose something, she said, “Baby, retrace you steps to where you put it last, and if it’s not there…” . Um, Sorry, I forgot the rest, maybe this wasn’t a good suggestion anyway…(*thinking*..I’m going off track again).
Okay, I don’t want to go on any further because I want to keep this short. So, I’m going to leave but before I leave, I would like to say something first… I don’t think that you should of written this new story yet, because now, how are you going to be able to find time writing all of your other stories. This new one, ‘GIDDY’, is AWESOME! So, now you have ‘CAPTIVATING’, ‘GIDDY’, and ‘LOVE’s CALLING’. And that’s stinks, because I would prefer a chapter a day from each of the story, but I don’t think that will happen…or can it?? (HEY,CAN’t BLAME ME FOR TRYING, IT’S REALLY YOUR FAULT, BECAUSE YOUR STORIES ARE GREAT.)
Ahhhhhh. I sigh a contented sigh as I get a fix from one of BT’s great stories. I really like this beginning. It leaves me feeling “Giddy”. I especially liked this part.. “Not that Bette had to be alone. Please, the women of West Hollywood were at her designer shoe clad feet.” Very nice touch. Now that you’ve baited and hooked us, we’ll keep tugging the line and waiting for more. (hint hint)
Wonderful as always bt! just got back from my weekend trip and found you had posted. This gives me a great big smile and makes me happy. I love your writing, so please post again soon.
WOW…this is different from the BT I’m used to reading. Don’t worry, it’s different in a good way :) I like the way you describe each of their emotions, emotions of hope, happiness, and their insecurities. This is really good stuff…I’m beyond impressed, BT. I am looking forward to the next chapter. Great job!!!
Hey btaddict…i’ve been a keen follower of your other series (captivating) as well and i must say you’ve never failed to make me smile and at times roll on the floor and laugh with your so natural dialogues..between all the characters..here i cudnt control my laughter when i read “Bette was speechless and felt a lump in her throat. ‘If she starts talking about sex technique I will die right here on the spot…’” Holy cow was tht funny or what..you are truly good babe…looking forward to the next chapter.. : )
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Very nice interweaving of internal thoughts and character dialogue. Really really good.
i think i held my breath for the entire chapter.
Interesting…where will it go?
Sweet…
WOW!!! this is so cute I love it Awesome and NEAT writen Please post soon.
I love Bette and Tina beginnings. And I love roller coasters! Very nicely done.
Please continue – great writing.x
Very nice, i like.
This is so awesome and cute for the couple. Post soon, thank you!
*LAUGHING* (After reading your Author’s note)…
I know it was long, but I have the tendency to keep on writing, until I feel like I said all I have to say. Beside, I don’t leave comments on every stories that I had read, so I think that should balance and even everything out. Instead of five short comments, I’ll write a page of comments, so I think that’s fair. (*NOTE* I only write a novel worth of comments only if, that’s if, I read the Author’s note, and see that they’re asking a question. So, if I see that they are asking a question, I feel obligated to answer it because it would be incredibly rude of me not to give at least a quick answer, when you took your time to write us stories)…(*sighing and thinking*…Am I going of the track here? Damn, I do write a lot.)
Anyway, quick questions to you BTADDICT…
Have you found you’re ‘funny shoes’ yet? If not, what will it take for you to find it, because I know a lot of jokes that I can tell you, so you could find that ‘funny’ in you again….
(*thinking, and now worrying*…I hope BTADDICT found it already, because I really do not know any jokes. Damn, why do I have to lie, so she could post the next chapters to ‘CAPTIVATING’ and ‘LOVE’S CALLING’?)
… Now, this is only a suggestion if you still haven’t found your ‘funny’ yet, and do not take me up on my offer about the jokes. Okay, I know you that you’ve lost or misplaced your ‘funny’. So, like my mama always told me when I lose something, she said, “Baby, retrace you steps to where you put it last, and if it’s not there…” . Um, Sorry, I forgot the rest, maybe this wasn’t a good suggestion anyway…(*thinking*..I’m going off track again).
Okay, I don’t want to go on any further because I want to keep this short. So, I’m going to leave but before I leave, I would like to say something first…
I don’t think that you should of written this new story yet, because now, how are you going to be able to find time writing all of your other stories. This new one, ‘GIDDY’, is AWESOME! So, now you have ‘CAPTIVATING’, ‘GIDDY’, and ‘LOVE’s CALLING’. And that’s stinks, because I would prefer a chapter a day from each of the story, but I don’t think that will happen…or can it?? (HEY,CAN’t BLAME ME FOR TRYING, IT’S REALLY YOUR FAULT, BECAUSE YOUR STORIES ARE GREAT.)
Ahhhhhh. I sigh a contented sigh as I get a fix from one of BT’s great stories. I really like this beginning. It leaves me feeling “Giddy”. I especially liked this part..
“Not that Bette had to be alone. Please, the women of West Hollywood were at her designer shoe clad feet.” Very nice touch. Now that you’ve baited and hooked us, we’ll keep tugging the line and waiting for more. (hint hint)
Wooo, I have MISSED you! I love your stories and this is another winner. Please continue as soon as possible. I am hoplessly addicted…..
Ahh i love this always a sucker for these two thanks
loved this story. Very nicely done,it made me laugh outloud.
Wonderful as always bt! just got back from my weekend trip and found you had posted. This gives me a great big smile and makes me happy. I love your writing, so please post again soon.
Hey BT, nice work. I love how you are writing the beginning of B&T. Sweet, loving and I’m sure funny will play a part soon. Please continue…soon. mulu
I liked Samnangs comments. *laughs* I love this so far! I always enjoy your posts-so creative and witty and sweet and…Thanks.
What more can one say? Love this wonderful beginning.
WOW…this is different from the BT I’m used to reading. Don’t worry, it’s different in a good way :) I like the way you describe each of their emotions, emotions of hope, happiness, and their insecurities. This is really good stuff…I’m beyond impressed, BT. I am looking forward to the next chapter. Great job!!!
Hey btaddict…i’ve been a keen follower of your other series (captivating) as well and i must say you’ve never failed to make me smile and at times roll on the floor and laugh with your so natural dialogues..between all the characters..here i cudnt control my laughter when i read “Bette was speechless and felt a lump in her throat. ‘If she starts talking about sex technique I will die right here on the spot…’” Holy cow was tht funny or what..you are truly good babe…looking forward to the next chapter.. : )
loved it…