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Love Is Another Word For Regret pt 15
Tina? Eric asked, watching as his flaxen haired beauty batted her eyelashes, lids barely open as the light bore down upon her. It took several moments for Tina to realize she wasnt home, that the mattress she was on was far too worn, the sheets far too crisp.
She looked up into caring blue eyes, offering a gentle smile to assure that she was fine. Then it all came back to her, the sudden rush of memory flooded her exhausted body, causing her head to flop back into the starchy pillowcase. She inhaled with a hint of a sigh, looking to Eric.
Im sorry. She admitted, throat burning and dry.
He smiled reassuringly and gently stroked her silky blonde locks.
Dont worry about it, baby. Youre just shocked. Thats all. Its a lot for you to handle, I mean moving out here to LA with me and then having to adjust to this whole new life. And next thing you know Im proposing to you.
Tina slowly propped her torso up against the bed board, Im not shocked, Eric. Im sorry because I cannot marry you.
She hadnt even felt the tears spilling over the barriers of her lids. His kind, gentle smile turned to an unruly frown.
But Tina, weve been together for almost 6 years. Why not make it our whole lives? He probed her glistening eyes. Is this the end? Is that what you want; to just throw this away?
She shook her head, spilling golden strands before her eyes. Im not ready for marriage. I just cant think about it right now. This isnt the end, I want to be with you but I cant make a commitment yet. Its going to take me sometime.
Well *****, Tina. The slap of his palms on his jeans startled the young woman, her body reeled back with the fear of the strong hand meeting her delicate, tanned cheek. When will you be ready? A man can only wait so long. He insisted, reaching for her hand.
Well, Ill let you know when Im ready. She offered a small smile, meeting his eyes as she pulled her hand away from his touch. I think I need a break, Eric. A little time away from you, to see how I can handle life on my own. Weve been together so long, I just think I need time to develop my own life before I can share one with you.
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(42 votes, average: 3.52 out of 5)
Take your time. I like how you are building the characters. And I cannot believe he put his hands on her. She could press charges against him. I hope Bette calls her back when she can “focus”. I’ll journey anywhere you take us. Waiting on that next post!
you should keep the b/s story line its really good
hey… not that i’m complaining here but i guess….just a little okay! could you please get BETTE AND TINA TOGETHER NOW. thank you!
I for one am totally loving the B/S interaction. It is quite hot. Woo! I am in no hurry to see B&T interaction, although that will be nice too.
Great update, can’t wait for more.
Love your writing, but just cannot get my head round Bette and shane, so not right,like mother and daughter in my mind,shanes way too young for bette, eww.
Love Shane to death,but can’t see him a bette together. Like the fact that Tina felt free to call Bette. .Eric should have not hit Tina, because she needed time to find herself. Thanks
#1 Great story, #2 I need Bette and Tina together A.S.A.P last but definately not least. BEAT THAT BOYS ASS. YOU DONT PUT YOUR HANDS ON NO WPMAN. I A LIL UPSET THAT TINA DIDNT KIRK ON HIM AND PISSED THAT BETTE BARELY REACTED. They act like this is normal. Just my 2 cents. Please put thoes two together soon.
Good chapter. I can’t believe that Eric hit Tina, and now she want to talk to Bette and can’t wait to see what’s happen next. Post soon.
Even though I’m liking where this is going, I think Bette was a total bitch to Tina. She calls and tells her she’s been hit and all she’s interested in is having the big O. She’s gonna have to make up for that big time!