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The Promise
Chapter 51
Shane was knocked out of her daydream by Dashs wiry body climbing over her to get out the truck. Shane rubbed her eyes and looked up to see they were sitting in the alley along side St. Judes Dash was practically straddling Shane as she reached to open the door. Shane blinked and realized they were inches from each others faces. She swallowed loud enough for everyone in the truck to hear and remained still as her body was a stone block.
Dash: Uhm…sorry I didnt…uh…want to …you know…wake you…I uh….
Shane: Its….uhm….yeah …okay….I mean weve been sleeping together for like a week so…
Van: WHAT!!!!
Dash and Shane both went ghostly pale as they turned to see an irate Van growling in their direction.
Dash: Uhm
Shane: Innocent..
Dash: Plutonic..
Shane: Unsexual..completely…
Dash: Unadulterated…non homosexual.
Shane: Holier than thou type sleep.
Dash: Yeah…I made her keep on her underwear.
Dash slapped her hand over her mouth and her eyes went wide. Shane could see Van was doing everything he could not to explode. He was even doing his Thai chi meditational breathing exercises Father Joe had taught them. He looked like he was about to hyperventilate and Shane was praying hed start a fight with her so she could storm off and forget the doctor ever existed.
Van: We….will discuss….the sleeping …arrangements…at another time…
Van let out a heavy breath, as if hed just given labor. Shane let out a mental ***** Me! because of Vans ability to maintain control and Dash gave a nod to show how impressed she was. She dismounted Shane and climbed from the truck before she reached up and put her hand on Shanes knee.
Dash: Call your cell if you need me…Im just a cabride away.
Shane nodded as Dash closed the door. She turned to walk in the back door of the church and pulled out her new key from her pocket and let herself in before she disappeared, Shane called out to her.
Shane: Uhm….Dash?
Dash: Yeah?
Shane: Thanks…
Dash shrugged and blew her hair out of her eyes.
Dash: No biggie…I kinda owe you on account of all the crashing Ive been doing at you place…plus the phone is really sweet!
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(16 votes, average: 4.56 out of 5)
Okay, as requested, comments come now…please keep it up and don’t take so long between posts. Laissez les bon temps rouler!
So glad you got back to this. I am am waiting patiently for some answers and you keep writing more laden with question.
Excellent job!
i am loveing your work. hope things work out for shane and alice.
I Also think Dash is such a great cartor. Post soon
2 things. What the hell did they drag Dash into and What had happen to Shane in tha past, why her body was so messed up. You better give me a fix soon hun cuz their a lotta thing I wanna know. It’s a so damn good story.
WOW it took me all night to read all your chapters..so i could catch up with this last one. You got me hooked! I love it :D. Now i wonder what happened to Shane in the past..she was raped? I wanna know about Alice too…will Shane forgive her? I hope so!. I can’t wait for next chapter. Excellent job! ;D
hmmmm the price we must all pay for not getting testesed, wrap it up all of you : )
Always impressing me with your talent. Oh and…what makes you think that I wouldn’t make someone else my bitch in prison. You forget how I am at work..~winks~
Great chapter. Hope everything will be ok and work out for Shane and Alice. Post soon, thank you!
WOW!!!! Heartwrenching , Heartwarming ,Funny @ Sad . This was a Wonderful posting Writen by a truly gifted Storyteller.Ilook forward to reading how the mysteries raised in these chapters come to light. AS always thank you for the privelege of reading your story.
Thanks for the 3 chaps today. Loved them all. Btw the docs sounded nice.
OK – i have spent the bette part of a rainy NY saturday reading this entore sotry and all I can saw is wow – i laughed out loud and shed a tear – amazing job!
So much secrecy… I’m dying of curiosity here!!! More please…
lovin it!!!!!!!!!! i think you’re doing great…just waitin’ to see shane and alice together again!!! and dash and dana together…they’re hilarious