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    The Promise

    Story written on April 30, 2005 by TheRealJLO.
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    Chapter 51 – pink roses

    Once they got to the corner, Shane stopped the truck and undid her seatbelt.

    Shane: He would have flipped if he knew you were driving….lets hurry up and switch.

    This time, Dash seemed a little less excited to drive them but reluctantly did so, knowing she was there only way of getting to their drop-off point.

    An hour and a half later, Shane squinted as the bright neon lights blared in her eyes. She shielded her eyes to see they were at a convenience store. They had finished their drop-off for the night and were supposed to be pulling into the driveway back at the house. She looked at Dash in question. Between the pain that flooded her body and the incessant jerking of the truck, she hadnt bothered to pay attention to where they were, but instead opted to fester on their activities that night.

    Dash: It says you have to eat.

    Shane: What does?

    Dash pulled out a handful of bottles for Shane to see.

    Dash: Oh *****! Theyve got you doing their dirty work for them….watch out Dash theyre gonna turn you into one of their minions!

    Dash shrugged and put them back in her pocket.

    Dash: Come on theyll help you sleep and take away the pain.

    Shane: I hate sleeping….and the pain keeps me awake..and it lets me know Im still

    Dash: Alive?

    Shane turned to look at Dash and then opened the door and climbed down. Her silence was all Dash needed for an answer to her question. They went inside and browsed the aisles as the puke green florescent lights bathed them in their sickening light. Dash grabbed several junk food items and met Shane at the front counter, with orange juice and a granola bar.

    Dash: Youre no fun.

    Shane shrugged and picked through a large container or cheap plastic watches.

    Dash: Wait!

    Shane stopped what she was doing and froze with a neon pink watch in her hand.

    Dash: I need something.

    Dash ran down the aisle and came back with a tube of crazy glue. Shane looked at her like she had three heads when she grabbed a neon purple watch at the bottom of the jar and placed it on the counter with the rest of the food.

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    4. 2 things. What the hell did they drag Dash into and What had happen to Shane in tha past, why her body was so messed up. You better give me a fix soon hun cuz their a lotta thing I wanna know. It’s a so damn good story.

    5. WOW it took me all night to read all your chapters..so i could catch up with this last one. You got me hooked! I love it :D. Now i wonder what happened to Shane in the past..she was raped? I wanna know about Alice too…will Shane forgive her? I hope so!. I can’t wait for next chapter. Excellent job! ;D

    7. Always impressing me with your talent. Oh and…what makes you think that I wouldn’t make someone else my bitch in prison. You forget how I am at work..~winks~

    9. WOW!!!! Heartwrenching , Heartwarming ,Funny @ Sad . This was a Wonderful posting Writen by a truly gifted Storyteller.Ilook forward to reading how the mysteries raised in these chapters come to light. AS always thank you for the privelege of reading your story.

    11. OK – i have spent the bette part of a rainy NY saturday reading this entore sotry and all I can saw is wow – i laughed out loud and shed a tear – amazing job!

    13. lovin it!!!!!!!!!! i think you’re doing great…just waitin’ to see shane and alice together again!!! and dash and dana together…they’re hilarious

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