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The Promise
I have a message for a non reader…DAMN YOU JULIA!!!!!
Chapter 54
Alice sat on the couch playing her fathers electric guitar, when she heard a knock on the door and stopped playing. She held the bridge of the guitar against her forehead. She said a silent prayer that it would be the one person she wanted to see. But why would Shane be at her apartment at eleven on a Thursday? Alice took a deep breath and stood up, placing her guitar to the side. She rolled her eyes and laughed at her ridiculous imagination. She flung the door open, prepared to out wit and out class whatever Jehovahs Witness or stain remover salesmen that dared to step foot on her threshold.
Alice opened her mouth ready to attack but for once in her life found herself speechless. There Shane stood with her head down and her hands behind her back barefoot and weary. Both women stood silently staring at the floor. Alice shifted her weight from one foot to another, while Shane chewed nervously on her bottom lip. Shane finally gathered some courage and leaned against the edge of the doorframe. She looked up at Alice with trepidation in her eyes.
Alice: Does this mean you got my message?
Shane nodded slowly and handed Alice a disorganized bunch of flowers held clenched in her hand.
Alice: For me?
Shane nodded again and Alice took the make shift bouquet
Alice: Thanksbut none of these are my favorites.
Shane: I was hoping they werent.
Alice: Why?
Shane: Cause uhmId likeI thought maybe we could try again
Alice: Really?
Alice leaned against the opposite side of the door frame and crossed her arms as Shane nodded her head again.
Alice: So why were you hoping they werent my favorite then?
Alice sniffed the flowers and gave an indignant look as Shane snatched them back.
Shane: You gonna invite me in so I can explain?
Alice: Ohuhm surewhy dont youuhmShane?
Shane: Yeah Al?
Shane stepped into the Apartment as Alice closed the door. For the first time Alice noticed she was holding her laptop behind her back. Shane hopped over the couch and placed the laptop on the coffee table before kicking her bare feet up as well.
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(21 votes, average: 4.19 out of 5)
loved both chapters but this one made me laugh especially the martha stewart joke
*doing happy dance*
*sitting back down coz blister is too much to handle* ;)
Thanx so much for another amazing chapter, and 2 in one night we’re truly blessed =0) Thank you!!
Finally. A real great chapter. Thank you
I’M so happy that they finaly got back together. So cute. Can’t wait to have another update I really need a fix.
BEAUTIFUL CHAPTER PLEASE POST SOON
Yay im back! stupid computer!!. Awesome chapters girl! im so happy they are back toguether :D They need eachother. I love your story…Thanks :D
What a wonderful chapter,the best yet!!! Your writing is amazing You so deserve an award!!! i’m so glad that Shane @ Alice are back together again I knew I could Trust You to get them back together. I don’t know what is going to happen with Dash maybe Bette @ tina Can Adopt her.Thank you for posting this wonderful chapter. Now i’m going toread it and enjoy it again.I hope your computer gets fixed soon I miss your witty omments They are part of the fun of reading your story.
So so so sweeeeeet!!!
un-f*cking-belivable!!! Those were the sweetest chapters i read!!! Amazing!!! (just like nix….doing a happy dance here!!!!) Keep it up doing really great!!!!
This is good, I’m glad they work it out and now let see what’s happen next. Post soon, thank you!
haha i love this chap….O.O WHAT DO YOU MEAN NO MORE SEX?!?!