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    The Promise

    Story written on June 4, 2005 by TheRealJLO.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=54436
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    Chapter 54 – Kung Fu Hustle

    Chapter 54

    ::BEEP::BEEP::

    Shane looked down and watched Alice sleeping against her chest. She reached over with her left hand carefully towards her watch, trying desperately not to wake the sleeping beauty. She tapped and poked every button on the watch glued to her cast, but the watch continued to beep.

    Shane: ***** (She mumbled)

    Alice’s head snapped up and Shane bit back the laughter towards her disheveled strawberry-blonde hair. Alice reached out blindly and shut off the watch. She wiped her mouth with the back of her hand at the same time Shane peeled her shirt away from her chest in the wet spot Alice’s drool left behind. Shane looked disgusted, as Alice continued to stretch and wipe the sleep from her eyes.

    Alice: It’s *****…get over it.

    Shane: *****?

    Alice nodded and finally opened her eyes after her afternoon nap. They had remained in each other’s arms after Shane arrived and were just now moving for the first time.

    Alice: What’s the alarm for?

    Shane leaned over and pulled out a small square from her pocket. She unfolded the sheet of paper and spread it out.

    Shane: Hmmm…Says, One-thirty…take antibiotics….eat heavy, no grease, light on the dairy…..drink lots of water…English at two-thirty.

    Alice: So you write yourself notes now?

    Shane: Dash does…she’s got everything organized with all the psycho instructions from Van the Doctor.

    Shane stretched her arms out and pulled down her legs as Alice got up from the couch and made her way to the kitchen. Shane got up and went to follow. She hoped up on the counter and watched with a reminiscent smile as Alice was bent over searching the fridge. Alice could feel eyes on her and a smile spread on her face.

    Alice: Don’t even think about it… you have a client at Two- thirty and you need to eat before you go…last thing I need is that girl hating on me.

    Shane: What?

    Alice turned to look at Shane with a skeptical look on her face.

    Alice: I know what you’re thinking and we don’t have time.

    Alice sat the left over chicken and flour tortillas on the counter next to Shane. She stood between her legs and tilted her head up for a kiss. Shane tugged playfully on her bottom lip and let her hands wander down to the hem of Alice’s shirt causing her to moan into the kiss.

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    2. Yeh, that would have been cruel if you just left us hanging, especially your loyal fans. Good Chapter. Well if you do want to leave, you can a least end the story properly. Good Job.
      Oh yeah, is your computer problems worked out?

    3. Im glad you decided to stay and update your story. We don’t have many Shane’s fics and yours is so good that would be a shame if didnt continue..it would be sad especially for your loyal fans and Shane’s fans. Great chapter! and please continue :)

    7. I really hope your gonna finish your story cuz their still a lot I wanna know about Shane past. Great update as usual. I really loved it. Can’t wait for my next fix.

    10. i read all the story in the last two days and it is all fucking awsome. i love it, some writers just don’t go into enough detail, others just go on and on about things that mean nothing, you’ve got the perfect balance. the whle story is well thought out. i think alice and shane are great together, i love the interaction between dash and shane. i like the way you have went with all the characters through i wasn’t too sure about the dana/lara scence in the club, it seemed too bold for dana.
      i really hope you continue.

    13. At first i had to confess never read any fanfic before. But than someone mentioned this story on the discussion board and i decided to read your story. What can i tell? fascinated, gripped, thrilled!!! I read it three times running. Your story is just amazing. Thank you very, very much!!!!
      And pleaseeeeeeee continue soon. Can´t wait for another chapter. Love this story.

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