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    Revisionist History Chapter 5

    Story written on May 29, 2005 by justkeepswimming.
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    Tina shares her good news; Bette apologizes. Will it be enough for Tina?

    Alice, it was incredible, Tina gushed as she shared her news over the phone from her living room. She agreed to fund the project with a 20% over run clause. If we go a bit over budget, we have that huge cushion.

    What can I say Tina, its great news, Alice was truly happy for her. We should get everyone together and have a bit of a celebration tonight.

    I would like nothing better, Tina replied, but Bettes dad is in town and were going out for supper.

    Oh, Alices voice was somber. My condolences.

    Tina giggled.

    Thanks, Al, but he is mellowing with age. Not quite the tyrant he was when you met him anyways.

    Yeah, well Ill just take your word on that.

    Tina heard the sound of a vehicle pulling into their driveway and saw from the corner of her eye that it was Bettes blue Saab.

    Oh my God, its only 4:15 and Bettes already pulling into the driveway. I wonder if somethings wrong Tinas sentence trailed off. Id better let you go, Al.

    Sure Tina, let me know if somethings up though okay?

    Absolutely, well talk tomorrow.

    Tina placed the cordless phone back on its cradle and went to the door to meet Bette. She was excited to share her good news, but also somewhat concerned at what brought Bette home so early.

    She opened the door as Bette began her ascent of the steps to the porch at the front of their house. She couldnt hide the look of concern on her face.

    What are you doing home so early?

    Why, Bette asked as she flashed her brilliant smile, you got someone hiding in there.

    Tina rolled her eyes at Bette as they met by the door. It was only then she noticed Bette was holding a wrapped gift.
    Is that something for Melvin?

    No, were giving him a picture of us, remember? This is for the mother of my baby, Bette leaned in and kissed Tina on the corner of her mouth. They stepped inside together.

    You really are being contrite, Tina observed. I thought you would just pretend our conversation this morning never took place.

    Bette got serious for a moment.

    I had no business trying to tell you what to wear tonight. Although that event may seem small to me, I see how you would think my words implied a lack of respect for you. I said I was sorry and I meant it. I left work early to spend time with you and to bring you this. She held out the small package, wrapped in simple, yet brightly coloured tissue paper.

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    3. You consistently deliver and that fact may be missed by you and even those who read you; please keep it up. You’re one of the best writers on the site.

    4. good chapter, nice to see Bette being considerate towards Tina’s feelings, shame we didn’t see this in thw show. love your direction, post soon.

    7. I have to handle it to you, I am loving this side of Bette. What’s going to happen when they meet Melvin? Tina saids he has mellow out with age to Alice. I can’t wait to see if he calls her Ms. Kennard…or perhaps he will call her Tina in your version? eh? Thanks for the story, I’m loving it.

    9. JKS…. yes i’m still reading… funny no one has ever called me elelyn wood before…i laughed out laud…love your story… see now thats the way the show should have gone…. tina standing up to bette and bette realizing tina was right and be there for each other
      BTW…i could just see tina striping and running through the house and diving into the pool…beautiful… simply beautiful… so please continue

    10. “I knew you would work your magic on Helena Peabody, she couldn’t resist you…”
      Is this irony or what? I like the way the same secondary characters (Helena, Wischnia)are entering your story in a similar yet subtly altered context, as though Bette and Tina (and we) are experiencing a mild version of deja vu. This is really good stuff!
      Your vocab is doing just fine without my input, but thanks for the compliment!
      And…just keep on keepin’ on – swimming, commenting, writing…

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