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Long Road to Happiness Part 4
Previously…….
The detective finally arrived at the house she was a short blonde, with piercing blue eyes and was very well built and in her late twenties. She introduced herself as the detective in charge and asked to speak to Christina Kennard.
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Tina came out from the room when she heard the detective was there to talk to her. She looked at the detective and stopped and watched her she hadnt seen her in such a long time but she knew who she was she was Erics younger sister.
Jamie? Oh my god I had no idea you became a detective
Well Tina its good to see you too bad its under these circumstances.
Tina remembered why Jamie was at her house and she felt like if she had stopped breathing and caught herself and began to breathe again.
All the girls were checking out Jamie they didnt know why Tina already knew this woman but they were going to find out.
Alice: Tina how do you know the detective?
Tina: she is Erics sister
Everyone was quiet for a moment while they let those words sink in.
Meanwhile back at the warehouse Bette had awaken and was determined to get out of their she walked out the door into the darkness, she didnt know where she was at but she headed toward what appeared to be the freeway every thing she saw was blurry and she was dragging her legs it had taken all her strength to untie herself though her arms were still tied her legs were not. Everything hurt especially her face and the cold air outside made her shiver in pain. She tried the phone once more while she was walking and it was ringing.
Oh my god its finally ringing she thought I would finally get to see my T.
Nobody was able to hear the phone ringing in Tinas room because they were in the living room.
Bette heard Tinas voice message and began sobbing wondering where Tina was and why she hadnt picked up her phone she left a message, Tina I dont know where I am at but I am coming to you baby.
Bette noticed her cell phone was beeping meaning her battery was dying and finally the phone turned off, the battery had died. She was getting closer to the road and collapsed again she was having trouble focusing but all she could think about was getting back to Tina. She notices a car slowing down and she started running towards it but the car sped away before she could reach it. She was absolutely and utterly beyond exhaustion and was only moving on pure will. She keeps moving and then a van stops and she cant believe who she is looking at.
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it’s 6/13/05 you’ve left us all hanging–plese post soon
i am lovin the suspense….please post soon
wow I love it when I’m right. So this is a great story. I wonder when eric will show up. awesome story please post again tonight!!
Damn this is bad, now we know is Eric’s younger sister and I think she is trying to kill Bette and Tina together. Now Bette is escape and is she be save by the van or what. Now is Tina, that girl is sick and revenge Bette and Tina by hurting her brother. This is excellent story, and interesting and excited about it. Hope Bette is save by whoever in that van and hope nothing bad happen to Tina and will save too. Psot soon, thanks! Excellent chapter!
GREAT CHAPTER…THAT LITTLE BITCH…PLEASE POST REAL SOOOOOOOOON………
I hate to admit it but I love this story. I hate seeing the distress but I love the story. Bette’s determination to get bac ti Tina is sooo moving.Keep the chapters coming.
Great chapter again, please post soon
Please don’t let her hurt Tina she not as strong as Bette..Post soon excellent story.
I say let Tina whoop her ass!
who was in the van… and don’t let that bitch hurt tina… i hope that who ever was in the van has nothing to do with jamie…i do think it is eric…hopefully coming to save the day.. maybe he found out what his sister is doing …. please post soon
I was just thinking the very thing that Amanda was…Is it Eric coming to collect his Whacko Sis? I hope it’s not anyone else in line to dirupt Bette and Tina’s happiness. Please don’t keep us in the dark too long! Thanks.
This is so good. OK so is Jamie a real cop? Or does Kit find out that the POlice station doesn’t know anyone by that name. Hmmm Who’s in the Van? Poor Tina she can’t kick ass. She just had a baby. Well I just live it when someone can keep me in suspense. My cop brain always spoils it for me. Good job with this one.
I just read your Story. Wow I like Thriller. Please come back and continue the story. Please!!!
Motherfucker!!!!!