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Long Road to Happiness Part 4
Jamie asks Tina to go down to the station and make a report about Bettes phone call so they can start an investigation on her kidnapping and see if she calls Tina again so they can trace the call. The girls interrupt and say they are ready to go with them but Jamie interrupts and tells them, I only need Tina at this time I promise I will bring her back as soon as possible.
Tina: yes girls its best if I just go and you girls stay here and wait to see if Bette calls and take care of my baby girl Angelica, please.
The girls begrudgingly agree but they are not happy about letting Tina out of their sight.
Hours pass by and Tina hasnt returned home, Kit decides to take off and go to the station herself and asks to speak to her when she is informed that no one by the name of Jamie works for them and that the detective that was suppose to go and talk to Tina was detained and hadnt been able to make it. Kit becomes frantic and starts going hysterical trying to explain that this woman named Jamie had come and picked Tina up and presented herself as a detective. The policeman tries to calm Kit down and she finally reaches the girls at home and tells them what happened they decide to take Angelica with them for her safety now that it appears both her moms have disappeared
Jamie was driving Tina in a direction that wasnt heading towards the police station that Tina started to ask? Where are we going?
Jamie: we are going to a place that we think might be the location where Bette is being held
Tina: What? You know where she might be at why didnt you say anything back at the house? What is going on?
Jamie: Tina calm down I didnt want to say anything back there because it appears the people that are doing this know you very well and the possibility that one of those girls back there is involved I didnt say anything.
Tina: no everybody at that house is family they would never hurt Bette, your wrong!
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it’s 6/13/05 you’ve left us all hanging–plese post soon
i am lovin the suspense….please post soon
wow I love it when I’m right. So this is a great story. I wonder when eric will show up. awesome story please post again tonight!!
Damn this is bad, now we know is Eric’s younger sister and I think she is trying to kill Bette and Tina together. Now Bette is escape and is she be save by the van or what. Now is Tina, that girl is sick and revenge Bette and Tina by hurting her brother. This is excellent story, and interesting and excited about it. Hope Bette is save by whoever in that van and hope nothing bad happen to Tina and will save too. Psot soon, thanks! Excellent chapter!
GREAT CHAPTER…THAT LITTLE BITCH…PLEASE POST REAL SOOOOOOOOON………
I hate to admit it but I love this story. I hate seeing the distress but I love the story. Bette’s determination to get bac ti Tina is sooo moving.Keep the chapters coming.
Great chapter again, please post soon
Please don’t let her hurt Tina she not as strong as Bette..Post soon excellent story.
I say let Tina whoop her ass!
who was in the van… and don’t let that bitch hurt tina… i hope that who ever was in the van has nothing to do with jamie…i do think it is eric…hopefully coming to save the day.. maybe he found out what his sister is doing …. please post soon
I was just thinking the very thing that Amanda was…Is it Eric coming to collect his Whacko Sis? I hope it’s not anyone else in line to dirupt Bette and Tina’s happiness. Please don’t keep us in the dark too long! Thanks.
This is so good. OK so is Jamie a real cop? Or does Kit find out that the POlice station doesn’t know anyone by that name. Hmmm Who’s in the Van? Poor Tina she can’t kick ass. She just had a baby. Well I just live it when someone can keep me in suspense. My cop brain always spoils it for me. Good job with this one.
I just read your Story. Wow I like Thriller. Please come back and continue the story. Please!!!
Motherfucker!!!!!