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    Forever I Promise: Chapter Nine

    Story written on June 2, 2005 by OCD.
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    OK remember don’t freak. Bette dies and Tina faints.

    Forever I Promise: Chapter Nine

    Dr. Bruch reached for Bette just as her heart stopped and the monitor went off with a loud continuous BEEEEEEP!!!! Dr. Bruch yelled for the crash cart. Everyone out of the room if youre not on the Code Team! A nurse started CPR while another nurse began bagging her. Dr. Bruch was calling out meds left and right. Shane pulled Tina out of the room as the doors closed behind them.

    Shane was so upset with Tina that it was all she could do to control herself. She left Tina standing there alone to go call Kit and the girls. Once again Shane had to make this call. The one call she hated to make. At this point Bette was dead and Shane didnt know how to tell them. Especially Kit. Shane couldnt go back in. She didnt want to hear what she already knew. She would wait for the girls and Kit outside.

    Bette could hear all these sounds around her and then they were gone. She was standing there tall and straight without any handicap. Her mind was clear. She could see something or someone off in the distance. She walked closer and could see a little boy playing on a swing. She bent down and said Hey Little one. What are you doing here? I’m playing he said. Why are you here he ask Bette? I’m not sure really. Bette stared at the little boy. His beautiful hazel eyes. What is your name? You dont belong her ya know. Bette glanced at him as he swung past her. What do you mean I dont belong here? Its not time yet. You have to go back and take care of Mommy and my baby sister.

    Bette felt her breath catch. She gasped as she tried to hold on. Cole?!! Cole wait. Come back dont leave yet. IM SORRY COLE. I MEANT TO BE THERE. SON PLEASE COME BACK!!!. Its ok mom, I forgive you.

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    9. My godness! Do you have an idea how highly addictive this story of yours is becoming? are you aware of the amount of Physicological damage you can cause to your fans If you don’t post the next chapter quickly? Lol! Lady this is wonderful, keep it coming! gotta love the drama!

    13. “Stay away from the light. Bette stay away from the light.”
      Thank you for writing this jaw dropping, heart palpation inducing story.
      A fan.

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