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    Forever I Promise: Chapter Nine

    Story written on June 2, 2005 by OCD.
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    OK remember don’t freak. Bette dies and Tina faints.

    Kit turned around to ask Shane. Where is she? Carmen motioned towards outside. Shane left before the doctor told us about Bette. Let me go get her. Carmen went outside to find Shane over in a corner smoking. Shane had tears falling down her cheeks. She has just lost her best friend. Her mentor.

    Carmen walked up to Shane and took her into her arms. Bettes ok baby. Shes upstairs in ICU. Dr. Bruch said she had a mild heart attack but should recovery just fine. Tina is still in the back though. They havent come out yet with any news. Shane didnt hear anything else other than Bette was OK. She was in ICU. She wiped her face and looked up at Carmen. I saw her die. Her heart stopped right in front of me. Shane started crying again only this time a bit harder. Carmen just held her tightly in her arms. Shhh Ive got you. Ive got you Shane.

    Bette woke up and was calling for Tina. Her monitor went off which brought the nurse running in. Wheres Tina Bette yelled. Ms. Porter calm down. You wife is downstairs. Your sister just left to get some coffee. Shell be right back. Bette was trying to get out of the bed as Kit walked back in. Wait Baby sis where do you think youre going! Kit helped the nurse to hold Bette down until she was calm. Bette whats going on? Do you remember what happened? Tina. I have to find Tina. Our son. I have to tell her. Cole said I had to come back and take care of Tina and our daughter. Kits mouth hit the floor. Bette how did you know about the baby. Cole told me. He told me he forgave me for not being there when he died. Kit couldnt help the tears that were now falling down her face. She pulled Bette into her arms. Oh Baby girl. Everything is going to be ok. I promise. Kit where is Tina?

    She’s in the ER baby girl. She fainted.

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    9. My godness! Do you have an idea how highly addictive this story of yours is becoming? are you aware of the amount of Physicological damage you can cause to your fans If you don’t post the next chapter quickly? Lol! Lady this is wonderful, keep it coming! gotta love the drama!

    13. “Stay away from the light. Bette stay away from the light.”
      Thank you for writing this jaw dropping, heart palpation inducing story.
      A fan.

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