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Just then, the waiter approached the table to take their order. Melvin carried the conversation for the rest of the evening, as Tina stewed about her now discovered lie, and Bette processed why Tina felt she couldnt share the truth with her earlier that afternoon.
Helena Peabody is not what I expected her to be at all Bette thought.
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Bette and Tina were on their way back home after having deposited Bettes father back at his hotel.
Bette? Tina asked.
Yes. Bette responded, with no indication of what she was feeling.
Why why why didnt I just tell her I had accepted the offer? thought Tina. It made it so much worse for her to hear it from Helena
The pause as Tina was thinking weighed on their shoulders.
Thats the first time Ive ever felt as though your father viewed me with any kind of regard, Tina finally said.
God it would be so much easier to be so much more angry if daddy hadnt gushed about Tinas opportunity with this film, thought Bette.
Its the first time he ever called you by your first name.
Im sorry you had to hear from Helena Peabody that I decided to go back to work.
I just thought that was the kind of decision we would discuss beforehand, sighed Bette. The traffic buzzed in lanes on both sides of the vehicle as they made their way down the freeway.
Sometimes making decisions for us isnt always in my best interest, Bette, Tina didnt really edit this comment before it was hanging in the air between them.
We made the decision to start a family, Bette said sharply. She then paused to regain control over the delivery of what she would say next. Are youregretting that decision?
Betteis that what you think? Tina suddenly became aware of how everything that had transpired that day must have appeared to Bette. This baby and our family are my number one priority. I told Edward that from the beginning – before I made any commitment to return.
So after the baby is born Bettes sentence trailed off.
Ill be done working for at least a year, Bette. That hasnt changed. Tina stated with finality.
They drove in silence for a few moments while Bette pondered what she would say next.
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I’m so glad that things were worked out between them so smoothly…I love the affect Tina has on Bette. It’s so sweet! Love this story, thanks!
Whew! Nicely defused.
Great job, JKS. I’ll try to come up with some constructive comments for you in a little while. :)
I’m glad tina feels that way about helena, but will she feel that way when helena has here cornered?? great update.
K
Great chapter. Nice to see they worked it out.
Good evening lady, how are you doing? Fine, I hope. I am still profoundly in love with this story of yours. I know, you asked for constructive criticism, but well, I can’t seem to find anything meaningfull enough now, maybe I’ll will, sometime.
Anyway, I love this story, keep it coming! Cheers!
Good chapter.
You navigated that potential shipwreck like a veteran sailor!
“All’s well that ends well.”
Keep up the good work!
AROUND.
You navigataed AROUND that potential shipwreck, etc.
THis was great. So glad Bette didn’t blow up.
i am readingyour story too! and i love this one too.-my name on media blvd is dianabluss11
cute ! Love it
I got caught up on your story this morning and it is marvelous. Find myself wondering what will happen next. All the seats in your Peanut Gallery seem full…so I am leaning against the wall, as it is now standing room only.
loved this… i could just see tina smiling and singing…My girlsfriends jeasous…running into the house… please keep them coming…great job