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FOREVER I PROMISE: Chapter Twelve – part 16
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Stacey ran back into Bettes room with Tina slowly behind her. All of Bettes vitals were normal. Stacey hit the nurses button. Kathy came in first. Others followed thinking something was wrong. Kathy I need complete blood work up on Bette. I want everything back like now once it is sent. Oh and page my Team. We have a hole to repair.
The swelling was gone. Bettes blood work all came back normal. She didnt even have an infection any more. Nothing.. It was like none of this ever happened.
Stacey couldnt take any more. Turning towards Tina in the chair she had not moved from other than to get Stacey. Tina what happened? What happened after I left?
Tina: I said a prayer… I ask the good Lord above and our baby boy that if it was not yet her time. Please bring her back to me. I continued to pray and at some point I looked up. Not really sure why, but I looked up at Bette. I could only see the one eye, but it was the most adorable, most beautiful eye I had ever seen. When she smiled at me and squeezed my hand, I kissed her on her cheek and than I came and got you.
Now it was Bette that had not let go of Tinas hand. Every time the baby kicked Bette smiled. Tina on the other hand wish to the good lord above that the kid would give her a break now that her mommy was awake. She had to pee so badly.
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thanks i will sleep much better now..and ill not have nightmares..lol..thanks great chapter ;-)
Thanks for the miracle. Well do rest up and don’t forget to close that door, don’t want the pets bringing home any ‘friends’. Wonderful post.
Holly shit TK!! I go to work for six hours and you write how many fucking chapters, Drama is not the word for this story. Thank you for your comments. Reading this story, has me crying, and I never cry!! OMG wow is all I can say. I will tell you why I’m crying. The other person in the car died next to me. She was my girlfriend, best friend, and team mate. We played lacrosse at U of D, no one know that we where together, we both where in the closet. everyone though we were roommates/best friends. When I woke from the coma I had no clue who I was. my parents made me live with them. I started going to therphy, and stuff. One day someone told me about “E” as a way to bring back memories. It worked and I started to have flashbacks while high. So many were of sarah and me, when I asked my parents who she was, and if we were together they freaked. Well they now know I’m bi and now have a slight drug problem, once I had the first flashback I wanted more and more. It was a huge problem and they kicked me out. This story is awesome at the least. I have stoped taking E, my once nice flashbacks of sara and me together started turning in to nightmares. I was awake part of the time when we were trapped in the car. I don’t know if she was alive still or not. ok now I have to go because I flooding my labtop. It feels good to say this, I have been holding this in for so long. I haven’t told anone because it just so much. snake where the hell do you live that they are outside, shit thats why I live in an apartment and my cats and dogs are indoor animals. There will be NO wild animals in my house. have a good night. I hooked on this story now, so it better keep coming.
K
Read your last 4 chapters just now, all are excellent. Thank God Bette is ok, you were killing me with that.
Your a very sweet lady , and this was a very sweet chapter thank you.And CR00 my prayers and my heart is with you be strong and good luck my best wishes for you.
WOW what a ride!! Thanks for all the great chapters. Take care! and i hope no more snakes inside da house!.
Damn fine, more
WOW TK! I got hooked on your story and ended up reading the whole thing today… the twists and turns had me wishing for a faster internet connection to get to the next chapter! Thank you for ending this last chapter on such a wonderous note. Post again soon–I can’t wait to see what you have in store next for B & T!
wow, slow down lady, I’m doing my best to catch up with your story… so far I’m still stuck on Part12, will save it in my PC and read it up. Great job, I’m still having my heart attack… and give your arm a rest… haha… :)
Are you trying to make me cry a river?!?!!?! This has got to be one of the most emotional stories I’ve read in a very long time but I love it. Please post soon, love ya work!
Fascinating story, great writing, wonderful content and you post so frequently! Thanks
Holy shit TK….I have only been gone for a few days now and WHAT…you have updatet you story with what 15 chapters. GOD GIRL.
I just love this story….WOW the drama woman you have in your story and what an emotional roller coster you are giving us here. Keep it up…but please watch the speed limit on your story..because we have to catch up all the time girl. Great work.
And to Groo girl – glad that you are sharing your story girl. I had a bad car accident a few years ago and was badly injured myself – but nothing compared to you girl. Glad that you are ok again because I know about all the stuff going on inside your heard.
I find myself logging and looking for your updates frequently. Great story, please continue.
Megga- Okay OCD, I just read ALL of your chapters! This story is really fantastic! Please post agian soon!
Thank god Bette is now ok and please post soon, thanks!
Oh my godness! I’ve just finished reading your last 5 chapters, this story is simply getting better and Better, but keep like this and you’ll be out of fans in no time, you’ll kill us all from a heart attack, LOL, seriously, this story is, by far, one of the most intense, dramatic, wicked crazy ones I’ve read recently, Its outstanding.
Well, I’ll be here wating for you to wake up and post some more, keep up the good work, cheers!
The power of love indeed. This is a sweet and moving story, thank you.