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Bette Forgets 26
*Ben*
I throw down the phone and focus all of my attention on my driving. We crest the top of a hill and go airborne for a moment and then come down with a bone jarring thud. Out of the corner of my eye I see Teyla holding on for dear life.
We want to get to her in one piece dont we, she states through clenched teeth as I see her wince as we go careening around a corner
If I let those ***** get to Bette ***** no,I state as I whip on to Bettes street and come to a stop throwing open the door before that car is even to a full stop
Teyla does her best to stop the car and jumps out after me. We had been the first on the scene and hadnt used the sirens. The others should be here shortly. Running up the drive I see that the front door is hanging on its hinges and that the glass is shattered. That must have been what I heard earlier. Drawing my gun I hear screaming coming from inside the house.
Running in I see Vircome standing over Bette as she is cowering in the corner. Without even hesitating I pull the trigger shooting the man in the back of the head. Before he could drop forward on top of Bette I am there and grab him and throw him to the side.
Bette, I say loudly, Where is Meyers?
She looks at the man that tried to hurt her again and then up at me. I see blood dripping down the side of her face.
I…I dont know, she stutters, Only he was here.
Are you okay B, I ask her helping her sit seeing her wince
She sees my expression and shakes her head, Not from this. Im a little dizzy but that could be from a number of things actually. The ***** cracked me over the head with the lamp.
Did he do anything else to you, Teyla asks from my side
I hadnt realized she was there. Bette shakes her head.
He never got the chance. Now I definitely want to move, she states looking at the lifeless body of one of the men that turned her life upside down, Nice shooting Tex.
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(45 votes, average: 3.87 out of 5)
Christ, woman. You’re too good. <3
much less evil…thanks for posting so soon. the waiting was killing me!
Wauw, what a rollercoaster ride. Up and down to the edge of the chair, but please let us soon have some TLC and let the delivery pass smoothly so that our lovely couple can have a moment of joy and relaxation.
ok was just checking on julia, you never know where your mind is. WOW drama and I love drama, great update, thank you for posting I’m leaving for work right now. Awesome I love this story, I think I have said that many times. Ok now running late post soon.
Whats not to like its great very exciting and your forgiven for the cliffhanger lol
Jeez, you scared the shit out of me! Great update! I’m soo loving this story. No, I’m addicted to it. lol. post soon again thanks :)
This is a sad bit of destruction.
CHRIST…my heart is beating so fucking fast…ok now they are gone..thank god… i need to breath…please continue
Damn woman, you scare the hell of me, you want to kill me with your surprise 2 chapters, danm that was awesome and excellent, love it. Glad Ben and Teyla are there befor that baster do anything bad to Bette and now hope that Stacy is ok, and we have to kill that baster too. Post soon, thanks! 5 stars for you!
Well well well you lil’ rascal you. I love it. Perfect. Well both dead would be better but it was great. I say hilding my head with an ice pack. ROFLMAO…. Dang that hurt but it was worth cracking my skull with a cast to read this. lol I luv ya kiddo. OUTSTANDING…
I LIKE!!!! I LIKE!!!…..NOW LETS LET BETTE GET TO THAT OTHER FREAKER WHO IS STILL ALIVE….PLEASE PLEASE THE DRAMA WOULD BE AWESOME….IF SHE WERE ABLE TO GET ALL ANGRY WITH HIM……AHEM…..BUT THIS IS YOUR FIC……AND I WILL LOVE ANYTHING YOU SEND MY WAY…….THANX FOR THE UPDATE……AND POST AGAIN SOON…..
Oh, the drama, i love your drama now that Bette is ok and Dr. Winters will be.
K
Great chapter, loving this.
OMFG! Between you and OCD this fan fiction drama is going to kill me!
Very much thank you
Great story. Keep it coming.
I AM SO ADDICTED TO THIS STORY…EVERY TIME I SEE YOU POST A CHAPTER I GET A BIG SMILE ON MY FACE..GREAT CHAPTER PLEASE POST SOON
when u bring the drama, u really bring the drama. we have dead mothers now living. criminals escaping jail. loved ones under attack. twins. new money. you are the queen of drama right now.
You should definitely win the next fanfic drama award :) You have people coming back from the dead, breaking out of jail, and all that my Bette is going through…anyway, very good writing!
Whew! ~sighs & shakes head~ I am a f@#!ing wreck thanks to these last two posts!…But, I also have a big grin on my face–loved every bit of it! Thanks.
pretty darn good keep it coming
No I love
Shit Reba…the drama you have in your story. This is one hell of a ride girl. OMG. Keep posting Reba…we look forward to more
Yes I like, but what the hell are you trying to do to my blood preasure?!?!?! Holy shit that was a lot of drama in two chapters mate but don’t get me wrong I loved it. Please post soon and do explain why that asshole made Stacey slit her wrists, what did she have to do with it?
Damn girl what a trip I love this Bette and Tina. I can actually feel them as one are have them so in synch. Thanks as for all the mayhem wow. My heart is finally slowing down thank got they got the guy but poor Dr Winters. Thanks
wonderful chapter.please post real soon…..