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Bette Forgets 26
Teyla and I help Bette to her feet and help her to the couch as Tina and a woman I dont know come running into the house.
*Tina*
I got the call from some officer whose name I cant recall now that Vircome and Meyers had escaped from jail and that officers were on their way over to my house now. After hearing this I had thrown down the phone and ran out of the office, not caring that everyone was calling after me.
Jumping in my car I am just pulling away when my cell phone rings.
Bette!
No, its Julia, says Julia, I just heard on the news that those guys that attacked Elizabeth escaped.
Im on my way home now, I state as I speed through a red light almost causing an accident
I am as well.
Kay, I throw the phone down again not wondering how Julia was getting home.
As I pull up to my house I see a police cruiser already there and another car comes screeching to a stop behind me. I jump out the same time Julia does and together we race into the house. I go into the living room spotting the very much dead body of one of the men that first attacked my Bette and turn to see Bette sitting on the couch holding a hand to the side of her head as blood drips down. I see Ben and Teyla standing near Bette. I drop to my knees in front of Bette.
Are you okay babe?
She nods her head and smiles at me, Ben and Teyla arrived before the ***** could do anything, Bette says leaning forward resting her head on my shoulder, I was so scared T.
Its okay, I say wrapping my arms around her and our unborn children, Everything will be okay.
We should get Elizabeth to the hospital, Julia states
I unwrap myself from Bette and stand up, Yes we should. Where is the other guy, I say as I suddenly notice that only one guy is here
Teyla and Ben both shrug their shoulders as Bens cell phone starts ringing.
*Ben*
What, I yell into my phone not appreciating being interrupted at this moment in time
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(45 votes, average: 3.87 out of 5)
Christ, woman. You’re too good. <3
much less evil…thanks for posting so soon. the waiting was killing me!
Wauw, what a rollercoaster ride. Up and down to the edge of the chair, but please let us soon have some TLC and let the delivery pass smoothly so that our lovely couple can have a moment of joy and relaxation.
ok was just checking on julia, you never know where your mind is. WOW drama and I love drama, great update, thank you for posting I’m leaving for work right now. Awesome I love this story, I think I have said that many times. Ok now running late post soon.
Whats not to like its great very exciting and your forgiven for the cliffhanger lol
Jeez, you scared the shit out of me! Great update! I’m soo loving this story. No, I’m addicted to it. lol. post soon again thanks :)
This is a sad bit of destruction.
CHRIST…my heart is beating so fucking fast…ok now they are gone..thank god… i need to breath…please continue
Damn woman, you scare the hell of me, you want to kill me with your surprise 2 chapters, danm that was awesome and excellent, love it. Glad Ben and Teyla are there befor that baster do anything bad to Bette and now hope that Stacy is ok, and we have to kill that baster too. Post soon, thanks! 5 stars for you!
Well well well you lil’ rascal you. I love it. Perfect. Well both dead would be better but it was great. I say hilding my head with an ice pack. ROFLMAO…. Dang that hurt but it was worth cracking my skull with a cast to read this. lol I luv ya kiddo. OUTSTANDING…
I LIKE!!!! I LIKE!!!…..NOW LETS LET BETTE GET TO THAT OTHER FREAKER WHO IS STILL ALIVE….PLEASE PLEASE THE DRAMA WOULD BE AWESOME….IF SHE WERE ABLE TO GET ALL ANGRY WITH HIM……AHEM…..BUT THIS IS YOUR FIC……AND I WILL LOVE ANYTHING YOU SEND MY WAY…….THANX FOR THE UPDATE……AND POST AGAIN SOON…..
Oh, the drama, i love your drama now that Bette is ok and Dr. Winters will be.
K
Great chapter, loving this.
OMFG! Between you and OCD this fan fiction drama is going to kill me!
Very much thank you
Great story. Keep it coming.
I AM SO ADDICTED TO THIS STORY…EVERY TIME I SEE YOU POST A CHAPTER I GET A BIG SMILE ON MY FACE..GREAT CHAPTER PLEASE POST SOON
when u bring the drama, u really bring the drama. we have dead mothers now living. criminals escaping jail. loved ones under attack. twins. new money. you are the queen of drama right now.
You should definitely win the next fanfic drama award :) You have people coming back from the dead, breaking out of jail, and all that my Bette is going through…anyway, very good writing!
Whew! ~sighs & shakes head~ I am a f@#!ing wreck thanks to these last two posts!…But, I also have a big grin on my face–loved every bit of it! Thanks.
pretty darn good keep it coming
No I love
Shit Reba…the drama you have in your story. This is one hell of a ride girl. OMG. Keep posting Reba…we look forward to more
Yes I like, but what the hell are you trying to do to my blood preasure?!?!?! Holy shit that was a lot of drama in two chapters mate but don’t get me wrong I loved it. Please post soon and do explain why that asshole made Stacey slit her wrists, what did she have to do with it?
Damn girl what a trip I love this Bette and Tina. I can actually feel them as one are have them so in synch. Thanks as for all the mayhem wow. My heart is finally slowing down thank got they got the guy but poor Dr Winters. Thanks
wonderful chapter.please post real soon…..