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    FOREVER I PROMISE: Chapter Twenty Three

    Baby Talk.. Amy Jo and Jordans room.

    Amy Jo: Dont they know we saw them messing around.

    Jordan: Yea, Mommys got the hottys for Mom.

    Amy Jo: Oh, Oh.. I know. I didnt think she was gonna let me finish eaten.

    Jordan: Hey I ate after you. How much do you think I got. I was hanging on for dear life.

    Amy Jo: Oh hey whats up with Aunt Alices nose?

    Jordan: I dont know. But hey. I got Mom in the face today.

    Amy Jo: Yea, I noticed your aim is getting better. Youd think she would have learned by now.

    Jordan: So whos turn it is tonight? Mine or youre to wake them up?

    Amy Jo: Yours. I got them last night. Hey do you think if we start now Mommy will feed us so more?

    Jordan: Yea, that seems to work.

    Amy Jo: OK so you start.

    Jordan: Na ah.. You start.

    Amy Jo: Uh huh.. You start..

    Jordan: I did it last time.

    Amy Jo: No you didnt I did. OK, OK. You wanna do it together?

    Jordan: You wanna?

    Amy Jo: Yea, Lets do it.

    Baby Monitor.. Both babies are crying.

    Bette and Tina both arrive within a few minutes.

    Amy Jo: Oh no.. Mommys got that look again.

    Jordan: Yea I noticed that. Ah come on, were hungry. Give it a rest. Get a room

    Amy Jo: Hey Jordan. Cry louder. Louder Yea, kick your legs like that.. Mom cant stand to see you get that way.

    Jordan: Is it working?? Is it working?? Gezzzz come on Mommy. Let Mom go I’m getting tired here flapping my wings.

    Amy Jo: Yea its working. Moms coming to pick you up. Means I eat first, Whooppeee!!!!

    Jordan: Hey you tricked me.

    Tina: Hey Amy Jo. Is my little girl hungry again?

    Amy Jo: Ya Think!

    Bette: Hows my precious little boy? Whats got you crying so hard like that? Ahhh come on son. Lets see if you need changing again?

    Jordan: Can you believe this. She did it again. She took my diaper off again. I’m gonna get her good this time.

    Amy Jo: Jordan a little higher to the left. BINGO!!!!! You got her in the mouth again.

    Bette: Tina, he did it again!!!! Son, Moms mouth is not for target practice.

    Jordan: Yea, thats what you think Mom.. Hey sis. Whats my score now.

    Amy Jo: Mom 4, You got 18. Oh hey excuse me. Dinners served. Sorry I cant talk with my mouth full.

    Comments

    1. that was too cute… love the kids talking… poor bette…she will just have to out smart the little squirt… have her open his diaper like she is going to take it off and then just cover him up again… please continue

      and i agree this site sucks…it took about 7 tries to open this chapter

    2. TK – that was fucking funny girl. Love the way you wrote this chapter. Keep them comming. Post soon even though I know you will post a dusin for me tomorrow to read. Thank you

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