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    FOREVER I PROMISE: Chapter Thirteen

    Story written on June 6, 2005 by OCD.
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    Saying Good-bye..

    The phone was ringing and Bette was trying to get to it before it woke Tina. It was 9am already. Bette and Tina had sleep in since being out late with the gang. Bette talked on the phone a while, then hung up.

    Tina felt Bette snuggle up tightly against her. A few minutes later she felt Bettes body shaking. Tina rolled over to face Bette and could see she was crying.

    Tina: Bette whats wrong honey? Bette who was that on the phone?

    Bette: It was Kit. She called to tell me that Daddy had a heart attack during the night and his nurse found him. Hes gone Tina. My daddys gone.

    Bette was crying much harder now. Tina embraced her wife as closely as she could being pregnant. Tina was caressing her face and kissing her sweetly on her cheek.

    Tina: Baby Ive got you. Its ok. Let it go Baby. Let it go.

    Bette stayed in bed all day. She wouldnt even get up to go to her Chemo appointment. She just laid there and seem to cry on and off all day long. Kit finally came over and they cried together. Arrangements had to be made. He was cremated, so Bette and Kit decided to have the Memorial once his ashes arrived at the local funeral home.

    Bette woke up the next morning feeling like her eyes were glued shut. She had cried herself to sleep cuddled up as close as she could get to Tina. She had to make up Chemo today. Tina had put her foot down about that. NO argument… She was going if Tina had to drag her kicking and screaming. Tina knew the Memorial was going to put a strain on Bette, but she couldnt put off Chemo.

    Kit had her staff arrange The Planet for the Memorial. Melvin was a Retired Naval Officer, but they had decided against a Military Funeral. The lead singer for the band Betty had agreed to sing at the Memorial, but had to cancel at the last minute. It seems the entire band had been arrested for causing a huge riot at their last gig. The crowd had gone wild wanting their money back for such horrible singing. Lawsuits had been filed against the band. Hopefully that would bankrupt them into never, ever playing again.

    Now the time had come to say good bye. Peggy had sent a limo to pick up Bette and her family. Arriving at The Planet the driver helped a very pregnant Tina from the car, and then Bette followed. Only family and close friends were there.

    Bette was dressed in a black Stella McCartney suit with a white shirt. She thought about wearing a purple blouse with a black skirt, but then realize how ugly it was and threw it in the trash. Shane had fixed what little hair she had that had grown back. Even though Bette felt like her world had stopped. She at least looked good which made her feel a little better.

    The Memorial over now everyone just sat around and talked. Bette, Tina, Shane, Carmen, Alice, Dana, Kit, Peggy, Stacey, Whit and Jennifer sat around the table. Everyone else had already left. Lara, Kit’s new chef served them lunch.

    Kit broke the silence when she started up with an ole memory of Melvin and Bette. Apparently Bette had refused to take a bath one day and Melvin was fighting to keep her in the tub. Melvin turned around to get the shampoo and Bette bolted out the door buck naked. Melvin chased her around the house but being so small he couldnt catch her.

    Kit had been out with her friends that day shopping and was coming home. As her friends mothers car approached the house they noticed something completely odd. A blur ran past the car. Then they saw Melvin looking like he had falling into the pool soaking wet. Then they looked back to see what he was chasing. Little Bette running buck naked down the sidewalk as fast as her little legs would carry her with Melvin slowly catching up.

    The entire table broke out in laughter. Bette with her head lowered after giving Kit a NO YOU DIDNT look. Then raised her head grinning and joined in laughing just as hard as everyone else.

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    1. GOD DAMM IT!! TK do you know how much withdrawl sucks, I mean you feed me this story how many times a day then just stop. There was no warining that you where going to do this. I hope you can write another story, If your arm still broke keep writing. and you know they have those headsets that you talk and it writes the story for you. OK now let me say THANK YOU!! this was an awesome story, I will have to talk to J about making you write more. LOL

    5. Helena gets a broken jaw, Candace gets 30 to life and Betty gets busted. You’re just knocking down the straw men, one, two, three!
      Let me think, what else didn’t we like in S2? I’m sure you can take care of it! LOL!
      Thanks.

    6. what can I say that everyone has not said over and over again,your style of writing moved me in many way’s there was laughter,tears,fear,and most of all a great love story.OCD You are someone special keep writing and chasing snakes…lol..love eh…can’t wait for the next one.

    10. OCD it was a pleasure. I’m sad it has to end but all great things do. Happy about Betty being arrested! Loved the imagery of a little Bette running around buck naked…she’s just too cute! and over all, I love your telling of their unique and inspiring love. I hope that elbow heals and I do look forward to any other stories up your sleeve. Well done OCD!!!!

    16. Sorry this is the end but I wanted to tell you how much I enjoyed this story I would stay up at night tilll I could catch up on all the stories I Love the way you write and I also Liked that they were not too long so I could read them a t work..Please write another story..I am glad your arm is getting better..Thank you for taking the time.

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