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A Walk on the Wild Side – Chapter 6
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A Walk on the Wild Side Chapter – 6
After the confusion of their meeting they had lapsed into an easy conversation, during their drive, and by the time they were nearing camp, felt like they had known each other forever.
Tina looked over at Bette, who was trying to make some sense of the map she had been given earlier. She felt Tinas eyes on her, and looked up to smile at her companion.
Were nearly at camp Tina said.
Bette looked out ahead of her. But I cant see anything she said her brow furrowed in confusion.
I thought we had sorted your sight problems out! said Tina with a chuckle.
Bette flushed slightly, and smiled back at Tina looking slightly embarrassed. I thought we agreed not to mention that again! Bette retorted, pouting slightly.
Tinas look became more intense as Bettes pout had an unwanted effect on her emotions. She felt the first stirrings of desire flow through her, and realised she needed to change the subject quickly.
“You see that ridge in front of us?” Tina asked. “The camp is around mile past there.”
Great,” Bette responded. “You have no idea how badly I want to sink into a hot bath right now. Bette paused, a horrible thought occurring to her. You do have a bath at the camp dont you?
Tina laughed once more at the sophisticated Brunette, tempted to tease Bette a little more, but seeing the hint of nervousness, decided to be nice. Bette, we are staying tonight at a Safari lodge. It caters for tourists over here on Safari, so it has most of the mod cons you will need for tonight, along with a hearty meal that I dont have to cook for us, so thats another bonus.
Tina paused a moment, and Bette noticed the mischievous grin forming on her face. I want you to close your eyes Tina said.
Sorry? Bette retortedAre we back to me being blind again!
“Its just”.Tina started then stopped suddenly
“its just?” Bette prompted gently.
You know, I have been working and partially living out here for the last 10 years, and yet the view from over this ridge never fails to take my breath away. The memory of my first glimpse of it will live with me forever.”
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Beautiful chapter, love it. Post soon :)
ohh gosh !! i am ‘in love ‘ with this story !! :D
Beautifully written . u bring out the emotions and scenes very effectively and beautifully . i felt like i was actually there along with B & Tee looking at that snow capped peak of Mt. Kilimanjaro reflecting the colours of the setting sun !!! simply Brilliant :)) .
some of the lines i loved …. :D
Isn’t it the most beautiful thing you’ve ever seen? asked Bette .
Tina continued to look at Bette, a soft warm expression crossing her face.
“Yes, The most beautiful thing I have ever seen†Tina added softly before turning and taking in the picture before her.
*i felt like Tina was referring to Bette as the most beautiful thing she had ever seen * Ahhhh…. Happy sigh* :D
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“Thank you†Bette whispered as she once again turned to Tina, the glistening of unshed tears showing up in her eyes.
“For what?†Tina whispered back, her own emotions playing havoc with her senses.
“For allowing me to see this, for allowing me to be here with you†Bette suddenly looked down at her hands resting in her lap. She wasn’t used to showing her emotions like this.
” “I can’t think of of anyone I would rather experience this with,†Tina responded softly as she opened her arms to the emotional brunette.
Bette was gathered into Tina’s embrace, as both women sat pondering what hand fate had dealt them and how they would manage to get through the next two weeks unaffected by the mesmerising woman they were sat next to.
have i told u yet that i love ur story !! ?
Well I Do!! :D .
keep up the gr8 work Mate and pls pls post real soooon , okay :)). i a meagerly awatin the next updates of this amazing story . thanx :D
Gazillion stars to u all the wayyyyy Mate !! :)) * sends 10 big sweet chocolate cookies just for u * :D as encouragement and thanx :)) .
*psst.. & can’t wait to read chapter 10 * SO hurryyyyy . hehee LOLOL ;))
That was a beautiful chapter. Well done. Hmm do you know me? I don’t know. Why do you ask? I write and read this site as OCD now, but my other name before was and is TK. So maybe I left you a comment before. Any who… Keep up the great work.
DAMM TB this was nice!!! I hope you are not feeling rushed, I love when writers take there time with the stories. And cause this chapter was so good, I think I will allow seconds. Ok so I would have no problem comparing battle wonds stories. my scar is above my right eye and below the eyebrow and 10 sticthes later it just another scar, but I might have you bet on the all time battle story.
Well worth the effort to read and comment.
Beautiful, tb. Short but sweet. :) I have the utmost faith that you will take good care of our girls. And don’t worry, that’s not bad news. We’ll enjoy every chapter you write! I hope you have fun at the wedding and please write as soon as you find some time to.
Beautiful! I look forward to chapter 10 too. Have fun at the wedding.
Great story… sorry I have commented sooner… Chapter 4 and 5 were way toooooo funny couldn’t help laughing out load. Then getting hit with the keys …vision restored!!!!
Great story!!!
Thanks for the update TB, i think this is the start of something beautiful.
i’m really loving this story. both b and t and your description of the safari. great write! keep it up =0)
Breathtaking.
Damn this is so beautiful, love it. Post soon please, thanks!