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And it started with a phone call Chapter 9
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Bette? Tina finally found the strength to speak after they had been kissing for a few minutes.
Yes? Bette stroked Tinas face awaiting what she was about to say.
I dont want to see anyone but you either, Tina said smiling. And I havent wanted to see anyone but you for the last three weeks.
Bette rested her head on Tinas shoulder as she let Tinas words sink in.
I think shes the one, she thought to herself.
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Oh my God, Bette wiped the sleep from her eyes as she looked over at the clock on the bedside table.
Whats wrong, Tina had been awake, but was just savouring the opportunity to relax.
Its only 9:30 in the morning and I think Im up for the day, Bette replied as she pulled the pillow over her head to shut out the light.
What time did we go to bed? Tina asked, thinking 9:30 was a typical sleep in Sunday for her.
What time we went to bed is not the issue, came the muffled voice from under the pillow. What time we went to sleep is more the problem.
Well I understand people need more sleep as they age Tina thought a little friendly teasing would at the very least have Bette denying that she needed the sleep, regardless of how much she wanted the sleep.
Bette pulled her head out from under her pillow.
I cant believe youre calling me old, she said. I thought I more than kept up with you last night.
Bette, honestly, I dont know where you find the energy, Tina laughed. Two nights in a row and all night both timesPlease tell me Im not supposed to be able to keep this pace up
Oh you absolutely have to keep this pace up, Bette said seriously. Sleep is now officially a thing of the past. She reached over to Tina and pulled her into a hug. We have the whole day ahead of us to relax. Me and my new girlfriend.
I guess I am your new girlfriend, arent I? Tina hugged Bette back and then settled in to rest against her as they continued talking.
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First: Great chapter. Thank you and like Tina I’m hoping you can find time in your days for us (Please post as soon as you can)
Second: If you want to share your FF and your talent w/ you GF then do so. If you want to keep it for yourself then I don’t think you HAVE to tell her. However if you do and she isn’t receptive and positive about something you obviously enjoy and are talented at…well… then you have other problems that are bigger than this issue.
Be happy and Just Keep Swimming : )
Nice to have an update on this – as usual great writing, I love it. As for your gf and your writing, if you want to keep it for yourself then you should. You don’t have to share everything, sometimes it’s good to have something just for you.
Caught up on all your chapters and I really like this story. About your partner not knowing, I haven’t told mine either. Don’t get me wrong, I will, but want to keep it to myself for a while. Congratulations on the anniversary, may you both be blessed with many more.
uh oh. is tina going to get it that bette is kinda a freak when it comes to work. hope bette remembers to put it into perspective. have enjoyed your stories. i would also tell the gf about your writing. she might have some ideas or comments. keep posting.
great update! happy anniversary 2! :)
very good as usual. as for whether or not you should tell your girlfriend- ultimately- your decision, so just do what feels right. good luck.
If you were my lover and told me about JKS and I read your work, I would be super turned on and you would get the licking of your life on our anniversary! Hope that happens to u!!!
So good to see you! Thanks for the update.
I was about 4 months into writing my one and only fan fic when my wife “found out”. A fan sent an e-mail to our joint account. I thought she would think it was stupid, compulsive, and a total waste of time…I thought wrong. She was so incredibly supportive and really validated my writing. I ended up dedicating “my skin is painfully new” to her. I was sorry that I didn’t trust her enough with this part of me. After she starting reading, I began lacing the stories with inside jokes and references that only she would understand. It became a fun adventure.
Everyone is different, so I’m just giving you one “ripped from the headlines” real life experience.
Good luck!
What no showering together……
Bittersweet chapter, also. Best to you on the anniversary.
I am sure your girlfriend will be delighted to appreciate the revelation of your skills, it may lead to a very Happy anniversary indeed !
Thank you swim, touching as always, I am sure Tina will effortlessly weave her way into her days, love has that effect.
JKS…welcome back! I was just sitting here wondering where you’d been. But I understand the real life interfering sometimes, and hope you find time to write some more when things calm down a bit. :) If it were me, I would probably tell the gf about the writing…Happy Anniversary, by the way!
Hey HAPPY ANNIVERSARY JKS! Thanks for posted again I’m still love your Story I’m just gonna wait then to the next chapter Please post soon.
K
Great chapter as always. I think you should tell the gfriend about the ff. No secrets :)
Sweet chapter. As far as your gf… if she reads FF already, then tell her. If she doesn’t, have her read a few and if she’s still negative about it, I wouldn’t tell her.
great chapter JKS..i love it..and about your little secret..lol..i think you have to tell your GF she is going to be so excited…in my case i would love if my GF was a writer and read all the chapters for me first..lol.amazing chapter please post soon :-)
Sweet chapter, JKS! Wishing you well on your anniversary :)
Thought of your story this morning and…click, there you were. Great addition, as always. Looked for your email address but……I wouldn’t tell her – your writing is yours, solitary and yours. Just the way you phrased it leads me to believe she wouldn’t be supportive……
Hey Fins, Happy Anniversary…is it a big one? Tough call on whether to tell…if she is your soul mate, then you must, but from what you said, she might be unsupportive (although I’m not sure how…your writing is so great!!). Anyway, good luck and we expect to hear how things turn out, please don’t keep us waiting too long!
I don’t leave comments as often as i should. I enjot your writining ans story line. tell your girlfriend…it’s obvious you enjoy writing (and your good at it) share it with her. A lot of times when i think someone will react negatively they more often than not pleasantly surprise me. Good Luck.
Nice to see you back! and definitely tell the gf. Maybe even read it to her : ) hope to see you back soon
Hey I love your writing so. Thanks for the update and happy aniversary. I think telling my partner was the hardest thing for me. I was 15 chapters into my story before I told her about it. I made the mistake of telling someone else before I told her and well I thank God for the grace that was my partner after her initial disappointment. Now I can honestly say she thinks my writting takes away from some of our time so it is something I have had to cut back on but other than that she is my best source for a reality check. Tell it’s part of the what makes you up now and she is entitled to know.
Nice that your back stop teasing us post soon. Tell your girlfriend show her your amazing talent it is just one more thing she will love about you am sure
Please don’t stop writing! You’re gifted! You’re talented! Don’t let anyone inhibit your voice!
I think on your anniversy just before nighty nite time….you should read her a chapter. I’m confident she would like it…because you’re so freaking talented!!!!!
Kick her a** to the curb.
Just kidding!
Back to the story…
Good chapter, they are so cute together. Post soon!