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And it started with a phone call Chapter 9
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What do you want for breakfast? Bette asked.
What do you have to choose from?
Well if youd like to dine in this morning, I can offer you some stale bread and sour milk, Bette began. Or you may wish to sample one of the many fine West Hollywood Sunday Brunches, complete with your choice of juice, coffee included.
Oooh, tough callI think Ill go with one of the brunches, Tina replied.
An excellent choice, Bette reached for the cell phone beside the bed and turned it on. She hit one of the codes on her speed dial and awaited an answer.
Hi, Jason its Bette Porter calling, she said into the phone. Id like to reserve a table for brunch this morning. Is 11 oclock available? Great. No, actually itll only be for two this week. Thanks. She then disconnected the call.
Breakfast will be served at 11, she said with a smile.
Do you always manage to get reservations an hour and a half before you want them? Tina inquired.
I frequent a restaurant or two around here, Bette replied. A few of the maitre ds have gotten to know me.
You must work out like crazy to be able to eat in restaurants so much, Tina said.
I think our activities over the last two days will have to serve as my workout this weekend, Bette began. We have to build our energy back up for the work week. Dont want to drag in Monday morning, do we?
Lets not talk about Monday yet, okay?
We have the whole day ahead of us, Bette said. What would you like to do?
After breakfast can we just come back here and relax? Tina asked. We didnt really spend any time together by the pool yesterday like we originally planned.
Sounds like a perfect afternoon to me, Bette smiled and squeezed Tina tightly into her embrace. If were going to make our reservation, we should start getting ready to go. Do you want to shower first?
Sure, Tina replied. Just one more minute though, okay? She closed her eyes and enjoyed being held, hearing Bettes quiet breathing as she rested on her chest.
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Tina stepped out of the bathroom and into Bettes bedroom wrapped only in a towel. Bette, having slipped on a bathrobe, was leaning back against the pillows stacked behind her on the bed as she marked up a contract with a red pen. She looked up as she heard Tina enter the room.
I didnt know you wore glasses, Tina remarked, on seeing Bette perusing the contract.
Just for reading, Bette remarked as she removed them and set the contract aside. Upon glancing up at Tina, her mind had completely wandered from the content of the page she had just read. Come here.
Tina walked over to the side of the bed as Bette swung her legs around to sit on the edge.
Bette, we have to get going, Tina reminded her.
I know, Im reluctantly leaving your towel where it is, Bette replied. I wanted to ask you something though. She reached to interlace her fingers with Tinas.
Tina nodded her head, inviting Bettes question.
I dont know if Im going to have any time this week to see you, Bette began. What do you think of planning to spend next weekend together?
I think that can be arranged, Tina responded. You dont think youll have any spare time during the week?
Maybe a lunch?
A long lunch? Tina smiled at the implication of what such a lunch might include.
Bette released one of Tinas hands and let her own hand slide up the outside of Tinas thigh under the edge of the towel.
Seriously? Tina said the word as a question, hopeful Bette was teasing.
Bette read Tinas reluctance in her tone, and stopped the progress of her hand.
Im going to go shower, she said. It looks like a perfect day to relax and talk.
Bette rose from the bed and walked toward the bathroom while Tina dressed for the day.
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First: Great chapter. Thank you and like Tina I’m hoping you can find time in your days for us (Please post as soon as you can)
Second: If you want to share your FF and your talent w/ you GF then do so. If you want to keep it for yourself then I don’t think you HAVE to tell her. However if you do and she isn’t receptive and positive about something you obviously enjoy and are talented at…well… then you have other problems that are bigger than this issue.
Be happy and Just Keep Swimming : )
Nice to have an update on this – as usual great writing, I love it. As for your gf and your writing, if you want to keep it for yourself then you should. You don’t have to share everything, sometimes it’s good to have something just for you.
Caught up on all your chapters and I really like this story. About your partner not knowing, I haven’t told mine either. Don’t get me wrong, I will, but want to keep it to myself for a while. Congratulations on the anniversary, may you both be blessed with many more.
uh oh. is tina going to get it that bette is kinda a freak when it comes to work. hope bette remembers to put it into perspective. have enjoyed your stories. i would also tell the gf about your writing. she might have some ideas or comments. keep posting.
great update! happy anniversary 2! :)
very good as usual. as for whether or not you should tell your girlfriend- ultimately- your decision, so just do what feels right. good luck.
If you were my lover and told me about JKS and I read your work, I would be super turned on and you would get the licking of your life on our anniversary! Hope that happens to u!!!
So good to see you! Thanks for the update.
I was about 4 months into writing my one and only fan fic when my wife “found out”. A fan sent an e-mail to our joint account. I thought she would think it was stupid, compulsive, and a total waste of time…I thought wrong. She was so incredibly supportive and really validated my writing. I ended up dedicating “my skin is painfully new” to her. I was sorry that I didn’t trust her enough with this part of me. After she starting reading, I began lacing the stories with inside jokes and references that only she would understand. It became a fun adventure.
Everyone is different, so I’m just giving you one “ripped from the headlines” real life experience.
Good luck!
What no showering together……
Bittersweet chapter, also. Best to you on the anniversary.
I am sure your girlfriend will be delighted to appreciate the revelation of your skills, it may lead to a very Happy anniversary indeed !
Thank you swim, touching as always, I am sure Tina will effortlessly weave her way into her days, love has that effect.
JKS…welcome back! I was just sitting here wondering where you’d been. But I understand the real life interfering sometimes, and hope you find time to write some more when things calm down a bit. :) If it were me, I would probably tell the gf about the writing…Happy Anniversary, by the way!
Hey HAPPY ANNIVERSARY JKS! Thanks for posted again I’m still love your Story I’m just gonna wait then to the next chapter Please post soon.
K
Great chapter as always. I think you should tell the gfriend about the ff. No secrets :)
Sweet chapter. As far as your gf… if she reads FF already, then tell her. If she doesn’t, have her read a few and if she’s still negative about it, I wouldn’t tell her.
great chapter JKS..i love it..and about your little secret..lol..i think you have to tell your GF she is going to be so excited…in my case i would love if my GF was a writer and read all the chapters for me first..lol.amazing chapter please post soon :-)
Sweet chapter, JKS! Wishing you well on your anniversary :)
Thought of your story this morning and…click, there you were. Great addition, as always. Looked for your email address but……I wouldn’t tell her – your writing is yours, solitary and yours. Just the way you phrased it leads me to believe she wouldn’t be supportive……
Hey Fins, Happy Anniversary…is it a big one? Tough call on whether to tell…if she is your soul mate, then you must, but from what you said, she might be unsupportive (although I’m not sure how…your writing is so great!!). Anyway, good luck and we expect to hear how things turn out, please don’t keep us waiting too long!
I don’t leave comments as often as i should. I enjot your writining ans story line. tell your girlfriend…it’s obvious you enjoy writing (and your good at it) share it with her. A lot of times when i think someone will react negatively they more often than not pleasantly surprise me. Good Luck.
Nice to see you back! and definitely tell the gf. Maybe even read it to her : ) hope to see you back soon
Hey I love your writing so. Thanks for the update and happy aniversary. I think telling my partner was the hardest thing for me. I was 15 chapters into my story before I told her about it. I made the mistake of telling someone else before I told her and well I thank God for the grace that was my partner after her initial disappointment. Now I can honestly say she thinks my writting takes away from some of our time so it is something I have had to cut back on but other than that she is my best source for a reality check. Tell it’s part of the what makes you up now and she is entitled to know.
Nice that your back stop teasing us post soon. Tell your girlfriend show her your amazing talent it is just one more thing she will love about you am sure
Please don’t stop writing! You’re gifted! You’re talented! Don’t let anyone inhibit your voice!
I think on your anniversy just before nighty nite time….you should read her a chapter. I’m confident she would like it…because you’re so freaking talented!!!!!
Kick her a** to the curb.
Just kidding!
Back to the story…
Good chapter, they are so cute together. Post soon!