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And it started with a phone call chapter 10
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Tina finished dressing while Bette showered. She couldnt help being annoyed at Bettes comment regarding her inability to make time for Tina during the upcoming week. Shed managed to make time for her almost daily for the last three weeks, but now that they had spent the entire weekend in bed, all of a sudden the priorities had shifted. Is this the kind of response Tina could typically expect from Bette? She really didnt know how to react.
Just as she was pondering the situation, she was pulled from her thoughts with the ringing of the phone. She briefly contemplated answering it, but felt odd at how she would respond to who might be on the other end. She let the ringing continue and the machine picked up on the fourth ring.
Hey guys, its Alice the disembodied voice floated from the speaker of the machine in the hall just outside Bettes bedroom. Im sorry to call, but its important, so if you hear this, could you pick up the
Hi Alice, Tina began. Bettes in the shower.
And how are you two lovebirds this morning, asked Alice.
There was a distinct pause before Tina spoke. She didnt really have anyone to talk to about this situation. But did she really feel comfortable in confiding with Alice when she really knew so little of her? And to convolute matters further, she was Bettes friend. Ultimately, Tina felt she had to process this a bit, and took the plunge.
To be honest Alice, Bette has really pissed me off this morning, Tina blurted out.
That was definitely not the response Alice was expecting when she asked her question, but it was obvious Tina needed to talk about somethingand not surprisingly, Bette had apparently done something thoughtless.
Whats going on Tina? Alice settled into the corner of her couch, willing to lend an ear, and provide what support she could.
Tina went on to relay the conversation she had just shared with Bette.
I feel as though I could stand a little support right now, Tina began. She has all of a sudden relegated me to a lower position on her priority list than when we werent sleeping together.
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I love this story keep it coming.
having just caught up on all your stories. i really didn’t know much about you. but my mouth did drop at the mention of your husband. lol. i’ve enjoyed all your stories and this one in particular. bette really did drop the ball. needs to pull her head out and al, what can ya say about her. good job. keep posting. thanks.
Okay. I fell for it–hook, line and sinker. That was just, just, just MEAN!
Hope the anniversary was fabulous! Good for you!
My mouth dropped open when I read your authors comments. I couldn’t believe what forward thinking and understanding husband and girlfriend you must have. Then I kept reading and almost wet myself I was laughing so hard :).
Great post by the way!
Hey Fins, great chapter. Sometimes, Bette is just thoughtless, it seems to be in her nature, but I am glad that Tina called her on it. Bette just needs the obvious pointed out to her. Have a great time in Canada. Looking forward to your next, long post!!!
you had my jaw-dropped!!!!!!!! i was readin over and over again…thinkin to myself WTF?! LMAO~!!! you got me there! oo~glad your anniversary went well…enjoy your trip to Toronto. do post soon!!
Wow! You really know how to get people’s attention, HUH?! Ya Freak!Too funny! Thanks for a great chapter!
…well done mate!
Yeah I have a husband too!! I go to him and put this plastic card in and he gives me money. HAHA that was funny, glad you and your girl are good with the story thing.
Funny!!!!!!!!!!! have a good time post soon
HAHAHA! JKS…I mean this in the nicest way, but you’re an ass! I’m LMAO right now…your ‘husband’ – oh, will have to go back and read your story as soon as I’m done laughing! BTW – glad all went well on your anniv ;)
Alice is in trouble.I love this BandT beginning.
Bette….Bette….Bette. Don’t take it out on Alice, it’s not her fault that you made T feel like crap. Nicely done.
I had my mouth open about the husband comment. I thought that you must really have an open relationship. LOL!
When I read Bette’s statement from the last chapter – that they’d have to wait until the weekend to get together – I thought, “Big deal. What’s the problem?”
This chapter explains Tina’s isolation very well.
Thank you for making her dilemma and pain palpable.
As for you and your GF/Husband contretemps, I’m just going to assume that you temporarily took leave of your
senses when you wrote that note.
The fic is still among the best on here – and that’s what counts. Girlfriend, husband, editor, no editor, whatever it takes! It’s obviously working for you. And for us.
Thanks for another well-written chapter! Enjoy Toronto!
That was so well done. Yes Alice stuck her foot in it but Bette left it out there in the first place. Well done. Thanks and have a great trip. Travel safe.
I like Canadians.
totally diggin the story!
I’m glad Bette was able to understand where Tina was at and was willing to make some adjustments. Thanks for writing and enjoy Toronto.
K
Great chapter, love it as always.
“I’m a bit of a prankster” I’ll say!
OMG, I read that “husband” line over 5 times thinking to myself WTF? Internet freak! lol I’m glad you just have a grilfriend and I’m also very happy that she appreciated her lady’s talents!!
I’m laughing so hard. your husband/girlfriend story had me confused then…i LMAO! great job on the chapter too.
Good chapter. Alice is in big trouble Bette will kick her ass. Post soon!