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And it started with a phone call chapter 10
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You know you can talk to me Tina, Alice said. Just believe me when I say someday it wont seem so weird to you, okay?
For now Im going to have to take your word on that, Tina replied. I have to go.
She still hadnt managed to figure anything out with respect to Bettes reluctance to spend time with her in the upcoming week. And now she had come across this rather disconcerting piece of history. Her mind was not in fact becoming more settled as the weekend progressed, rather it seemed she had invited some degree of chaos into her life.
She gathered her things together and started packing them in her overnight bag. Her bathing suit was still hanging outside where she left it to dry the previous evening. She walked into the bathroom to retrieve her make-up bag just as Bette was stepping out of the shower, her towel wrapped underneath her arms.
Bette smiled broadly as Tina entered the bathroom
Could I get a good morning kiss? Bette asked as she tightened the towel around her chest.
Tina decided she wasnt just going to let herself stew about the issues that had been brought up that morning. She had no one to talk to, and didnt really have any choice but to talk to Bette.
Im not sure Im in the mood to give you a kiss this morning, Bette, Tina replied.
Bette thought this statement had really come out of nowhere, and simply stood with a perplexed look on her face waiting for Tina to tell her why she was upset.
Tina laid her thoughts bare at Bettes silence.
Youve had nothing but time for me for the last three weeks, Bette, and now that Ive accepted and acted on the feelings Ive had for you, youre pulling away.
Bette knew that Tina was angry, even though her voice relayed a hurt with the tone. She did her best to be understanding, regardless of her initial inclination to be merely defensive at what she perceived to be an outburst.
Let me put my robe on and well go in the bedroom and talk, okay? she suggested. She needed a moment to wonder at what had changed in the last 15 minutes that created Tinas shift in mood. Tina left the bathroom to sit on the bench overlooking the bay window of the bedroom. Bette quickly towel dried her hair and grabbed her robe to replace the towel.
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I love this story keep it coming.
having just caught up on all your stories. i really didn’t know much about you. but my mouth did drop at the mention of your husband. lol. i’ve enjoyed all your stories and this one in particular. bette really did drop the ball. needs to pull her head out and al, what can ya say about her. good job. keep posting. thanks.
Okay. I fell for it–hook, line and sinker. That was just, just, just MEAN!
Hope the anniversary was fabulous! Good for you!
My mouth dropped open when I read your authors comments. I couldn’t believe what forward thinking and understanding husband and girlfriend you must have. Then I kept reading and almost wet myself I was laughing so hard :).
Great post by the way!
Hey Fins, great chapter. Sometimes, Bette is just thoughtless, it seems to be in her nature, but I am glad that Tina called her on it. Bette just needs the obvious pointed out to her. Have a great time in Canada. Looking forward to your next, long post!!!
you had my jaw-dropped!!!!!!!! i was readin over and over again…thinkin to myself WTF?! LMAO~!!! you got me there! oo~glad your anniversary went well…enjoy your trip to Toronto. do post soon!!
Wow! You really know how to get people’s attention, HUH?! Ya Freak!Too funny! Thanks for a great chapter!
…well done mate!
Yeah I have a husband too!! I go to him and put this plastic card in and he gives me money. HAHA that was funny, glad you and your girl are good with the story thing.
Funny!!!!!!!!!!! have a good time post soon
HAHAHA! JKS…I mean this in the nicest way, but you’re an ass! I’m LMAO right now…your ‘husband’ – oh, will have to go back and read your story as soon as I’m done laughing! BTW – glad all went well on your anniv ;)
Alice is in trouble.I love this BandT beginning.
Bette….Bette….Bette. Don’t take it out on Alice, it’s not her fault that you made T feel like crap. Nicely done.
I had my mouth open about the husband comment. I thought that you must really have an open relationship. LOL!
When I read Bette’s statement from the last chapter – that they’d have to wait until the weekend to get together – I thought, “Big deal. What’s the problem?”
This chapter explains Tina’s isolation very well.
Thank you for making her dilemma and pain palpable.
As for you and your GF/Husband contretemps, I’m just going to assume that you temporarily took leave of your
senses when you wrote that note.
The fic is still among the best on here – and that’s what counts. Girlfriend, husband, editor, no editor, whatever it takes! It’s obviously working for you. And for us.
Thanks for another well-written chapter! Enjoy Toronto!
That was so well done. Yes Alice stuck her foot in it but Bette left it out there in the first place. Well done. Thanks and have a great trip. Travel safe.
I like Canadians.
totally diggin the story!
I’m glad Bette was able to understand where Tina was at and was willing to make some adjustments. Thanks for writing and enjoy Toronto.
K
Great chapter, love it as always.
“I’m a bit of a prankster” I’ll say!
OMG, I read that “husband” line over 5 times thinking to myself WTF? Internet freak! lol I’m glad you just have a grilfriend and I’m also very happy that she appreciated her lady’s talents!!
I’m laughing so hard. your husband/girlfriend story had me confused then…i LMAO! great job on the chapter too.
Good chapter. Alice is in big trouble Bette will kick her ass. Post soon!