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Twisted Triangles ch.10
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Previously:
“Hey Christina, that bartender over there was asking about you.” What was her name again? Oh thats right Cher Good Lord, so LA. Thats so bad its funny. So I laughed. I laughed really loudly and instead of joining in, she gave me this death glare. Dont ask me why. Sure they didnt know why I was laughing like an *****. But come on. Cher.
She opened her mouth, to say something but Eric spoke first. He looked really pissed.
“Hey, Tina, you want to go dance now?” What did I say. He practically yanked her up with him. When he looked back at me he gave me this youre such an ***** hurt look. I dont know what I did or what he had said to her before I got here. But it couldnt be good. ***** Im doing it again. Im driving him away. The look may have been short, but it always speaks to me. I have to stop doing this to him.
Our first NIght in WeHo pt. 5: Bette pt. 3 *****. I know he hates me now. This girl, something about her is already making him crazy and a little too mean for my taste.
“Oh no, what did he do now?” Alice, great this is exactly what I need right now.
“What are you talking about?” Maybe shell back off if I act dumb.
“That look on your face. It looks like somebody just kicked your puppy.” Now theres an image. So much for her backing off. “Do you want to talk about it?”
“No. Theres nothing to talk about Al.” I really dont want to have this conversation with Shane here. I just met her. She doesnt have to know that my relationship with my twin brother is rocky (to put it mildly) when it comes to women.
“Ok, can I say one thing then?” As if I could stop you.
“As if she could stop you.” Shane piped in before returning to her drink. Damn she is good.
“Please go ahead.” I sigh. Damn what now? Please dont say something stupid, please dont say something stupid.
“You know shes off limits, rights?”
“WHAT?!” Is all I can get out. Her, are you kidding me.
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Damn, that was way good dirl! I cannot wait for more you really hit both characters b & t with the POV..Love it!
WOO! That was incredible! And funny? Uh…YEAH! It craked me up! I loved the part where Bette said ‘…if you asked me what my name was I couldn’t tell you. Yes I could, it would be: ‘Tina’s Bitch.’ LMAO!!! You are a riot Laurelite! Ths story is priceless! Keep up the good work!
Moonshadow is right..funny. Bette being “Tina’s Bitch” Hilarious. great story. post soon
Have read all the chapters and had to comment. I love this story. I am glad you posted you made my day and as working in a club, I totally can feel how a great descripion between the two as i see it on a reg basis. Please post soon!!
K
I agree with the others, very funny and hot. Love this. Can’t wait for more.
Hey I’m still catching up reading Whoa! I love it Tina Bitch LOL! Yes that was so funny Please post soon.
Good chapter. This is so funny Bette’s Tina’s bitch, and hot on the dance floor. Can’t wait to see Tina call Bette. Post soon, thanks!
great!!!!!!!!!!!!! please post soon
Phew! Is it me or is it hot in here?
Absolutely superb, let the foreplay continue.
da onlyest thing i can say GOD DAMN!!! i have never read such a beautiful and pants watering story please 4 da luv of dis site write sum more. GOD DAMN!!!!