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one consenting adult part 7 ( sequel to parenting)
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Two weeks later…
Her plane landed ten minutes ago and she still hasn’t come through the gate. I had scanned the crowd of passengers walking by hoping to catch a glimpse of her black hair when a hand grabbed my shoulder. I was about to curse the person when I saw it was her.
“Hey gurl.”
She stood 5’3″ in a pair of jeans and sneakers with her infamous navy blue Columbia college sweatshirt tied around her waist. I was so happy to see her that I picked her up in a bear hug.
“Hey…hey,” she laughed in my ear.
I inhaled her bananary scent and held on tighter.
“I’m happy to see you, too,” she hugged back,”Do you think you can put me down now?”
“Sorry,” I said setting her on her feet.
I grabbed her hand glad to have her there with me. She reached up and wiped away a stray tear.
“Are you alright?” she asked me.
“I’m fine. I just miss home, that’s all,” I said smiling.
“We won’t talk about it now but we will later.”
“Huh?”
“Serena, you always were a terrible liar,” she laughed squeezing my hand.
I joined her.
*****
We sat in our pyjamas on the bed looking through our high school yearbook.
“Has it really been nine years?” I asked sipping on red wine.
“Yup. And I’m sure Amanda Goodenow is already hard at work planning next year’s reunion,” Ronnie added hiccupping.
“Oh, sorry,” she said covering her mouth and then laughing.
We laughed uncontrollably for ten minutes… about nothing. We laid in each others arms trying to catch our breaths.
“I always wondering it never worked out between us,” Ronnie said to me stroking my hair.
“For one thing… you’re straight.”
“That’s just a huge oversight.”
I laughed.
“We make each other laugh. We’re always there for each other. Through thick and thin…”
“That’s why we’re best friends. You know everything about me. The good, the bad…”
“And the ugly,” Ronnie finished tickling me.
“No more. Please no more,” I pleaded.
“Say uncle… say uncle.”
I squirmed trying to get away from her fingers. I gave up.
“Okay, okay. Uncle!,” I screamed.
I collapsed in her arms again. I sighed and then let out a big yawn.
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great update! serena’s friend is funny! hope you update soon!
K
Great chapter. I like your story. I hope you ignore the negative remarks. Can’t wait for more.
Serena prepare yourself for Porter charm..cuz Evan it trully a Porter..lol..cant wait for more..
So, Tina is going to be complicit in hooking her daughter up with a pedophile.
Thanks.
techgal if u dont like the story dont read but others do so ssshh
Evan, now 18, Serena, 27. Hmm, very close to B&T’s 7 or 8 year assumed age difference. Will be interesting to see B&T’s reaction…
p.s. jumping back in the shallow end… Evan still has the car, right? ;-)
Who’s giving you less than five stars it’s not me. I enjoy your story. But I just wanted to point out since Evan is now 18…then the story line is no longer about one consenting adult.lol
For all you guys complaining deal with it,and stop with the BITCHING.FABULOUS CHAPTER..PLEASE POST SOON…THANK YOU….
THANK YOU for continuing this story, You have a lot of fans regarless if they post it or not…take your time and get back into your grove…we’ll be waiting more installments that’s for sure…Bring on the 5 stars!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Glad to see you post in both your stories, I enjoy both very much. Thanks and updat very sooooon!
please don’t punish us for the negative comment made by others, i luv your story, please, please continue soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
This story is great RunawayTee please keep adding to it. From my perspective 16 is legal now in UK so no prob there and from what I read its Evan that is pushing Serena not the other way round. oh and we all have dreams don’t we and we have no control over what we dream about so get a grip ladies its a story let Runawaytee take it where she will. Do you read the first chapters of a book then call the author and complain or do you read all of it? to see where they go with the story. PLEASE PLEASE POST AGAIN ON THIS STORY SOON I Love the way you write your characters and love the friend – You keep posting please
Hey RunawayTee – where r u babe – I keep checking to see if you have updated this story but nothing – please please post again I really want to read more of this story. Please – I’m begging now !!! and my knees are getting sore!
well i was really excited to see that you had posted! i’m sorry you came under a bit of fire, but you weathered it well and i think this was a great chapter! i look forward to the next :) ps-let evan come to the club!!!
Nice way you have managed to bridge the change in your character’s age. I wonder if any of the woman at the table ever had a crush on an older woman. If they can remember that, maybe they will be able to understand Evan’s crush on Serena. Even though Evan is no longer jailbait, it will still be difficult for Serena to reconcile her feelings for someone considerably younger than she is. Plus, there’s the Bette and Tina factor to consider. Tina might be okay with Evan going out to a club at 18, but Bette would probably have a much different take on it. As may Tina once she thinks about it. Interesting angle on what drive’s people to be attracted to each other.
I’m so glad you posted. I had been looing for an update for a couple of days and started thinking that maybe all the haters had gotten to you. Glad to see that it wasn’t the case. Keep up the good work. I love this story.
Yippy!!! So glad you are continuing this story. Still LOVING it!
really loving this story, please post soon.
Please update this story.I miss it and I bet others do also.
PLEASE………PLEASE…..PLEASE…PLEASE IGNORE THE NEGATIVE REMARKS BOUT YOUR STORY I THINK IT’S LUVELY……..DUN MAKE ME WAIT……DUN SUBJECT ME 2 TORTUE!…KEEP WRITING….IT’S JUS 2 GOOD 2 STOP……..SOOO..PLEASE CONTINUE THIS KEEP IT UP…….PLEASE!!POST SOON!!…..