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one consenting adult part 7 ( sequel to parenting)
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“I think it’s time for bed.”
“The light switch is on your side,” I said.
I waited until she turned off the light before I snuggled into her side.
“Sweet dreams, baby,” she said.
“Good night,” I said.
*****
“Is that her?” Ronnie asked standing behind me.
We stood in line at The Planet waiting to get some coffee. The gang was already sitting at they’re usual table. Evan shouted a greeting from across the room.
“Yeah.”
“You’ve got to be kiddin’ me, Serena. And she’s eighteen?”
“Yup.”
“Damn. I don’t remember girls lookin’ like that in high school.”
“Tell me about,” I sighed.
“So, we’re going over?”
“If you want?”
“Don’t turn this around on me. You want to go over there to see her as much as I want to get a close up look of her,” Ronnie said pushing me in the back.
“What can I get you ladies this morning?” asked the young man behind the counter.
He broke the spell Evan had cast over me.
*****
“Guys, this is my best friend Veronica Sessions from New York,” I introduced to the circle.
“Hi,” from Shane.
“Ronnie these are my friends… Shane, Tina, Alice, Dana, Bette and Evan,” I said pointing to each one.
“So you’re visiting Serena?” asked Alice.
“Yeah, she begged me to come out here,” Ronnie replied rolling her eyes.
“For how long?”
“Evan, right?”
“Yeah.”
“Uh, staying for two weeks.”
The look in Evan’s eyes was disappointment.
“Have you been to California before?” Tina asked.
“No, first time.”
“Then we have to show you a good time,” Alice flirted.
“She doesn’t swing that way, Al,” I informed.
“No, I don’t. But you are awfully cute,” Ronnie smiled.
“Stop that,” I elbowed.
“She’s taken anyway,” Dana said putting her arm around Alice’s shoulder.
“Since when?” Alice asked Dana.
The group leaned in wanting to hear Dana’s answer.
“Since… since… let’s just forget about it,” Dana chickened out.
“Yeah, so, anyway… let’s hit the town tonight,” Alice suggested.
“Sounds like a good idea,” Shane agreed.
“Can I go?” Evan asked.
“What? You want to hang out with your parents?” Tina asked sarcastically.
“Moooommm.”
“No,” Bette said immediately.
“C’mon Bette, she’s eighteen now. She can hang with us,” Alice argued.
“Not at the clubs, she can’t.”
“Yeah she can. They allow under twenty ones to come in and party. She just won’t be able to get any alcohol,” Shane answered.
“And how would you know this, Shane?” Dana asked.
“I’ve run into a few of them,” she smiled sheepishly.
“That’s make it a definite no,” Bette repeated.
“I’ll work on her,” Tina told Evan.
‘Please don’t let Bette be persuaded by Tina. I can’t handle seeing Evan tonight,” I thought to myself.
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great update! serena’s friend is funny! hope you update soon!
K
Great chapter. I like your story. I hope you ignore the negative remarks. Can’t wait for more.
Serena prepare yourself for Porter charm..cuz Evan it trully a Porter..lol..cant wait for more..
So, Tina is going to be complicit in hooking her daughter up with a pedophile.
Thanks.
techgal if u dont like the story dont read but others do so ssshh
Evan, now 18, Serena, 27. Hmm, very close to B&T’s 7 or 8 year assumed age difference. Will be interesting to see B&T’s reaction…
p.s. jumping back in the shallow end… Evan still has the car, right? ;-)
Who’s giving you less than five stars it’s not me. I enjoy your story. But I just wanted to point out since Evan is now 18…then the story line is no longer about one consenting adult.lol
For all you guys complaining deal with it,and stop with the BITCHING.FABULOUS CHAPTER..PLEASE POST SOON…THANK YOU….
THANK YOU for continuing this story, You have a lot of fans regarless if they post it or not…take your time and get back into your grove…we’ll be waiting more installments that’s for sure…Bring on the 5 stars!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Glad to see you post in both your stories, I enjoy both very much. Thanks and updat very sooooon!
please don’t punish us for the negative comment made by others, i luv your story, please, please continue soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
This story is great RunawayTee please keep adding to it. From my perspective 16 is legal now in UK so no prob there and from what I read its Evan that is pushing Serena not the other way round. oh and we all have dreams don’t we and we have no control over what we dream about so get a grip ladies its a story let Runawaytee take it where she will. Do you read the first chapters of a book then call the author and complain or do you read all of it? to see where they go with the story. PLEASE PLEASE POST AGAIN ON THIS STORY SOON I Love the way you write your characters and love the friend – You keep posting please
Hey RunawayTee – where r u babe – I keep checking to see if you have updated this story but nothing – please please post again I really want to read more of this story. Please – I’m begging now !!! and my knees are getting sore!
well i was really excited to see that you had posted! i’m sorry you came under a bit of fire, but you weathered it well and i think this was a great chapter! i look forward to the next :) ps-let evan come to the club!!!
Nice way you have managed to bridge the change in your character’s age. I wonder if any of the woman at the table ever had a crush on an older woman. If they can remember that, maybe they will be able to understand Evan’s crush on Serena. Even though Evan is no longer jailbait, it will still be difficult for Serena to reconcile her feelings for someone considerably younger than she is. Plus, there’s the Bette and Tina factor to consider. Tina might be okay with Evan going out to a club at 18, but Bette would probably have a much different take on it. As may Tina once she thinks about it. Interesting angle on what drive’s people to be attracted to each other.
I’m so glad you posted. I had been looing for an update for a couple of days and started thinking that maybe all the haters had gotten to you. Glad to see that it wasn’t the case. Keep up the good work. I love this story.
Yippy!!! So glad you are continuing this story. Still LOVING it!
really loving this story, please post soon.
Please update this story.I miss it and I bet others do also.
PLEASE………PLEASE…..PLEASE…PLEASE IGNORE THE NEGATIVE REMARKS BOUT YOUR STORY I THINK IT’S LUVELY……..DUN MAKE ME WAIT……DUN SUBJECT ME 2 TORTUE!…KEEP WRITING….IT’S JUS 2 GOOD 2 STOP……..SOOO..PLEASE CONTINUE THIS KEEP IT UP…….PLEASE!!POST SOON!!…..