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Broken Girls with Strange Frames (Ch. 18)
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Chapter 18: More Tangible, Something
I studied the little chart I’d made and thought about how much better it would look if there was a direct line between my name and Bette’s. Unsure of how to proceed next, really, I decided to keep talking. “Uh, look.”
Bette looked.
“I can put other names on it, too.” I scrawled Kyle’s name on the napkin, and Bette looked a little bit sick.
“Please don’t tell me you’ve slept with Kyle.”
“No,” I laughed. “But I’ve slept with Billy,” and I wrote Billy’s name and connected it with mine, “and Billy’s slept with Kyle.” I connected their names.
Bette put her pamphlet down and craned her neck, trying to study the chart properly. She tapped it. “Who’s slept with Spencer.”
“Right.” I connected Kyle and Spencer. “And Spencer, actually,” I went on, writing, “has slept with this girl Gina, who lives in our building. Who-” I made one more line-”has slept with Tamara.”
“Huh,” Bette said, picking up the napkin and inspecting it for a minute. She tossed it back down. “It’s a little incestuous.”
“It’s a little weird,” I agreed.
“I mean, by your assertions, I’m connected to Kyle. I don’t want to be connected to Kyle.”
“Forget about being connected to Kyle.”
“I am trying.”
“It’s just a connection.” I doodled on the edge of the napkin. “They’re just…”
“Random acts of *****,” Bette finished.
“Right,” I agreed. “Just random-”
“I mean, it’s almost offensive that a relationship I had with Colleen for six months is being treated the same as one night Spencer and Kyle may have had.”
“But the thing with Spencer and Kyle,” I argued, “is that sure, they slept together once, but they have this powerful, sort of passionate relationship that they’ve had for awhile now. I mean, they should be connected regardless.”
“By those calculations,” Bette mused, “there should be a direct line between you and me.”
“I-what?”
Her eyes trained on the napkin between us, Bette leaned forward and slowly flicked her eyes up to meet mine. “I mean, I’ve wanted to sleep with you since the first moment I met you.”
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damm she got the brush off big time, poor alice
Little miss lucky, abashed, “Portered”. Alice. Imagine as I’m sure many of us have the dominance that is Bette. Good lord, that vision is as viscerally hot as hot can be and this aspect of Bette has been written so well here.. biding my time until the next…
I hope Alice has some situation in her life where she has some power, because Bette holds all the cards in this relationship, except maybe in her need for consolation about Kit.
I wonder how Tina got Bette to commit? I’d love to hear your take on that. But not now – I’m enjoying this rare, rare fic about Bettte and Alice. Wonderful!
Oh, Rachel. I would read this over my X-men comic any day.
Let us sink into this wonderful image of a completely, utterly, and powerfully dominant Bette in all her hotness.
And then let’s look at the pretty way you wrote it. So perfect. Revise faster and post the next one.
Isn’t Alice a little bit in love after all?
Awww…Bette’s gettin’ some booty, but I think Alice is signing some ME, “I wanna be in love.”
Jusy playing catch up with your last few chapters i cant tell you how much im enjoying them and so funny too i really love the way you tell this through Alice and you have Bette (pre Tina) down so well keep it comin Thanks
Bette does seem to be quite attentive sexually. But is it out of true caring or fear of failure and the need to be in control?
The little bit of neediness that is creeping in from Alice is what’s going to be the demise of their relationship. It will be interesting to see what shifts to change Bette into the person that Tina can wrap around her little finger.
This is so well written. I really feel for Alice. She’s in so deep and trying so hard not to be. Your Bette is just amazing, she makes perfect sense, exactly how one would imagine her to be, pre-Tina. It would be fun watching her fall for Tina.
Great erotic writing too and way to make a sex scene say something more. I thought this was excellent
“It’s okay,” she breathed in my ear, “let it go,” and I came hard, once from her actions and once again from just the idea of it, this headboard against the wall, this rumpled display of sheets, and Bette’s name on my tongue. I clenched and unclenched around her fingers and drew her as deep as I could, as deep as she would go.
Once again techgal has taken all of my thoughts *rasies eyebrow*
I’d like to see Alice with some power one day, but with the way the show is going I highly doubt we will see it any time soon. I do wonder what about Tina made Bette settle down and lose the power at times… perhaps we shall see?
for real cr00 said it all she like couldnt get out of bed fast enuff..whats up with that!!
yeah halfofone the manner in which Rach wrote that was really hot……….*brrr shiver me timbers*
woooooah.. really well-written sex scene.