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Broken Girls with Strange Frames (Ch. 18)
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I could feel my mouth getting dry. “Y-you have?”
“And you,” Bette went on, refusing to break eye contact, “have wanted to sleep with me from the first moment you met me.”
“I-”
She straightened. “Don’t you think that qualifies for a line?” She gestured to someone behind me. “Can we get the check, please?”
Or I think that’s what she said. Because there was this loud, pleasant roaring in my ears that made it difficult to hear anything.
I fumbled with the top button of Bette’s jeans as she steered me backwards into the apartment, kicking the door closed with her foot. Our lips met; she tore at my shirt. I managed to get the zipper down on her jeans and worked my hands inside, rounding her *****, and she tore her lips away, stilling my hands with hers.
“Where’s the bedroom?”
Bedroom? I have a bedroom? I wracked my brain. It was a small apartment. There were only so many rooms. Bette trailed her fingers underneath my t-shirt and I willed my brain to shed its numbness.
“Uh…”
She moved me backwards slowly, lifted my t-shirt over my head. “Is it that one?” she asked, bending to capture my lips again.
“Yeah,” I mumbled. It could be the bathroom for all I ***** cared.
She opened the door for me and stood there, watching me as I slid past her into the bedroom. “Bette,” I said, as I sat on the bed. She followed me. Her eyes were dark. The mid-afternoon sun slept behind the drawn curtains of my bedroom and the shadows were revealing and reticent all at the same time.
She lowered me back on the mattress, one hand on either side of my head, her lips parted mere inches from mine. “Yes.”
“Is this…” I trailed off. She pulled the zipper of my jeans down in an agonizingly slow manner, a lazy smile drifting across her features. My hand found itself under her top, on the small of her back, urging her as she pressed me into the mattress. She kissed me again, her tongue sought entrance to my mouth and I took her in. And it just seemed to make sense-that I should lay back and shut up and let her take control.
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damm she got the brush off big time, poor alice
Little miss lucky, abashed, “Portered”. Alice. Imagine as I’m sure many of us have the dominance that is Bette. Good lord, that vision is as viscerally hot as hot can be and this aspect of Bette has been written so well here.. biding my time until the next…
I hope Alice has some situation in her life where she has some power, because Bette holds all the cards in this relationship, except maybe in her need for consolation about Kit.
I wonder how Tina got Bette to commit? I’d love to hear your take on that. But not now – I’m enjoying this rare, rare fic about Bettte and Alice. Wonderful!
Oh, Rachel. I would read this over my X-men comic any day.
Let us sink into this wonderful image of a completely, utterly, and powerfully dominant Bette in all her hotness.
And then let’s look at the pretty way you wrote it. So perfect. Revise faster and post the next one.
Isn’t Alice a little bit in love after all?
Awww…Bette’s gettin’ some booty, but I think Alice is signing some ME, “I wanna be in love.”
Jusy playing catch up with your last few chapters i cant tell you how much im enjoying them and so funny too i really love the way you tell this through Alice and you have Bette (pre Tina) down so well keep it comin Thanks
Bette does seem to be quite attentive sexually. But is it out of true caring or fear of failure and the need to be in control?
The little bit of neediness that is creeping in from Alice is what’s going to be the demise of their relationship. It will be interesting to see what shifts to change Bette into the person that Tina can wrap around her little finger.
This is so well written. I really feel for Alice. She’s in so deep and trying so hard not to be. Your Bette is just amazing, she makes perfect sense, exactly how one would imagine her to be, pre-Tina. It would be fun watching her fall for Tina.
Great erotic writing too and way to make a sex scene say something more. I thought this was excellent
“It’s okay,” she breathed in my ear, “let it go,” and I came hard, once from her actions and once again from just the idea of it, this headboard against the wall, this rumpled display of sheets, and Bette’s name on my tongue. I clenched and unclenched around her fingers and drew her as deep as I could, as deep as she would go.
Once again techgal has taken all of my thoughts *rasies eyebrow*
I’d like to see Alice with some power one day, but with the way the show is going I highly doubt we will see it any time soon. I do wonder what about Tina made Bette settle down and lose the power at times… perhaps we shall see?
for real cr00 said it all she like couldnt get out of bed fast enuff..whats up with that!!
yeah halfofone the manner in which Rach wrote that was really hot……….*brrr shiver me timbers*
woooooah.. really well-written sex scene.