LesFan

Lesbian Fan Social Network

    Fan Fiction

    This story has been set to a rating of NC-17. Age verification is required to proceed.

    Age Verification

    I am years of age as of today, April 28, 2024

    Enter your current age into the field provide above. Stories with a rating of R or NC-17 may contain material not suitable for children. LesFan requires that all individuals wishing to read these stories confirm they are of at least 17 years of age. LesFan uses the MPAA rating labeling system for all stories.

    LesFan will also make a best attempt to filter profane words in stories that are not rated R or NC-17 unless the individual confirms they are of at least 17 years of age.

    LesFan uses the following rating scale for stories.






    Submit

    The Roommates – 2nd Dimension: Chapter 37

    Story written on August 4, 2005 by MoreThanSatisfied.
     Login to add story to favorites
     Login to add author to favorites
    51 votes, average: 3.98 out of 551 votes, average: 3.98 out of 551 votes, average: 3.98 out of 551 votes, average: 3.98 out of 551 votes, average: 3.98 out of 5 (51 votes, average: 3.98 out of 5)
    You need to be a registered member to rate this post.     Loading ... Loading ...
    Genre(s):
    Rating:
    fanfiction(s):
    Character(s): ,
    Number of Comments: 33
    Words: 4600
    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=55852
    Author Notes:

    Bette goes back to bed. (B&T Beginning set on college campus)

    Previously~~~~~~~~~~~~

     

    The lovers were quiet, the sound of their shallow breathing filling the room. Tina held on tightly to the woman in her arms; her heart so full of love that it was overflowing, slipping down her cheeks and landing in her girlfriend’s soft curls. They were pressed tightly together, skin to skin, and yet Tina still didn’t feel as if they were close enough. She couldn’t get close enough to Bette. Even if she could somehow unzip the soft caramel skin, slip inside next to her lover’s soul and embrace the essence of Bette, that still would not be close enough. Tina exhaled and kissed her girlfriend’s forehead one more time.

     

    She opened her mouth to express her love when a loud crash, exclamation of pain, and a noisy fall echoed from downstairs.

     

    Bette swallowed thickly over the lump in her throat and pulled a few curls behind her ear as she tip-toed toward the stairs and saw the heap of femininity crumpled at the bottom of the steps, rubbing her right ankle. A set of dark-brown eyes gazed into a pair of chocolate pools that resembled her own as recognition set in and a Bette breathlessly exhaled her older sister’s name.

     

    “Kit?”

     

    Kit winced and gave a small, pained smile as she looked up 23 stairs toward her younger sister. “Bette. Hi.”

     

    Kit let herself out and Bette locked the door behind her, before bounding back up the stairs to check on the love of her life.

     

    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

     

    Bette smiled at her girlfriend’s sleeping form before closing and locking her bedroom door, derobing and climbing into the bed. Her dark brown eyes studied her lover’s closed eyelids and she smiled at the memory of their recent lovemaking. A feeling of completeness rose up within her and she sighed contentedly, images of a life with Tina by her side flashing in her mind.

     

    And like clockwork, the dark fingers of fear and doubt began to nip at her spirit and her smile slowly faded.

     

    ‘Are we really going to be able to keep this up? I know T says she doesn’t care if her parents find out, but what if they do? Would they really pull her out of school? How in the ***** could I deal with that? What are we going to do if that happens? What if Melvin finds out? He’s already pissed about Damon and that’s just a lie covering up this truth. I know he’d totally flip out if he found out about us.’, she wondered, her brow furrowed in deep thought.

    Page 1 of 41234
    «
    FF Main Page
    »

    Comments

    3. woohoo your back MTS that was like the longest 11 days ever with out a post from you (not that I’ve been counting or anything LOL) Great chapter as always I can’t wait to see what happens next I hope Bette comes out to the rest of the family…

    6. Glad to see an update from you. I’ve been in desperate need of a MTS fix. I understand exhaustion, I’ve been enduring it too. It puts a big damper in my writing motivation! Thanks for the wonderful update!

    7. Welcome back – you are so awesome – their connection and their lust couldn’t be any more beautiful – hope they don’t have too much suffering with the coming out but they do have each other and the start of a community with alice and dana.

    9. I am still in awe of what you do with words, sentences and paragraphs. Such a loving and passionate chapter. Great job as always.

      “Pretty Girls Wear 20 Pearls, Need I Say More?” I think I have this saying on a 20 year old T-shirt.

    11. Aww, I totally understand about being exhausted…glad you’re back though hun! Your chapters make my days that much better. Thanks for another great installment…I think I need a cold shower now! :D

    12. Thank God you are back!! Do you know what it is like to wait day after day, night after night…hitting that damn refresh button…walking away from the computer, and pacing around the house, with hope that when I come back you will be there? Do you? It is painful my friend…PAINFUL!! See, and all you had to do was post another chapter, and now I can go to bed happy, and more than satisfied! That is, until the pacing starts again…oh NO!!

    13. Thank you for coming back. And what a re-entry you made. I’m still blushing at my work station. I hope no one will come and talk to me for a while =) This was very beautiful! Kiitos!

    16. A little green martian named Sam? Really?lol
      –check it out ebonics—–
      Man I can’t believe MTS is back in town. Putting her game down in the streets…doing her thang. Girl got skillz. I was really feelin this chapter. It was the shizzle.lol

    19. MTS,
      If you have a big grin then you should see mine as I see that you have posted again.
      I simply love your writing and this story.

      It takes the simplest of scenes and imbues it with authentic emotions. This is down to your articulacy and fluency with words and phrasing. The development of these characters and their relationship is slowly reveled like the ship coming into view from the horizon. Something so small takes on such scale when seen up close.
      You demonstrate a mastery of the myriad of minutiae that make up modern life. The doubts and concerns about how others will react to this pairing of souls is palpable.
      I can feel the heat from the screen and will admit to getting moist myself upon reading this sizzling and sensuous segment. To paraphrase Bette, MTS “What are you doing to me?”
      Each new chapter is a gift to relish and savor. I slowly unpeel the wrapping and value its contents. The drama unfolds seductively incarcerating my heart, body and soul.

      Another lesson in how to create a magical masterpiece has been delivered.

      Your Loyal (Eloquent) Fan
      PS – Cheers for the personal feedback as it is much appreciated.

    21. hey where have you been? I was waiting for your next chapter. you did not disappoint. I was actually going back to the beginning of the story because it was so sweet and just flows so nicely. Good job. post soon please

    28. hope your feeling better. you have left me more than satsified. lol. this was beautiful. i know how much fun it is to come out to your family, but, what if they dont so they can continue their education. and then tell them. or is that too chicken shit. thanks so much. post again real soon.

    33. Well,well,well another chapter that has left me more then satisfied. How i love this story, and i’m so glad to read that you have no plans on ending it anytime to soon. I’ve read every chapter on these two roommates and have grown to love them dearly. They are just to sweet. Keep the chapters comming i’ll be checking every day.

    Leave a Reply